FabSwingers.com forum: Opinions on profile please!

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hey peeps, out of frustration and curiosity I would like to know what everyone thinks about my bio and whether it is a bit cheesy or not?

I had a good spell on this last year but after coming back I am finding it harder to get any decent conversation going with so many on this.

If anyone (preferably women) has any tips or suggestions on how to improve my profile, I would be very thankful!