FabSwingers.com forum: profile text

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi guys can you help me out do you think my profile text is ok how should i improve it all info welcome thanks

By *ordonBennettMan
over a year ago

dover

It's a tough read.

Try using paragraphs.

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm sure others will be better placed to comment on the content and what works for them and the type of thing they want to read but just a couple of structural observations from me.

You might want to stick it through a spell check first. I know it's the not the most important thing on a sex site and that lots of people can't spell or are dyslexic, but for some people it does make a difference so it might be worth correcting the errors to make the profile the best it can be as your shop window.

Also, it's just one big block of text which, again, can turn some people off attempting to read it so consider punctuation and using paragraphs etc to break it up a bit.

I'm not a spelling and grammar snob myself but many are so I'm only saying this to help maximise your chances .. good luck and I hope you find what you're looking for on here!