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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

hi ive been on here a while and had no interest i wonder if you could tqke a look at my profile and see if there is anything i could do differently. thanks for any advice.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Remember this is a critique not a personal attack

It's hard to read - no paragraphs or minimal punctuation.

The most pointless paragraph in history the warning bit at the bottom which is specifically advised against in the tips.

8 weeks is NOT a long time by the way.

Other than that it is not the worst profile I have ever seen.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Remember this is a critique not a personal attack

It's hard to read - no paragraphs or minimal punctuation.

The most pointless paragraph in history the warning bit at the bottom which is specifically advised against in the tips.

8 weeks is NOT a long time by the way.

Other than that it is not the worst profile I have ever seen.

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Thanks for the advice, I was unawear of the warning being advised against. As for it being hard to read this is possibly as i wrote it on my phone lol. I shall take your advice and try to sort it out. Many thanks.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lose the 18-99 age limit, its a huuuuge turn off when guys do this...be realistic.

Other than 'sense' not 'sence', it's not a bad profile all in all

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By *thwalescplCouple
over a year ago

brecon

The re- write makes it easier to read.

The pics don't do you any favours, I would stick with body shots and keep face and tackle shots for private.

The main problem we would have is the "cannot accom", yes, you explained why, but we would still be cautious, anyone can claim to have a "family member" at home..... Wives are family too lol.

And.... Would you really meet a 99 year old? To some that might be seen as a bit desperate.

Otherwise, not bad, better than most single male profiles.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

have updated it again to can accomadate, as i would have no problem with hotel meets and even if my brother wasnt living with me i wouldnt want the curtain twitchers knowing lol also have correted age and spelling to the best of my knowledge lol thanks to all for advice.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

have also sorted photos.

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