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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi all you fab peeps,ive not been here long,any advice on my profile would be a great help,many thanks

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You have a few spelling mistakes and no pics apart from that its not too bad but doesn't stand out from a lot of men's on here ....sorry not what you wanted to hear

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thats cool,thankyou x

By *renchbambi xWoman
over a year ago

Need to know basis

Add spaces between sentences...imagine you are reading a book...now reason your profile text, would you keep on reading after the first few lines?

A few pics in public will help people see you but keep cock pics in privAte.

Good luck and welcome to fabs x

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thankyou,iv'e made a couple of changes lol xx

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

If I were you I would consider taking out the 'Oh I forgot' and think about how it reads.

At the moment it reads as if you were speaking to someone and writing it out word for word as you say it

In other words, rushed!

Prospective meets will want to think that you have taken your time and thought carefully about your profile.

It's about demonstrating that you are prepared to put the effort in.

Read BETWEEN the lines. What does this profile say about you at the moment

'I'm after a quick fix'

Oh and please, please, please learn the difference between there, their and they're. It might seem pedantic but it makes a huge difference.

Just for the sake of demonstrating what we're all on about, I have taken the liberty of simply tidying up your profile text, whilst leaving it largely intact.

'I am a 41 year old straight man looking to meet women and couples.

I am very easy going, polite and not pushy in anyway.

I have total respect for people that I meet and their wishes. I am also totally discreet and would appreciate the same in return.

If you are interested please wink or mail me, putting happy in the subject box.

I have face pictures available on request.

So don't be shy, come and say 'Hi'

I think you'll agree that the text is much easier on the eye and a whole lot easier to read.

Hope this points you in the right direction

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thankyou so much for your advice.

It's been taken on board.