FabSwingers.com forum: advice on my profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

i’ve looked at a couple of these check my profile roast my profile etc

so please can i either improve on mine or be better presented

be brutal if necessary

By *erby DomCouple
over a year ago

Ashbourne(ish) and Chesterfield(ish)

I don't think it is a bad profile but it could do with some tweaks.

Watch your capitalisation of the first letter in a sentence as the grammar police will be on to you.

I would start with the "Easy going transgendered girl who goes out in the real world and occasionally likes to get up to some mischievous fun" as the profile reads a little negative with the first couple of lines and that may put people off.

The pics are nice, I think you did well, hopefully, you will get some other ideas from others on here too.

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hey

thanks for that