FabSwingers.com forum: proof read profile please,possible revamp needed

By *piritfingers OP Man
over a year ago

isle of wight

Hey all, looking for advice on my profile and constructive criticism to help revamp it pls!!!

Ta muchly

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By *thwalescplCouple
over a year ago

brecon

Are you "youngish" or "mature"?

And lose the cock shots, ladies prefer to see who they are meeting, not what he's packing lol.

The rest is mainly bland gibberish, trying to be "all things to all people" will do you no favours, it should be about you, not what you think others want to hear.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Are you "youngish" or "mature"?

And lose the cock shots, ladies prefer to see who they are meeting, not what he's packing lol.

The rest is mainly bland gibberish, trying to be "all things to all people" will do you no favours, it should be about you, not what you think others want to hear.

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here we go again mart the last one left the day after .lol.poppyxx

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By *piritfingers OP Man
over a year ago

isle of wight

Ok cool,I'll have a rethink and define it more.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Oh no ! A tv remote control shot ! It should really be a sky remote or a lynx can

Tbh it does sound like an essay and confusing at that.

Try and make it simpler and stand out more, with more varied photos.

Think of it like a cv, people won't want to read through a long list ....

Good luck

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By *thwalescplCouple
over a year ago

brecon

"Are you "youngish" or "mature"?

And lose the cock shots, ladies prefer to see who they are meeting, not what he's packing lol.

The rest is mainly bland gibberish, trying to be "all things to all people" will do you no favours, it should be about you, not what you think others want to hear.

here we go again mart the last one left the day after .lol.poppyxx

Yes, I remember Poppy, so I was a little more.... erm.... diplomatic (hey, stop sniggering, I can do diplomatic.... occasionally!)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Are you "youngish" or "mature"?

And lose the cock shots, ladies prefer to see who they are meeting, not what he's packing lol.

The rest is mainly bland gibberish, trying to be "all things to all people" will do you no favours, it should be about you, not what you think others want to hear.

here we go again mart the last one left the day after .lol.poppyxx

Yes, I remember Poppy, so I was a little more.... erm.... diplomatic (hey, stop sniggering, I can dodiplomatic.... occasionally!)

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you can be diplomatic with me mart anytime you want to.or give it o me hard .i can take it always .lol.bad poppyxx

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By *thwalescplCouple
over a year ago

brecon

"Are you "youngish" or "mature"?

And lose the cock shots, ladies prefer to see who they are meeting, not what he's packing lol.

The rest is mainly bland gibberish, trying to be "all things to all people" will do you no favours, it should be about you, not what you think others want to hear.

here we go again mart the last one left the day after .lol.poppyxx

Yes, I remember Poppy, so I was a little more.... erm.... diplomatic (hey, stop sniggering, I can dodiplomatic.... occasionally!)

you can be diplomatic with me mart anytime you want to.or give it o me hard .i can take it always .lol.bad poppyxx

Mmmmm.... forget diplomacy, I feel an invasion coming on!!!

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By *piritfingers OP Man
over a year ago

isle of wight

Took advice on board and changed bits,ty ppl,as for leaving..........um no lol but again I appreciate advice

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