FabSwingers.com forum: Rate my profile

By *ugbylad12392 OP Man
over a year ago

leicester

Ive tried to rewrite my profile have a look and tell me what you think please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

6/10

I just have one question: when you say I could lick your pussy to kingdom, you meant united kingdom or kingdom heart??

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By *onnor999Man
over a year ago

Wrexham

he says to kingdom come. it's a saying.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Haha I thought it meant to kingdome, come if you... haha I look like a fool then

So 7/10

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I didn't get passed your avatar. Sorry op

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By *o1978Woman
over a year ago

maidstone

Maybe have a look at other guys profiles to get some input.

Read it back to yourself as some bits need re writing as not good English.

Not being able to accommodate isn't great but maybe say about meeting at a club or getting a hotel.

Try to make the person reading your profile laugh or smile! We all do this to socialise and have fun after all.

Wish you luck. Xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Maybe have a look at other guys profiles to get some input.

Read it back to yourself as some bits need re writing as not good English.

Not being able to accommodate isn't great but maybe say about meeting at a club or getting a hotel.

Try to make the person reading your profile laugh or smile! We all do this to socialise and have fun after all.

Wish you luck. Xx"

Great ASSistive attitude Jo, early start on a Tuesday isn't all that bad after all

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Op, you say you want to meet an older woman, well any woman and later that you'll meet a couple... comes across as 'any woman cos I'm desperate' to me.

So if you met a couple, what would you have to offer? What would you bring to the mix? Does he just watch or are you hoping together you'll rock her world?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sorry...it's back to the script writing room for you. It still reads poorly and you even seem to inadvertently undersell yourself. You will not get through filters of older ladies because that means we are not interested in someone of your age. Not everyone has the filter set.

Your pictures...is that the best you can do...really ??? Your avatar looks almost scarey and your second picture with the big bushy beard ( to be fair you do look a lot older in that )makes you look VERY different...and irs more recent ...so....what DO you look like?

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By *emini ManMan
over a year ago

There and to the left a bit

Why not take some of the advice from when you asked the same thing 5 weeks ago OP and apply it.

To be honest your profile doesn't sell you at all well and is generally a bit meh, and much the same as hundreds of other single male profiles on here.

You don't need to go into gory detail about what you'd like to do either - phrases like "I could lick you to kingdom come" are more a turn off than a turned on, especially when, in the next breath, you suggest there'd need to be payback in the shape of your cock being sucked.

Your profile pics leave a lot to be desired too - maybe go for some body shots (not cock ones) that show off your torso.

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

If I see a profile that has any reference to licking pussy 'to kingdom come' it's an instant block from me, and I'm sure I'm not alone...

Keep it fairly neutral OP and try and keep the desperation out of it

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