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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Can anyone please give us any ideas whats wrong with us or our profile just wanting range of ideas if our profile comes across and if our pics are not right thanks

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By *lyreelMan
over a year ago

King's lynn

To me your profile seems slightly aggressive, the grammar is awful and apostrophes missing.

If you could make it easier to read, slightly soften it and use spell check I think it would help.

Good luck with it all.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You have good pictures and a pleasant (if not a long) profile.

You seem welcoming and not overbearing.

I know you're not looking for singles but I would try and contact you otherwise.

There are plenty of strange folk on here and intentions can be misinterpreted.

In conclusion, its them and not you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Why do you think there's something wrong with it?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's too long and a bit difficult to read. It could do with a trim XXX

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks so far great constructive advice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

too hard to read.. also very long.. short and sweet might be a better idea

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By *estofbothCouple
over a year ago

Cardiff

Seems like a good profile to us.

Same as everywhere though different people like different things and styles of presenting information, one persons idea of a short profile is somebody else’s idea of too much info. You’ll never appeal to everyone so just do you.

You clearly state what you enjoy and what you are looking for, I think it gives anyone serious about getting to know another couple a good starting point to work from.

Keep the faith, sometimes takes a while to find the right people for you. Especially on here!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A bit long, but otherwise okay.

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By *itch and TwatCouple
over a year ago

Nr Rushden Lakes

Yes definitely agree, the profile is a bit long and needs some structure. Being a bit more positive and fun might help? But this is being picky, because otherwise it’s a good profile with nice pics x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can anyone please give us any ideas whats wrong with us or our profile just wanting range of ideas if our profile comes across and if our pics are not right thanks "

I stopped reading after 'we are'

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Pics are good, profile very descriptive of what your looking for and your dislikes. Gives an insight to the kind of people you are too which is never a bad thing. Leave it alone is my opinion

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

Your profile text could do with some full stops.

I prefer couples profiles with an avatar of both of you. There are also no pics of both of you together. I think too many of them look like holiday snaps.

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By *uzz And WoodyCouple
over a year ago

Maidstone

I’d say it’s just a bit difficult to read as there’s little punctuation so some people may just give up reading after the first paragraph or 2. People can be very picky about grammar and punctuation, even if they only want to fuck you! Our profile is long too so I don’t mind a long profile and I know it’s hard trying to get across everything you want to say and keep it short.

I’m not sure why you need to explain what a cock is by putting penis in brackets but I suppose it rules out beastiality.

Your photos are ok but if you’re trying to avoid getting recognised you’ll need bigger hearts to cover your face.

Other than that, you seem like a nice couple and I wish you lots of luck.

Mrs x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

If our profile comes across long thats because letting people know what we are like as people,too short and get bombarded with messages to us we feel that we have been upfront and open.

Would it be better short or not few people say its fine some not we do editded now and again.

Holiday pics nothing wrong there showing pics of ourselves, we also here the point of pics together and are in the process of uploading.

Punctuation ok you should read our kids texts lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Profile far too long and rambling for our tastes, but you’ve got recent veris so you’re doing ok it would seem.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We don't get many messages but aren't to bothered to be honest, we seem to meet most of ours at events/clubs.

I think our profile is picky but that's just us

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"We don't get many messages but aren't to bothered to be honest, we seem to meet most of ours at events/clubs.

I think our profile is picky but that's just us "

Nothing wrong with your profile nice read gets the point across

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We don't get many messages but aren't to bothered to be honest, we seem to meet most of ours at events/clubs.

I think our profile is picky but that's just us

Nothing wrong with your profile nice read gets the point across "

Thank-you x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Profile far too long and rambling for our tastes, but you’ve got recent veris so you’re doing ok it would seem. "

Edit in process

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You get an award from me for being the first couple to ask for profile advice on fab.

Clap everybody

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"You have good pictures and a pleasant (if not a long) profile.

You seem welcoming and not overbearing.

I know you're not looking for singles but I would try and contact you otherwise.

There are plenty of strange folk on here and intentions can be misinterpreted.

In conclusion, its them and not you."

We are in process of editing thanks for your reply

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"It's too long and a bit difficult to read. It could do with a trim XXX"

Its trimmed and smooth our profile now lol and ongoing

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"too hard to read.. also very long.. short and sweet might be a better idea "

Ok edited hows it look now still in process

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"You get an award from me for being the first couple to ask for profile advice on fab.

Clap everybody "

Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"too hard to read.. also very long.. short and sweet might be a better idea

Ok edited hows it look now still in process"

Still too rambling and repetitive for us. Maybe write it in a word document and use grammar / spell check then copy and paste?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"too hard to read.. also very long.. short and sweet might be a better idea

Ok edited hows it look now still in process

Still too rambling and repetitive for us. Maybe write it in a word document and use grammar / spell check then copy and paste?"

Check again and report back thanks

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"too hard to read.. also very long.. short and sweet might be a better idea

Ok edited hows it look now still in process

Still too rambling and repetitive for us. Maybe write it in a word document and use grammar / spell check then copy and paste?"

Just looked at yours and no idea what your after its too short each to there own i guess

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


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Still too rambling and repetitive for us. Maybe write it in a word document and use grammar / spell check then copy and paste?

Just looked at yours and no idea what your after its too short each to there own i guess "

I think their profile is perfectly clear with great photos. They will only meet in clubs and like to chat to new people before arranging to meet.

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By *alandNitaCouple
over a year ago

Scunthorpe

Nothing terribly wrong with the profile at all OP.

Though I would sort the grammar errors and add appropriate punctuation.

Personally, I prefer paragraphs to bullet points, but that doesn't mean there's anything wrong with your layout.

Nita

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"too hard to read.. also very long.. short and sweet might be a better idea

Ok edited hows it look now still in process

Still too rambling and repetitive for us. Maybe write it in a word document and use grammar / spell check then copy and paste?

Just looked at yours and no idea what your after its too short each to there own i guess "

But we’re not asking for advice.

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By *gnitemybodyWoman
over a year ago

Onestepoutofthedoor

I find those speech bubbles on your pic's really annoying for some reason

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I find those speech bubbles on your pic's really annoying for some reason "

Ok would it be better with our heads off like your

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


"I find those speech bubbles on your pic's really annoying for some reason

Ok would it be better with our heads off like your "

Yes it would

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"too hard to read.. also very long.. short and sweet might be a better idea

Ok edited hows it look now still in process

Still too rambling and repetitive for us. Maybe write it in a word document and use grammar / spell check then copy and paste?

Just looked at yours and no idea what your after its too short each to there own i guess

But we’re not asking for advice. "

Still looking for spelling mistakes and why grammar is so important to some then bodys to faces more of your thoughts please thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I find those speech bubbles on your pic's really annoying for some reason

Ok would it be better with our heads off like your "

You asked for people to critique your profile

Slating responder's profiles is pretty bad form

You asked for advice

They didn't

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

No say it in a soft voice like i did in my mind and it does not come across as having a go at anyone no negatively on our part like i said "would it be better with our heads cut off like yours"

Im asking for some its no problem we are just trying different ways

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I find those speech bubbles on your pic's really annoying for some reason

Ok would it be better with our heads off like your

You asked for people to critique your profile

Slating responder's profiles is pretty bad form

You asked for advice

They didn't"

Yes, this exactly

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I find those speech bubbles on your pic's really annoying for some reason

Ok would it be better with our heads off like your

You asked for people to critique your profile

Slating responder's profiles is pretty bad form

You asked for advice

They didn't

Yes, this exactly "

Who's slating anyway im not getting into this seen this before on here

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ultimately, no matter how many 'thoughts' you ask for, your profile is yours. Do with it as you like, don't let it become a snapshot of what others think it should be.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thank you too all for your comments constructive feedback, everyone has different idea's and we are trying new ways and sorted and cleaned up our profile.

we are a positive couple down to earth as you can read on our verifications, text is not here or ear speech like spoken voice, most text can seem if written wrong to come across as aggressively even if not.

Even if grammar is wrong we can change it to suit like we have in the end, we are who we are right or wrong we are human like me and you.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Ultimately, no matter how many 'thoughts' you ask for, your profile is yours. Do with it as you like, don't let it become a snapshot of what others think it should be. "

True

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