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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I have slowly Amherst myself in the concept of writing adult erotica.

This started me thinking how many others enjoy erotica? Both as reading material and a prelude to foreplay?

Would others find it stimulating to write about your experiences or fantasies and share them in the form of erotica?

This could be a contest for the best introduction letter are reply letter of all time

if we're not allowed to have a contest, it would be fun just to have sued interaction between the community

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

that would be some not sued folks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We have been writing for quite awhile. It's turning into more of a book than anything. ( sort of a continuing saga.) It's fun, we do it in a way so that we are both involved. One person will do a chapter, then the other will.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I find that such a turn on and I am conversing in that way with a couple via text. hoping to meet soon. I find erotica

very stimulating and wanted to know what other thought of the idea

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I love erotica , have written a few short stories , love reading it as well .

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This is a sample of some of the things we write.

On his way out the door he grabs her by the hand and pulls her toward the bike like he's afraid she'll change her mind. He climbs on the bike and extends his hand again to help her climb on also. With the micro mini skirt she has on she is sure to give him quite a show! Jean grabs his hand and puts her other hand on his shoulder to steady herself as she climbs on the bike. Once she's seated Victor starts the bike and Jean can feel the vibration of the engine. This is going to be an interesting ride for sure! He tells her to "Hold on tight" so Jean grabs onto his waist. As he starts to pull out of the driveway the vibration starts working on her clit through the seat of the bike and she can feel it spread all the way through her whole body. When he gets out on the road he guns the engine which shoves his back into her crotch. Now she can feel the vibration through him as well as from the bike. It's getting her more worked up and she's enjoying every minute of it. Jean notices he's purposely not shifting gears so the rpm's will rev the engine harder to cause more vibration. Jean grins and decides that two can play that game and reaches down to rub his cock through the front of his pants and immediately feels him start to get hard. As she feels his excitement growing she feels her own doing the same. It doesn't take long for him to start looking for a place to go. Jean can feel the intensity growing even more so she rubs his cock even harder and faster as he tries to keep the bike on the road. He decides to go toward the city limits and finds a secluded area where there is an open field. He doesn't even hesitate and drives the bike right off the road into the field as far from any onlookers as possible.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

that's a hot story. I will post one of my own very soon. but that was so hot I love the promise and her feelings between the legs of a motorcycle

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This site and some meets have made for some great writings

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Just remember to change the names to protect the guilty.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"that's a hot story. I will post one of my own very soon. but that was so hot I love the promise and her feelings between the legs of a motorcycle"

The actual chapter that it's from is about 9 pages. So there was the whole setup to that point and about a 5 page completion of the chapter.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Just remember to change the names to protect the guilty. "

Done and done

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

True story;

last night I had just gotten home from a date with a couple I had recently met. I started to relive the days events as I quickly undressed. I turn on the shower and walk to get a glass of wine in the kitchen and realize that I am rock hard. I walk back to the shower, with a glass of wine and one hand, in my erection in the other.

I was invited over to a barbecue by some friends I just met from this site. we had already had a couple meets but nothing of the adult nature. I arrived on time and was greeted at the door by a very beautiful, naked female half of the couple. after I walked in and she closed the door her equally good husband walked up beside her. my cock getting full attention from there eyes as I

undressed. They asked me to come out to the sundeck with them as the Misses held my hand and guided me out.

This couple was hot, telling me that they were both bi and like the company of by men. at this point in time we have not talked about sexual preference, we had already clicked on a different level and we all three knew this was going to happen.

By this time we are both hard, and she put condoms on both of us. straddling her husbands cock and looking over her shoulder. she tells me she wants a double vaginal penetration and start reading her husband as a way to tease me. it was somewhat difficult to slide up and beside her husband but the feeling was wonderful. she started coming soon after I was comfortably seated and with a good matching rhythm with her husband. we all came together again shortly after that

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"True story;

last night I had just gotten home from a date with a couple I had recently met. I started to relive the days events as I quickly undressed. I turn on the shower and walk to get a glass of wine in the kitchen and realize that I am rock hard. I walk back to the shower, with a glass of wine and one hand, in my erection in the other.

I was invited over to a barbecue by some friends I just met from this site. we had already had a couple meets but nothing of the adult nature. I arrived on time and was greeted at the door by a very beautiful, naked female half of the couple. after I walked in and she closed the door her equally good husband walked up beside her. my cock getting full attention from there eyes as I

undressed. They asked me to come out to the sundeck with them as the Misses held my hand and guided me out.

This couple was hot, telling me that they were both bi and like the company of by men. at this point in time we have not talked about sexual preference, we had already clicked on a different level and we all three knew this was going to happen.

By this time we are both hard, and she put condoms on both of us. straddling her husbands cock and looking over her shoulder. she tells me she wants a double vaginal penetration and start reading her husband as a way to tease me. it was somewhat difficult to slide up and beside her husband but the feeling was wonderful. she started coming soon after I was comfortably seated and with a good matching rhythm with her husband. we all came together again shortly after that"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Writing erotic screenplays is a challenge, though I'm trying. Needs to be visual, but a thin line between erotic and porn.

Words are more appealing in the readers mind than through a viewers ear.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Writing erotic screenplays is a challenge, though I'm trying. Needs to be visual, but a thin line between erotic and porn.

Words are more appealing in the readers mind than through a viewers ear."

True on the thin line. For erotic for viewers think of a single x movie not a xxx movie. There are a few of them out there, and the Playboy channel used to show a lot of them.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

She was so excited on the drive down .. Although the content of the conversation was serious , she knew where they were going , his office , everyone else was gone and all she could visualise was his desk ...... Mmmmm happy memories , ok so maybe this was going to be the last time they saw each other but she was going to make the most of it . They still couldn't agree on how this relationship was going to go forward but she knew she lusted after his touch , despite their deifferent views , she wanted his body . His kiss seemed to melt her from the inside out . When they got to the office , she tried to play it cool but two minutes of his touch , his kisses and caresses had her so turned on , she just knew she had no control over this situation , he bent over the desk and pulled her skirt up , at the sane time managing to get her knickers down , slapping her ass as he teased her pussy lips , , pulling her hair and kissing her neck , getting her to new dizzy heights of arousal .... Why had he this power over her ?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"She was so excited on the drive down .. Although the content of the conversation was serious , she knew where they were going , his office , everyone else was gone and all she could visualise was his desk ...... Mmmmm happy memories , ok so maybe this was going to be the last time they saw each other but she was going to make the most of it . They still couldn't agree on how this relationship was going to go forward but she knew she lusted after his touch , despite their deifferent views , she wanted his body . His kiss seemed to melt her from the inside out . When they got to the office , she tried to play it cool but two minutes of his touch , his kisses and caresses had her so turned on , she just knew she had no control over this situation , he bent over the desk and pulled her skirt up , at the sane time managing to get her knickers down , slapping her ass as he teased her pussy lips , , pulling her hair and kissing her neck , getting her to new dizzy heights of arousal .

... Why had he this power over her ? [/

quote]Wow, that did it for me. I had to abuse myself while reading that. very hot. I think you fine lady. I yield to your finer touch "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"True story;

last night I had just gotten home from a date with a couple I had recently met. I started to relive the days events as I quickly undressed. I turn on the shower and walk to get a glass of wine in the kitchen and realize that I am rock hard. I walk back to the shower, with a glass of wine and one hand, in my erection in the other.

I was invited over to a barbecue by some friends I just met from this site. we had already had a couple meets but nothing of the adult nature. I arrived on time and was greeted at the door by a very beautiful, naked female half of the couple. after I walked in and she closed the door her equally good husband walked up beside her. my cock getting full attention from there eyes as I

undressed. They asked me to come out to the sundeck with them as the Misses held my hand and guided me out.

This couple was hot, telling me that they were both bi and like the company of by men. at this point in time we have not talked about sexual preference, we had already clicked on a different level and we all three knew this was going to happen.

By this time we are both hard, and she put condoms on both of us. straddling her husbands cock and looking over her shoulder. she tells me she wants a double vaginal penetration and start reading her husband as a way to tease me. it was somewhat difficult to slide up and beside her husband but the feeling was wonderful. she started coming soon after I was comfortably seated and with a good matching rhythm with her husband. we all came together again shortly after that"

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

JLove

I feel a dream of you and me coming on. thank you sweetie

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"JLove

I feel a dream of you and me coming on. thank you sweetie "

;-) well I hope I get to hear about it and what I did to cause it lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"She was so excited on the drive down .. Although the content of the conversation was serious , she knew where they were going , his office , everyone else was gone and all she could visualise was his desk ...... Mmmmm happy memories , ok so maybe this was going to be the last time they saw each other but she was going to make the most of it . They still couldn't agree on how this relationship was going to go forward but she knew she lusted after his touch , despite their deifferent views , she wanted his body . His kiss seemed to melt her from the inside out . When they got to the office , she tried to play it cool but two minutes of his touch , his kisses and caresses had her so turned on , she just knew she had no control over this situation , he bent over the desk and pulled her skirt up , at the sane time managing to get her knickers down , slapping her ass as he teased her pussy lips , , pulling her hair and kissing her neck , getting her to new dizzy heights of arousal .... Why had he this power over her ? "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Always on my mind

Right now I'm laying on my bed, thinking about your voice and your cock. I've closed my eyes and licked my lips just like you taught me to do and I relax and focus as I play with my nipples making them hard.

So very hard they are straining through my bra, so I'm going to take it off soon!

I can feel my pussy throb with anticipation of being touched, but it's much to soon to play with my pussy! I need to be patient, relax, focus on the sensations my body is having.

It feels like someone is caressing my skin with their lips, with their tongue, I imagine its you.

I spread my legs open and run my hands up and down my thighs, god I'm so close to my pussy I can barely take it!

Writhing on the bed, moving my hands back up to my breast! They feel so big as I pinch my nipples harder and feel the wetness almost gush out of me. I can't take it, but I still don't want to touch my pussy with my hands yet.

I'll use my hands for write before I cum. I reach over and pick up my vibrator and let it slide up and down my pussy, imagining its your cock, teasing me before you enter me. Mmmm my pussy is so wet, it's throbbing, God I feel the orgasm building but I stop moving, I want to make this last a bit, so I take my long vibrator and I lick my juices off of it.

I moan damn I taste so good, I shove the vibrator in my mouth thinking about your hard cock! I make myself gag on it imagining you telling me job well done.

I take the vibrator out of my mouth and push it inside of my pussy! Fuck! as soon as it hits my gspot I gasp and cum hard, but I'm not done yet, that was far to fast , I didn't even get a chance to fuck my pussy with it!

In and out I use it, my pussy is so tight but my toy feels so good! Faster and faster one hand fucking my pussy the other hand on my nipples pulling and pinching.

This is going to be the perfect "O", I put down my toy and I start to rub my clit with my fingers my ass lifts up off the bed it feels so damn good, my eyes are shut tight so I can picture you worshipping my pussy.

I draw circles around my clit with my fingers, my clit is so hard,

it's building I feel it start and I don't stop fingering my clit until I cum screaming I open my eyes I see stars, my body shakes as I slowly come down from the earth shattering orgasm I've just had. All because I couldn't get you off my mind.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Always on my mind

Right now I'm laying on my bed, thinking about your voice and your cock. I've closed my eyes and licked my lips just like you taught me to do and I relax and focus as I play with my nipples making them hard.

So very hard they are straining through my bra, so I'm going to take it off soon!

I can feel my pussy throb with anticipation of being touched, but it's much to soon to play with my pussy! I need to be patient, relax, focus on the sensations my body is having.

It feels like someone is caressing my skin with their lips, with their tongue, I imagine its you.

I spread my legs open and run my hands up and down my thighs, god I'm so close to my pussy I can barely take it!

Writhing on the bed, moving my hands back up to my breast! They feel so big as I pinch my nipples harder and feel the wetness almost gush out of me. I can't take it, but I still don't want to touch my pussy with my hands yet.

I'll use my hands for write before I cum. I reach over and pick up my vibrator and let it slide up and down my pussy, imagining its your cock, teasing me before you enter me. Mmmm my pussy is so wet, it's throbbing, God I feel the orgasm building but I stop moving, I want to make this last a bit, so I take my long vibrator and I lick my juices off of it.

I moan damn I taste so good, I shove the vibrator in my mouth thinking about your hard cock! I make myself gag on it imagining you telling me job well done.

I take the vibrator out of my mouth and push it inside of my pussy! Fuck! as soon as it hits my gspot I gasp and cum hard, but I'm not done yet, that was far to fast , I didn't even get a chance to fuck my pussy with it!

In and out I use it, my pussy is so tight but my toy feels so good! Faster and faster one hand fucking my pussy the other hand on my nipples pulling and pinching.

This is going to be the perfect "O", I put down my toy and I start to rub my clit with my fingers my ass lifts up off the bed it feels so damn good, my eyes are shut tight so I can picture you worshipping my pussy.

I draw circles around my clit with my fingers, my clit is so hard,

it's building I feel it start and I don't stop fingering my clit until I cum screaming I open my eyes I see stars, my body shakes as I slowly come down from the earth shattering orgasm I've just had. All because I couldn't get you off my mind."

This forum thread is starting to get pretty steamy.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Yes, I do believe you right and it is getting very steamy. Its turning out to be quite a thread. Do you think we should continue?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Yes, I do believe you right and it is getting very steamy. Its turning out to be quite a thread. Do you think we should continue? "

Why not.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

This thread is getting me all kinds of worked up

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

thank you very much I will post a new installment very soon as my couple and I are planning another get together

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"This thread is getting me all kinds of worked up "

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

this is getting then I actually expected

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By *SEguyMan
over a year ago

Mt Calm

I love erotic stories. I can't get enough of reading them and everyone posting their stories on this thread are doing a great job at getting me all worked up. Wish I had someone to send naughty messages with its like writing erotica together and makes me even hotter. Wish I could write stories like you all but I am perfectly content with reading everyone else's. keep up the good work.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

thank you very much for the compliment. and I know I could speak for most of us here one of the main reasons we write it is so you can read it. I could admit freely that I am a literary exhibition. there is another true erotic story coming soon.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I've had a crazy fun experience recently that I've started writing about, just need to make sure I take my time with it, really need to change it up a bit to save face

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I didn't mean for hit that smily or frowny! Lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon.

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over a year ago


"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon. "

In a word.... YES

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon.

In a word.... YES "

And what super powers would you want?

For us it would be pheromones ( To make people even hornier.) and telekinesis to stimulate things people didn't even know they had.

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over a year ago


"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon.

In a word.... YES

And what super powers would you want?

For us it would be pheromones ( To make people even hornier.) and telekinesis to stimulate things people didn't even know they had. "

How can I even top that! Those are perfect the power to freeze time would come in handy.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"With the popularity of Super Hero movies. If you had super powers, would you use them for sex? Story coming soon.

In a word.... YES

And what super powers would you want?

For us it would be pheromones ( To make people even hornier.) and telekinesis to stimulate things people didn't even know they had.

How can I even top that! Those are perfect the power to freeze time would come in handy."

That could be fun also, just think of all the interesting things you could do with that. Or shape shifting.( you could be anyone.)

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over a year ago

One last look in the mirror before getting dressed, my breasts perfectly positioned in the new bra i had chosen, my panties clutching my smoothness, holdups showing my shapely legs perfectly, i felt sexy and ready.

Sat in my car, i considered my decision again, "what was i doing, am i ready for this, am i anxious,excited , scared?" Before i knew it, i was there. anticipation building inside me. I was aroused already, the thought of him in my mind, the want for him pulsating through my body, teasing me, tasting me, making me his.

i approach the front door, my knees weak from adrenilin, my throat dry from arousal. he opens it before i knock, i can not see him, but i know he is there. i have waited for this for so long, and i am struggling to contain my want and need, my breathing is heavy, my body sensitive and ready for touch. i walk inside and he is there stood before me. this is it, this is the moment i have been longing for......................

honest opinions? Xx

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over a year ago


"One last look in the mirror before getting dressed, my breasts perfectly positioned in the new bra i had chosen, my panties clutching my smoothness, holdups showing my shapely legs perfectly, i felt sexy and ready.

Sat in my car, i considered my decision again, "what was i doing, am i ready for this, am i anxious,excited , scared?" Before i knew it, i was there. anticipation building inside me. I was aroused already, the thought of him in my mind, the want for him pulsating through my body, teasing me, tasting me, making me his.

i approach the front door, my knees weak from adrenilin, my throat dry from arousal. he opens it before i knock, i can not see him, but i know he is there. i have waited for this for so long, and i am struggling to contain my want and need, my breathing is heavy, my body sensitive and ready for touch. i walk inside and he is there stood before me. this is it, this is the moment i have been longing for......................

honest opinions? Xx "

It's good!! More??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I feel his eyes upon me, engulfing the sight before him, caressing my body with his stare. i feel vunerable, like a naughty child awaiting her punishment, the fear of rejection, wanting to please.

he walks towards me, his stare still upon me, he takes my hand and pulls me close. i feel his lips upon mine, all fear disappears, i let go, i feel alive, electric. his tongue meets mine, he tastes so good, and i want more, i want his hands upon me, his tongue tasting me, his naked body against mine.

i whisper in his ear "take me, i am yours, command me, i will obey" he smiles and leads me to the bedroom............

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over a year ago


"I feel his eyes upon me, engulfing the sight before him, caressing my body with his stare. i feel vunerable, like a naughty child awaiting her punishment, the fear of rejection, wanting to please.

he walks towards me, his stare still upon me, he takes my hand and pulls me close. i feel his lips upon mine, all fear disappears, i let go, i feel alive, electric. his tongue meets mine, he tastes so good, and i want more, i want his hands upon me, his tongue tasting me, his naked body against mine.

i whisper in his ear "take me, i am yours, command me, i will obey" he smiles and leads me to the bedroom............ "

I'm enjoying the build up!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

loving the eroticism of the story already

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We reach the door, he turns and speaks for the first time, his voice low and seductive, "do you trust me?" I consider his question, and ignore my sensible self, "yes" he reaches into his pocket and i see the silky blindfold. i am nervous, but i want this, i need this. he stands behind me and places it over my eyes. my senses are reeling now, my body aware of his presence, i breath in his scent. i stand there, unsure of what is to come, excited by the uncertainty. I feel my hands being guided, he places them on the wall. "Do not move, do not speak, just trust me and enjoy" i feel him place his hand on my neck, the other on my bottom. his touch feels so good. He gently lifts my tight skirt, revealing my panties, i feel his hand move away and before i have time to wonder, i feel the slap of his hand on my bottom. i groan loudly, pleasure surging through me, my panties becomming wet from the sensation. "You like that?" He asks. "Yes" i reply, "oh yes"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yes indeed

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over a year ago

I tilt my head back to feel his breath upon my neck, his hands cupping my breasts, his cock hard against my bottom. i push against him and he moves away, leaving me wanting. "Do not move, do not speak, do not take your hands away from the wall" i obey, as if under a spell. i tense as i feel him slowly take my panties down, i open my legs signalling him to touch, "you moved, you know what happens to naughty girls who don't obey" i stay silent, unsure of the answer, unable to speak........bhhx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Punishment! Whatever can it be

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over a year ago

I stay silent, hands firmly on the wall, my body heavy, needing to move, unable to see. Is he watching me? I know he is there, i sense his movement around the room. I feel him beside me, "open your legs" he commands. i open my legs to reveal my wetness, my bottom raised, my head tilted back. then i feel it. Its cold and hard between my cheeks, an unfamiliar feeling. its coldness exciting me and curiousity stimulating me. He places it carefully and then it begins. He moves it back and forth, teasing my clit with the tip. It feels so good, how can this be a punishment? "Oh yes, oh yes" and then he stops, i am confused. "Please don't stop, please dont" "You can not cum, you will not cum until you learn to obey" I am beyond control, now i understand, "sorry sir, i will do as i am told" ............

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over a year ago


"I stay silent, hands firmly on the wall, my body heavy, needing to move, unable to see. Is he watching me? I know he is there, i sense his movement around the room. I feel him beside me, "open your legs" he commands. i open my legs to reveal my wetness, my bottom raised, my head tilted back. then i feel it. Its cold and hard between my cheeks, an unfamiliar feeling. its coldness exciting me and curiousity stimulating me. He places it carefully and then it begins. He moves it back and forth, teasing my clit with the tip. It feels so good, how can this be a punishment? "Oh yes, oh yes" and then he stops, i am confused. "Please don't stop, please dont" "You can not cum, you will not cum until you learn to obey" I am beyond control, now i understand, "sorry sir, i will do as i am told" ............"

I've gone 2 weeks with being punished, it's was so many emotions!! I was crazed with arousal, begging to cum, I was angry, disappointed in myself for talking back the list goes on! In the end the reward was far greater! Not that I could ever have a Sir again, but I do miss my Sir like crazy

Enjoying the story!!!

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over a year ago


"I stay silent, hands firmly on the wall, my body heavy, needing to move, unable to see. Is he watching me? I know he is there, i sense his movement around the room. I feel him beside me, "open your legs" he commands. i open my legs to reveal my wetness, my bottom raised, my head tilted back. then i feel it. Its cold and hard between my cheeks, an unfamiliar feeling. its coldness exciting me and curiousity stimulating me. He places it carefully and then it begins. He moves it back and forth, teasing my clit with the tip. It feels so good, how can this be a punishment? "Oh yes, oh yes" and then he stops, i am confused. "Please don't stop, please dont" "You can not cum, you will not cum until you learn to obey" I am beyond control, now i understand, "sorry sir, i will do as i am told" ............

I've gone 2 weeks with being punished, it's was so many emotions!! I was crazed with arousal, begging to cum, I was angry, disappointed in myself for talking back the list goes on! In the end the reward was far greater! Not that I could ever have a Sir again, but I do miss my Sir like crazy

Enjoying the story!!! "

aww thank you for sharing that with me. i miss my sir too.

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over a year ago


"I stay silent, hands firmly on the wall, my body heavy, needing to move, unable to see. Is he watching me? I know he is there, i sense his movement around the room. I feel him beside me, "open your legs" he commands. i open my legs to reveal my wetness, my bottom raised, my head tilted back. then i feel it. Its cold and hard between my cheeks, an unfamiliar feeling. its coldness exciting me and curiousity stimulating me. He places it carefully and then it begins. He moves it back and forth, teasing my clit with the tip. It feels so good, how can this be a punishment? "Oh yes, oh yes" and then he stops, i am confused. "Please don't stop, please dont" "You can not cum, you will not cum until you learn to obey" I am beyond control, now i understand, "sorry sir, i will do as i am told" ............

I've gone 2 weeks with being punished, it's was so many emotions!! I was crazed with arousal, begging to cum, I was angry, disappointed in myself for talking back the list goes on! In the end the reward was far greater! Not that I could ever have a Sir again, but I do miss my Sir like crazy

Enjoying the story!!!

aww thank you for sharing that with me. i miss my sir too. "

Of course! your story has definitely stirred up some good memories looks like it's made me want to write a little about my time with Sir, we'll see if I can do it! Changing many parts of course

Hope you keep sharing yours

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over a year ago

Here is one of my quick and dirty stories...hope you all enjoy the first person perspective I wrote it in.

It was a late night in the corporate world and you as my secretary were working right along side me. I have you come in to my office go over some documentation with me. As you bend over my desk and look at the papers I can't help but stare at those magnificent legs of yours while I stand behind you. You turn around and catch me staring at your round delicious rear and smile, then tell me to come take a closer look, that I might like the surprise you have for me. I move behind you, my hands caressing and squeezing your ass as you open your legs a bit causing your skirt to rise up higher and higher until your silk panty clad ass is fully exposed infront of me. I reach down between your legs and softly tease your moistening pussy with my hand as my other gives your ass a soft squeeze and rub. I hear you moan in pleasure as the wetness between your legs grows. I feel your panties growing damper and damper with each passing moment and as you grow damper and damper my cock grows harder and harder for you.

I slide your wet silken panties down to the ground and let my hand play in your bare exposed glistening folds. I dive a finger inside your tight hot pussy, slowly thrusting it in and out as kneel down behind you and lower my hungry mouth to your dripping wetness. My tongue explores your wet slit, twirling around your hard clit as my finger swirls and thrusts inside of you. "Mmmmm you taste so good" I moan just before my hot mouth engulfs your hard clit, sucking deeply inside between my teeth. I turn you around and set you on my desk, legs up, pussy dripping I still kneel between your legs licking and sucking and finger fucking your amazing pussy faster and harder. My finger dives deeper and deeper in and out of you slick tight hole. "Oh baby, I want you to cum for me...cum all over my face...cover me with your hot pussy juice before I stand up and ram my aching hard cock inside of you..." I moan loudly and continue feasting on your sweet sweet pussy until you're moaning and groaning for me to put my cock inside of you.

Laying you down on my desk and spreading your legs wide, I plunge my steely hard cock deep inside your sopping wet pussy. My hands groping and squeezing your big soft tits as my hips thrust my length fully in n out of you. "mmm god baby you feel sooooo god" I growl while pumping my hard shaft faster and deeper in n out again and again. Our bodies rock together in building passion, sweat glistens on our brows, I see your back arching up as your orgasm draws near, I grab your hips and fuck you as hard as I can while you cum, both of us screaming in exstacy. Just as your climax reaches its peak, my cock erupts inside of you, spraying shot after shot of my hot sticky cum deep inside of your amazing dripping wet pussy.

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By *iM4kinkMan
over a year ago

San Antonio


"One last look in the mirror before getting dressed, my breasts perfectly positioned in the new bra i had chosen, my panties clutching my smoothness, holdups showing my shapely legs perfectly, i felt sexy and ready.

Sat in my car, i considered my decision again, "what was i doing, am i ready for this, am i anxious,excited , scared?" Before i knew it, i was there. anticipation building inside me. I was aroused already, the thought of him in my mind, the want for him pulsating through my body, teasing me, tasting me, making me his.

i approach the front door, my knees weak from adrenilin, my throat dry from arousal. he opens it before i knock, i can not see him, but i know he is there. i have waited for this for so long, and i am struggling to contain my want and need, my breathing is heavy, my body sensitive and ready for touch. i walk inside and he is there stood before me. this is it, this is the moment i have been longing for......................

honest opinions? Xx "

I love it, totaly obscure physical sexual gender concerning who is conveying the story. Being bi myself I find that this allows my imagination to roam in all kinds of directions. Literarily speaking I find it genious to be able arouse many different types of people without ever implicating or dedicating the story in any one direction or preference. It could still end up being anyone in any number of situations. Also being attracted to kinkier and more taboo or fetish interactions sexually my arousel and curiosity were seemingly one in the same. I wanted to hear whatever may come next.

I loved it and think you have great talent not to mention I'm intrigued with what your sexual preferences, curiosities and fantasies may be. And know that if any of our interests happened to be similar that speaking with you or reading your future work would be an intense turn on most definitely. Thanks and keep up the good work.

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We had this idea for a book that has to do with a bunch of super hero swingers. While it's a work in progress and still needs some editing here is a sample from the end of one of the chapters.

Let us know what you think.

Sarah was exhausted and the spell had not worn off yet but her endurance was gone. She suspects that Essence had given her some kind of endurance boost to her and it had worn off. Essence approaches Sarah and Say’s “Come on rookie it’s time for you to go Home.” Essence half carries Sarah out to the car and as soon as Sarah sits down she is out like a light. When they arrive at Sarah’s place Essence looks up and can senses that Sam is there asleep. With a wry smile Essence reaches out to his mind and makes sure he stays that way for at least the next 8 hours. Essence tells Richard that he should go pick up everyone else. That she is going to make sure that Sarah gets to bed OK. Essence picks Sarah up ever so gently and begins to carry her to the door. Richard unlocks and opens the door for her then relocks it and turns to leave. As he is heading for the car he finds it pretty amazing that as big of a party animal and shit stirrer Essence is, she can be so loving and caring. Essence carries Sarah up the stairs gently undresses her, cleans her up and carries her to bed. She gently kisses Sarah on the cheek and say’s “Sweet dreams rookie.”

Sarah hits the snooze button for the third time as Sam begins kissing on her neck. She can’t believe what a whirlwind of a weekend it’s been. With Essence setting Sarah up with that spell. Sarah begins responding to Sam’s touch. Everything on her at the moment is overly sensitive, the ring feeling warm on her finger, but she’s still horny. Hasn’t that damn spell wore off yet? Sam pulls Sarah over on top of him and begins inserting his rock hard cock in her. Sarah lets out a little squeal as his cock slides deeper in her. Sam begins pumping in and out in a slow but steady rhythm. Then all of a sudden Sarah and Sam realize they are not alone in the bed. Sarah feels a hot wet mouth and tongue licking and kissing on her ass. It finally begins focusing on her asshole. Sarah briefly thinks after this weekend you could probably park a car in her ass. But those lips and that tongue are so hot, erotic, exciting and ……. Soothing? Both Sarah and Sam are starting to get really worked up when Sarah can feel that face that’s buried in her ass, begin to smile. All Sarah can think is “uh oh” as that tongue moves down to her pussy and Sam’s cock. Both Sam and Sarah immediately begin having the most intense gushing orgasm. Sam holds Sarah tightly to his chest as they both shake uncontrollably. Sam is trying to hold her tight enough so that he can get their rhythm in sync. As the shaking starts to become synchronized Sam’s body is involuntarily trying to stick every last inch of his cock in Sarah’s hot wet pussy. Sarah can feel every spasm as Sam shoots cum into her pussy and with every spasm that Sam has, Sarah’s pussy constricts trying to pull more and more cum out of him as she continues gushing herself. Sarah can even feel Sam’s spunk leaking out of her pussy as he keeps spasming and unleashing his load. The ring on Sarah’s finger is as hot as she is. Sarah biting viciously on Sam’s chest and begins digging her fingernails into his sides. There is a little giggle heard as the orgasm increases in intensity. It feels like it’s never going to stop and that they are both going to pass out. Sarah bites a little harder and digs a little deeper as Sam lets out an animalistic groan. Sam has one hand on Sarah’s ass and grips it even more tightly as their two bodies are thrusting against each other even more violently. Sarah and Sam finally come down from the orgasm when that tongue stops working it’s magic. After a couple of seconds Essence pops her head out from under the covers and says “Ta Da.” Essence then throws back the covers and cracks Sarah smartly on the ass looks Sarah straight in the eyes and with an evil grin on her face says “ You owe me an orgasm girl, but you only have 30 minutes before the store opens. You better hit the shower.” Essence quickly gathers her clothes and dresses and then heads down the stairs into the store. The only thing going through Sarah’s mind is “Oh my god, she left the door open.” As both Sam and Sarah stare at the spot where Essence just left. They look at each other than back at the door when they here Essence say “Good morning Penny, good morning Garth would you two like to see a magic trick” Then all Sarah and Sam here are a couple of “Oh god’s and Oh Shit’s” then silence. Upon arriving down stairs after a very quick shower Sarah find Penny and Garth with big wet spots in their pants. They both look at Sarah like this is your fault, but they don’t seem that unhappy about it.

About 30 minutes later Sam comes down stairs carrying the mattress from your new bed folded in half to make it easier to move. He see’s Penny and Garth’s wet pants and smirks. Sam then proceeds to take the mattress out to the dumpster. After a few minutes Sam returns and hands everybody a bottle of cold Gatorade. He Twists the top off of Sarah’s and hands it to her. He then twists the top off of his, takes a big drink and says “You know Sarah, if this keeps up, we’re going to need water proof sheets.” He then finishes his drink and tells Sarah I’m going to go get a new mattress.

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