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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I've just updated mine from the frosty "ice queen" theme... What do people think of it? Is there any changes I could make to make it more inviting?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Bit to long.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think its good and to the point although I doubt many will take the time to read it. Hope it works for you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Change the bit about being picky to 'will fuck anything'.

Seems alright, not negative until you get to the end and most people have what they don't want on their profile anyway so there has to be some negativity because of this.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I've trimmed it down a bit.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's a well written profile although maybe too much info in there, that said if you are looking mainly for friends then perhaps that extra info is not so bad as it makes for plenty of conversation openers and when all the guys who have not read it start to message you it should be easy to hit the ignore button.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sorry but Jareth is taken (mine).

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Sorry but Jareth is taken (mine).

"

We can share...

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By *astyfella999Man
over a year ago

newcastle

ohh yes u look lovly an sexy xx

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"I've just updated mine from the frosty "ice queen" theme... What do people think of it? Is there any changes I could make to make it more inviting? "

I like it. It's clear and makes you sound like an interesting person.

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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago

Bristol


"I've just updated mine from the frosty "ice queen" theme... What do people think of it? Is there any changes I could make to make it more inviting? "

Addition of a spanking photo, maybe? You can use our avatar for inspiration!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Sorry but Jareth is taken (mine).

We can share... "

Half the world wants him, reckon we're in for a long wait.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I've trimmed it down a bit. "

Nice one, but how's your profile going?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I've just updated mine from the frosty "ice queen" theme... What do people think of it? Is there any changes I could make to make it more inviting?

Addition of a spanking photo, maybe? You can use our avatar for inspiration! "

Aha! I'll make one public, just for you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good, straight to the point, say what you want. I don't think it's too long at all.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

One of the better female profiles I've read of late.

Nicely written. Clear. To the point and not too long.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"One of the better female profiles I've read of late.

Nicely written. Clear. To the point and not too long. "

Thank you lovely

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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago

Bristol


"I've just updated mine from the frosty "ice queen" theme... What do people think of it? Is there any changes I could make to make it more inviting?

Addition of a spanking photo, maybe? You can use our avatar for inspiration!

Aha! I'll make one public, just for you "

Perfect!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think it's a good profile n says what you want. I like reading them it shows effort. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It flows well but a tad long imo. I'm sure most won't read it in its entirety.

I think I know the perfick man who fits your male description

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"It flows well but a tad long imo. I'm sure most won't read it in its entirety.

I think I know the perfick man who fits your male description "

Oh??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It flows well but a tad long imo. I'm sure most won't read it in its entirety.

I think I know the perfick man who fits your male description

Oh?? "

I'll pm you in case you don't think so!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"It flows well but a tad long imo. I'm sure most won't read it in its entirety.

I think I know the perfick man who fits your male description

Oh??

I'll pm you in case you don't think so!"

Please do

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

So why can't as many men write good profiles then as women?

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