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By *ociallyAwkwardMale OP   Man
36 weeks ago

glasgow

Just posting this a invitation to all to come on and look at my profile , for any spelling mistakes , out of place information layout etc ,etc .. I do this because I understand that profile page needs be pleasing for most people and would like a group or overall view of things to improve on and things to time down...... I know I cant make everyone happy but I do like believe more brains are better than one and welcome all suggested improvements .

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By *icecouple561Couple
Forum Mod
36 weeks ago

East Sussex

It seems fine to me. If I was obliged to make a criticism it would be that it's rather unfriendly to immediately say that you have a long block list. It didn't make me feel special it just made me shrug my shoulders and go into the rest of your profile with a bit of a negative attitude.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
35 weeks ago

Leeds

I agree it is negative to start a profile with mention of a block list

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By *ngry IngridWoman
35 weeks ago

Cardigan

Kisses at the end of most sentences and the 420 bit would put me of if I were meeting.

Also you need to do a quick spell check on one of your first sentences.

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By (user no longer on site)
35 weeks ago

Run your profile text via Word to pick up any spelling mistakes, or grammatical errors, there are a few.

We'd reiterate that your opening line is off putting to us, but if you're happy with it that's all that matters.

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By *arleycplWoman
35 weeks ago

Frodsham

First sentence, dom and 420 all off putting.

Asking about spelling errors and there's one in the first line, did you actually check it yourself?

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By *ociallyAwkwardMale OP   Man
35 weeks ago

glasgow


"It seems fine to me. If I was obliged to make a criticism it would be that it's rather unfriendly to immediately say that you have a long block list. It didn't make me feel special it just made me shrug my shoulders and go into the rest of your profile with a bit of a negative attitude. "

Thank you for the comment

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By *ociallyAwkwardMale OP   Man
35 weeks ago

glasgow


"I agree it is negative to start a profile with mention of a block list"

Will take this on board

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By *ociallyAwkwardMale OP   Man
35 weeks ago

glasgow


"Kisses at the end of most sentences and the 420 bit would put me of if I were meeting.

Also you need to do a quick spell check on one of your first sentences. "

Xx are because a female wrote it for me and I'm sorry about 420 we all have our vices i understand some will be OK with it others will not but not going go into the debate on regulated and unregulated vices

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By *ociallyAwkwardMale OP   Man
35 weeks ago

glasgow


"First sentence, dom and 420 all off putting.

Asking about spelling errors and there's one in the first line, did you actually check it yourself? "

Yes I actually did but how people read is different too some consider capital words or bold in some sentences hard to read etc etc I like to get feedback as I dno how I come off to others and always like ask for outsider opinion if all I have to worry about is my smoking I think I'm ok

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By *ociallyAwkwardMale OP   Man
35 weeks ago

glasgow


"First sentence, dom and 420 all off putting.

Asking about spelling errors and there's one in the first line, did you actually check it yourself? "

To make clear I'm only dominant with parters who wish that to be case safe sex only and safety words are always used

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By *eautifully TwistedWoman
35 weeks ago

Telford

It's better that you've made some changes.

I appreciate the fact that you've been honest about your vices.

You have explained what you like and the things your looking for, without being crass.

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By *dventurous fellaMan
35 weeks ago

where

Hopefully I can jump on the bandwagon here and get some advice about mine. I’m gonna read yours to get some

Ideas as people seem to have responded well to what you’ve done.

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By *eus n EuropaCouple
35 weeks ago

Norwich


"Hopefully I can jump on the bandwagon here and get some advice about mine. I’m gonna read yours to get some

Ideas as people seem to have responded well to what you’ve done. "

Not great etiquette to jump on another users post asking for profile advice

Better to start your own thread

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