FabSwingers.com forum: Only for Those Who Love D/S. The Submissive Pledge

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I saw an extract from this on a fab profile and googled it and enjoyed the whole. It is not gender neutral so apologies and it is a touch corny. But it has a truth. I hope you enjoy.

Submissive Pledge by Ramoth Ken'Und

Published: Mar 26, 2012

If it pleases him to have me kneel before Him,

I will kneel reverently.

If it pleases Him to bind me,

I will gladly offer my arms to Him.

If it pleases Him to touch me,

I will allow myself to be touched.

If it pleases Him to teach me,

I will learn all i can from Him.

If it pleases him to discipline me,

I will accept it without a sound.

If it pleases Him to allow me to serve Him,

I will serve Him with Loyalty and Devotion.

It pleases me to serve my lover without question but only when I feel that I am ready,

It will be when i see it fit.

It pleases me to let him love me,

And for eternity with blood dripped fangs i will let him

It pleases me to love him for who he is and marry him for what he means to me,

And when i see it fit to marry him he will ask my father for my hand.

It pleases me to share my heart with him,

And i am glad he feels the same.

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By *oubyLoverWoman
over a year ago

East Yorkshire

Submission is such a beautiful gift when truly given. But as this says it must be when the submissive is ready, submission taken or forced or any other way received is not true. Thanks for posting this

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I am glad that you enjoyed it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I really enjoyed reading that. Very true words

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By *addiesgirl84Woman
over a year ago

liverpool

lovely x

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By *hoenixAdAstraWoman
over a year ago

Hiding in the shadows

Very beautifully worded, and so very true

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By *ulfilthmentMan
over a year ago

Just around the corner

I see the author assumes it’s a him.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I see the author assumes it’s a him. "

True, but I did note that in my opening comments. But if you read the poem mentally substituting the appropriate gender I think it still works.

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By *oubyLoverWoman
over a year ago

East Yorkshire

"I see the author assumes it’s a him.

True, but I did note that in my opening comments. But if you read the poem mentally substituting the appropriate gender I think it still works. "

The submissive likely wrote it for her Dom so it would be oriented to that gender. Easy to substitute though

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I see the author assumes it’s a him.

True, but I did note that in my opening comments. But if you read the poem mentally substituting the appropriate gender I think it still works.

The submissive likely wrote it for her Dom so it would be oriented to that gender. Easy to substitute though

LL you are right. I had assumed a man had written it due to the gender issues. In view of the comments I did a quick Google of the writer and found this:

Lies Poem A poem i wrote when i found out my boyfriend cheated on me...

Poetry: Love, K

Star's that shine as bright as fire, Her broken hearts last desire.

Her skin so cold, Scars she bares so old.

Wishing for a hand to hold.

When she sleeps she lays and dies.

Trying to erase his many lies.

When she sleeps his face she sees, Constantly feeling he holds the keys.

She tells herself a little rhyme, To heal her heart of broken time.

Her heart is burns a constant fire, Feeling lost he was a liar.

To her face, behind her back, Her friends showed her what he lacked.

When she crys he drys her tears, She found a man to fight her fears.

Still her hands are frozen and cold, But now a hand so warm she has to hold.

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By *oubyLoverWoman
over a year ago

East Yorkshire

"I see the author assumes it’s a him.

True, but I did note that in my opening comments. But if you read the poem mentally substituting the appropriate gender I think it still works.

The submissive likely wrote it for her Dom so it would be oriented to that gender. Easy to substitute though

LL you are right. I had assumed a man had written it due to the gender issues. In view of the comments I did a quick Google of the writer and found this:

Lies Poem A poem i wrote when i found out my boyfriend cheated on me...

Poetry: Love, K

Star's that shine as bright as fire, Her broken hearts last desire.

Her skin so cold, Scars she bares so old.

Wishing for a hand to hold.

When she sleeps she lays and dies.

Trying to erase his many lies.

When she sleeps his face she sees, Constantly feeling he holds the keys.

She tells herself a little rhyme, To heal her heart of broken time.

Her heart is burns a constant fire, Feeling lost he was a liar.

To her face, behind her back, Her friends showed her what he lacked.

When she crys he drys her tears, She found a man to fight her fears.

Still her hands are frozen and cold, But now a hand so warm she has to hold."

Awww that’s beautiful

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