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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Go on give advice to the poster above you to see how they could improve their profile and chances on this wonderful site.

I would say it is not for the faint hearted but everyone was lovely on the first thread. However a gentle reminder on thread two was needed for criticism to remain constructive, and Mod input in three, so let's keep it light hearted and yet purposeful.

Do quote posts or posters names that you are critiquing because it can get confusing when the thread moves fast

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can't find a problem with yours.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can't find a problem with yours. "

Nice profile, sets out what your looking for, perhaps pics of mr to attract bi guys.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

No problems I can see however what is that cock and cake picture about? Haha

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can't find a problem with yours.

Nice profile, sets out what your looking for, perhaps pics of mr to attract bi guys."

Yes, I'm going to sort that out ASAP. Thank you

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Can't find a problem with yours.

Nice profile, sets out what your looking for, perhaps pics of mr to attract bi guys.

Yes, I'm going to sort that out ASAP. Thank you "

The above is all you need (male pics) .

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can't find a problem with yours.

Nice profile, sets out what your looking for, perhaps pics of mr to attract bi guys.

Yes, I'm going to sort that out ASAP. Thank you

The above is all you need (male pics) ."

I can't find a problem with yours, it says exactly what you are looking for and you have very tastefull photos without all your parts showing

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By *lderguy4funMan
over a year ago

ROTHERHAM

any one want to do mine lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"any one want to do mine lol"

phew,can we have sum full stops plz.lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"any one want to do mine lol

phew,can we have sum full stops plz.lol"

Only thing I see that you could possibly change is you put you cannot accommodate nor travel, so how do you meet? or am I just being an idiot here?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice pics .only thing i gave up reading profile was like way to long.like reading a book. Sorry.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Needs more pics...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Nice pics .only thing i gave up reading profile was like way to long.like reading a book. Sorry. "
that was for smellwell ..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Inviting text..lovely bum pic but shreddies pics don't do it for me. Having said that, its a pretty good profile.

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By *eading28Man
over a year ago

Reading

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Smellmell

If ginger people don't float your boat then fair enough but why the lol after ?

Just seems abit spiteful considering.

Apart from that Great profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Inviting text..lovely bum pic but shreddies pics don't do it for me. Having said that, its a pretty good profile. "
that for xnm

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Inviting text..lovely bum pic but shreddies pics don't do it for me. Having said that, its a pretty good profile. that for xnm"

A good honest profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Inviting text..lovely bum pic but shreddies pics don't do it for me. Having said that, its a pretty good profile. that for xnm

A good honest profile."

Good profile. Anybody got any advice for me?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice profile, love the bananas & mmmmm what a yummy cock

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Nice profile, love the bananas & mmmmm what a yummy cock "

Thank you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ejectjim

Your profile is absolutely awesome struggling to find a Criticism

The only thing I can come up with is that your last verification was 3 yrs ago

Clutching at straws here great profile bud

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Ejectjim

Your profile is absolutely awesome struggling to find a Criticism

The only thing I can come up with is that your last verification was 3 yrs ago

Clutching at straws here great profile bud "
only thing I can see is not looking for single men , lol , jus kidding , top profile

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By *umpleteazerWoman
over a year ago

Flintshire

Alphabetty - maybe a bit more about what you can offer a meet?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Alphabetty - maybe a bit more about what you can offer a meet?

"
thank you x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Rumpleteazer 

Nice profile .... To the point gets over what you like and don't like ... Good pics ..... Maybe a bit more about your Bi side would be interesting

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Pig slippers is the best I can come up with x

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By *onster_ManMan
over a year ago

Manchester


" Rumpleteazer 

Nice profile .... To the point gets over what you like and don't like ... Good pics ..... Maybe a bit more about your Bi side would be interesting "

Excellent profile with nice pics, and awesome sense of humour

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

How about ours ?...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Pig slippers is the best I can come up with x"

Really great profile. God pics. Only criticism is I can't tell who is man and who is woman as both called T. Assuming man is the taller one.

X

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By *onster_ManMan
over a year ago

Manchester


"Pig slippers is the best I can come up with x"

3 words: RED HOT ASS

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

needs more, well everything.

how about mine?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"needs more, well everything.

how about mine?"

Very basic, unable to accommodate and not verified will put a lot off

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"needs more, well everything.

how about mine?"

A bit too concise maybe.

Doesn't really tell the reader a great deal.

Try showing a couple of pics - non face if that is what you are comfy with - they might inspire a few to drop you a message

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like this profile, no nonsense to the point, the reader instantly knows what this couple is looking for

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Iconic top profile but bit longwinded sorry

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

How about mine?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"How about mine? "

A good selection of pics and a nicely written profile. Nitpicking I notice a few spelling mistakes/typos.

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By *ensualtouch15Man
over a year ago

ashby de la zouch

I would say no attraction is personal rejection x and just a tad condescending , that's talking down to someone

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"How about mine? "

Hi neily77.

Wow. Your profile is great. It's got good pics. Not the same old "oh look at ten pic's of my cock". It's clear in saying what your after. It's Not to long. And the best thing is that you clearly do the ironing.

My only gripe if i had to is I can't see your face and your too far away.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Anyone fancy doing mine?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"How about mine?

Hi neily77.

Wow. Your profile is great. It's got good pics. Not the same old "oh look at ten pic's of my cock". It's clear in saying what your after. It's Not to long. And the best thing is that you clearly do the ironing.

My only gripe if i had to is I can't see your face and your too far away.

"

Thank you, I do have very clear close face pics in my private photos, I can't put clear face pics on public! There is nothing wrong with a bit of naked ironing lol, all of the photos were taken tongue in cheek, trying to get my personality over lol xx

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Anyone fancy doing mine? "

Thick Ox Guy makes you sound like a stupid bull - I'd consider reviewing your photos (glasses?) and leaving the cock pics in private. This way, when a lady reads your veri and thinks 'yum big cock', she might ask for pics and then there you go....the written stuff is fine but I'd lose the bit about the other site as it adds nothing. Add in more about what you can offer and what you like/don't like. Overall though, it's a damn sight better than loads I've seen

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Anyone fancy doing mine?

Thick Ox Guy makes you sound like a stupid bull - I'd consider reviewing your photos (glasses?) and leaving the cock pics in private. This way, when a lady reads your veri and thinks 'yum big cock', she might ask for pics and then there you go....the written stuff is fine but I'd lose the bit about the other site as it adds nothing. Add in more about what you can offer and what you like/don't like. Overall though, it's a damn sight better than loads I've seen "

Sexy bugger

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Popeye, mate! You're straight! Have a wank instead (or pm me for my extra erotic "orgasm guaranteed" photo)

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I would say no attraction is personal rejection x and just a tad condescending , that's talking down to someone "

We'll agree to disagree .

Thick Ox - perhaps consider torso pics?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I cant find anything wrong with your profile!..

Enjoyed reading it!..

You could do with some more pics on your public pics!..

Your hight is perfect..

Oh...shiz...your only 24 years old too...bugger!...xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Boobs are too big

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Thanks for the tips folks. With regard to the name the one I had before was worse lol. I'm awful at thinking of stuff like that. Plus I should do an update as I don't live in Oxford anymore!

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Boobs are too big "
for one man but plenty for two

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I cant find anything wrong with your profile!..

Enjoyed reading it!..

You could do with some more pics on your public pics!..

Your hight is perfect..

Oh...shiz...your only 24 years old too...bugger!...xx

"

Nice profile says it all and lovely pics to go with it :D

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By *zanyCouple
over a year ago

truro

It's a cracking profile and articulate. What you see is what you get

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Serendipity's profile is the goldilocks of profiles, a good selection of well taken photos, a short snappy intro for the lazy sods and lots of info for the nosey sods. Her profile obviously does the job!

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By *layersdelightCouple
over a year ago

Stevenage

What does our profile portray please.

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By *ornieandhotCouple
over a year ago

Peterborough

Brightonsteve

Nice pics bum cheeks could be a little redder hehe

Profile says what it needs to and is very honest

D x

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By *odareyouMan
over a year ago

not far from iceland,,,,,, tescos is nearer though :-) (near leeds)


"What does our profile portray please. "

My suggestion is and its often said of couples profiles pictures of the gent as well,

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"What does our profile portray please. "

It's ok but no pics of male half. Also I'm not keen on the use of wiv u cpl but that's me. It feels like you've made an effort to say what you're looking for but can't be arsed wiyh the details.

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By *rinterestingMan
over a year ago

London


"Brightonsteve

Nice pics bum cheeks could be a little redder hehe

Profile says what it needs to and is very honest

D x "

Clear details of what you don't like and clear pictures of the female side good.

Maybe it's worth also mentioning some details about what your both like as well as dislike and maybe a couple pictures of the male side of you .

Someone do me please.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Boobs are too big "
I agree with you there!..

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By *al2001Man
over a year ago

kildare


"Boobs are too big I agree with you there!.."

Insane boobs.bumhole way too cute (im a bumhole kinda guy) and wont meet single guys

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By *al2001Man
over a year ago

kildare


"Boobs are too big I agree with you there!.."

Insane boobs.bumhole way too cute (im a bumhole kinda guy) and wont meet single guys

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hal2001. Great torso and ink

To far though x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Think my profile and my pictures need a full revamp. Considering whether to start it all from scratch hmmm.

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By *eyshamcoupleCouple
over a year ago

morecambe

Like the written portion of your profile made us chuckle.... but too many cock shots for us.

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"Think my profile and my pictures need a full revamp. Considering whether to start it all from scratch hmmm."

Get Tina to do a rewrite

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

(Violet in blue) great profile thought you were insane at first lol. love the wife t-shirt xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"(Violet in blue) great profile thought you were insane at first lol. love the wife t-shirt xxx "

Thought ?? I am lol xxxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"any one want to do mine lol

phew,can we have sum full stops plz.lol

Only thing I see that you could possibly change is you put you cannot accommodate nor travel, so how do you meet? or am I just being an idiot here? "

hotel in my own town.xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Smellmell

If ginger people don't float your boat then fair enough but why the lol after ?

Just seems abit spiteful considering.

Apart from that Great profile "

removed the lol.sorry if it read nasty.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Any constructive criticism for me is welcomed. xxx

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Any constructive criticism for me is welcomed. xxx"

Possibly too many cock pics but it is your choice. You may want to add why you cannot accommodate as a relationship could be assumed, losing you potential meets.

Other than that, it's a decent profile .

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great fun but so wants her profile to say bi. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Boobies are too big

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By *ensualtouch15Man
over a year ago

ashby de la zouch

Requires face pic for a reply

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

No need to "regretfully add" anything. You have standards. Be proud of them

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Taoist74. Nice profile but put the 'sideways' body shot the right way up! Looks like you're planking...!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Any constructive criticism for me is welcomed. xxx

Possibly too many cock pics but it is your choice. You may want to add why you cannot accommodate as a relationship could be assumed, losing you potential meets.

Other than that, it's a decent profile ."

Changed the amount of cock pics, you know what they say about assumption but I can see where your coming from

Its never effected my meeting i go to clubs and parties I got stalked before so never accomodate at my new place and keep my home address very hidden.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Great fun but so wants her profile to say bi. X"

I can play with women , I just don't seek them out .

Your profile is very witty with a fantastic selection of pictures.

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By *lassyandadventurousMan
over a year ago

England and Wales

its a great profile ...perfect exept one minor point

im not on her verification list x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sound nowt wrong with that

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Sound nowt wrong with that "
lol cant ssy much bout profile, still chuckling at the status update. But text chat is so last year lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Sound nowt wrong with that lol cant ssy much bout profile, still chuckling at the status update. But text chat is so last year lol "

Ar back when I was a lad thats all we dod text chat

Whats na days thing then lol?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"its a great profile ...perfect exept one minor point

im not on her verification list x"

It might have something to do with not having met lol.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Anybody want to do me?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Anybody want to do me? "

Cor yeah.

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Oh that's not what you mean

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Anybody want to do me?

Cor yeah.

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Oh that's not what you mean"

Mmmmmm private sandwich. Non vanilla ? Xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lots of boob pics. Can i see some eyes please? Im greedy like that.

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By *avNlillyCouple
over a year ago

east london


"Lots of boob pics. Can i see some eyes please? Im greedy like that.

"

Good profile & selection of pics. Would like to see more body shots though!

Oh, and really don't like the 'your lips look dry & wrinkled' opening. If you used that chat up line on me, I would not be impressed! X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Lots of boob pics. Can i see some eyes please? Im greedy like that.

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I have in my friends pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Lots of boob pics. Can i see some eyes please? Im greedy like that.

I have in my friends pics"

I like pics. But what happened at mcdonalds?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Lots of boob pics. Can i see some eyes please? Im greedy like that.

I have in my friends pics

I like pics. But what happened at mcdonalds? "

Got banned

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By *r tickle 22Man
over a year ago

Sheffeld

Her boobs are definitely bigger than mine .

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire


"Her boobs are definitely bigger than mine ."
nice pictures but text doesn't say what you are looking for or says much about you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

to diamondsmiles

not much really i can give out about

maybe hide some of your veris, be more me selective with what you show of them

(bit rich coming from a lad with none

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton


"to diamondsmiles

not much really i can give out about

maybe hide some of your veris, be more me selective with what you show of them

(bit rich coming from a lad with none "

too desperate to be verified - great pics though - more about you and less begging to be verified - it isn't the be all and end all Z

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"to diamondsmiles

not much really i can give out about

maybe hide some of your veris, be more me selective with what you show of them

(bit rich coming from a lad with none

too desperate to be verified - great pics though - more about you and less begging to be verified - it isn't the be all and end all Z"

pretty much a perfect profile to me. i like!

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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago

A seaside town near you!

Straight to the point and I love the black and red look

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By *c-ukMan
over a year ago

Sevenoaks

Can only find one thing wrong and that is my face is not burried in your bottom in the pic

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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago

A seaside town near you!

Shame you're so flippin far away

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Tc- uk

Add some more public pics...... Variety is the spice of life

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Straight to the point and I love the black and red look "

mwah xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Would like to see some pics

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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago

A seaside town near you!

I'm going to look for a red top hat now lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can't criticise a thing

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can't criticise a thing "

nope, all good to me!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'm going to look for a red top hat now lol "

I know it's one above but I went to look at pics and missed my slot lol. Anyway nice corsets and red shoes

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can't criticise a thing

nope, all good to me! "

A few piccies?!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can't criticise a thing

nope, all good to me!

A few piccies?! "

@twosevensclash

Really nice profile - has the information, no silly wording / text speak.

Spiced up with pictures,

Great profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Can't criticise a thing

nope, all good to me!

A few piccies?!

@twosevensclash

Really nice profile - has the information, no silly wording / text speak.

Many thanks! Ditto on your profile - no one line profile there! Again, a photo or two to wet the whistle for viewers? ! X

Spiced up with pictures,

Great profile "

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By *ensualtouch15Man
over a year ago

ashby de la zouch

No public pics xx

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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago

A seaside town near you!

Whit woo!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nothing I can critique. Your profile is really good! No BS you know exactly what you want!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile, good selection of photos and comprehensive description!

X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Face photo : very good

Text : pretty good to

Perhaps suggest more photos, but good to see someone willing to show their face and sure that will help you greatly

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Shameless self promotion. That's the name of the game after all. DO ME

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Is that to moi?

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By *eno_2004Man
over a year ago

Bishops Stortford

Did I mention food play?!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks ok to me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

looks great!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

ive never tried

maybe less cock pics. and maybe add a bum pic

maybe put what you like instead of saying will do anything xx

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By *mrandyMan
over a year ago

Chesterfield


"Looks ok to me"

geeee0. You have a well balanced profile ... Good headline, attractive pics ((sorry - i am bi and cant resist commenting!!!) ... Concise text ... You must do well I think ... Good luck!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Pmrandy - profile is honest and open which many will appreciate - however, adding your mobile number to your status may appear, to some, as a little too desperate maybe?

Also, folks may appreciate a body pic or two. Kudos for being brace enough to share your face pic.

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By *restatynCplCouple
over a year ago

Rhyl

Okay, have at it!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

No lack of pics or info very good x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"No lack of pics or info very good x"

Very nice profile. Sound like a lovely couple and of course very sexy pics.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

PrestatynCpl

hi. maybe have some more up to date pics and some of the male half.

if you only want to meet females and couples then remove the personal contact details and just state in the profile you have them means to contact you.

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over a year ago


"PrestatynCpl

hi. maybe have some more up to date pics and some of the male half.

if you only want to meet females and couples then remove the personal contact details and just state in the profile you have them means to contact you."

Vixen - on my friends list but not bi

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By *ensualtouch15Man
over a year ago

ashby de la zouch

I loath mc Donald s xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I loath mc Donald s xxx "

Nice pics especially the third one and profile says it all x

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By *avNlillyCouple
over a year ago

east london


"I loath mc Donald s xxx

Nice pics especially the third one and profile says it all x"

Miss muffet

Would like some more public pics, great profile! X

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over a year ago


"I loath mc Donald s xxx

Nice pics especially the third one and profile says it all x

Miss muffet

Would like some more public pics, great profile! X"

Thank you ... I have other pics but prefer to choose who I show them to. Love your profile , very to the point and honest. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Open to being critiqued ..

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By *emon tart Double creamCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

Ravnilly

Mmmmm...Very sexy pics....maybe Mr needs to be in some pics....or other parts of him if he is

Xx

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By *tarbeckCouple
over a year ago

york

good profile ,good pics

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"Ravnilly

Mmmmm...Very sexy pics....maybe Mr needs to be in some pics....or other parts of him if he is

Xx "

Straight to the point and sexy pics too. Can I have my bedbath now nurse?

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By *eforfuncplCouple
over a year ago

Morecambe

Lovelly sexy pics takes the look off that bad rug xxx

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By *eforfuncplCouple
over a year ago

Morecambe


"good profile ,good pics "

Was too slow lol

Lovelly sexy pics takes the look off that bad rug xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lemon tart & double cream

Great... Nothing really to critique

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By *tarbeckCouple
over a year ago

york

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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago

A seaside town near you!


"Nothing I can critique. Your profile is really good! No BS you know exactly what you want!"

Thank you

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By *kblokenorthMan
over a year ago

Any

Classy in those heels xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I've taken up a few hints from these threads. Anybody else got any advice for me?

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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago

A seaside town near you!


"Classy in those heels xxx"

Nice body!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Any advice for me please?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I've taken up a few hints from these threads. Anybody else got any advice for me?"

A nice enough profile; some more giggles would've been good though

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Likewise, any constructive criticism and advice would be much appreciated

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By *razedcatMan
over a year ago

London / Herts

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"[Removed by poster at 05/04/14 01:15:13]"

I like your profile no critisism

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"[Removed by poster at 05/04/14 01:15:13]

I like your profile no critisism "

Clear and a tasteful selection of pictures.

Now how can I knock 3 years off my age

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By *kblokenorthMan
over a year ago

Any

Love the soapy shots x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice profile. Little long in details.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Well hung.

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By *tarbeckCouple
over a year ago

york

tells you what he wants on his profile and nice pics

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over a year ago


"tells you what he wants on his profile and nice pics"

Great profile can't fault it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I hope this is the last version, this has ran its course now .

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By *tarbeckCouple
over a year ago

york

and i was going to say such nice things about yours

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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@ kinkyswitcher

Concise profile funny and brutal a lot less in a few linea than sone put I to a few pages xx

Great veri's

Get some photos hot girly!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I hope this is the last version, this has ran its course now . "

@ suited and booted

My first time on this thread anf I walk into that...

Why not just walk on by without the renegativity, very odd

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By *tarbeckCouple
over a year ago

york

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Starbeck - good profile, but you could consider putting up pics of Mr

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By *tarbeckCouple
over a year ago

york

funny profile ,lovely pics ,hubby pics to follow x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lovely profile. Again. I like paragraphing in profiles. Although, not necessary but it looks nicer visually.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By *ancs30Man
over a year ago

Blackpool

Quite long.... but explains everything well .... and great pics....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Popeye89 - Very well written, you manage to get your personality across and make it very clear what you're looking for and what you can offer.

If we're to be picky, the only bit of advice we can think of, you say you generally can't accomodate, but then list that you can, just a small irritation for us when people put they can accomodate, but when it comes to it, they can't. Sorry!

Generally though, a brilliant profile!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Great profile even better pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Luton Swingers

Lovely profile - personality shines through the written segment and delicious devilishness is apparent in the pictures.

I hope you both keep having lots if fun!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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@ kinkyswitcher

Concise profile funny and brutal a lot less in a few linea than sone put I to a few pages xx

Great veri's

Get some photos hot girly! "

thank you

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over a year ago


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@ kinkyswitcher

Concise profile funny and brutal a lot less in a few linea than sone put I to a few pages xx

Great veri's

Get some photos hot girly!

thank you "
short and too the point text . No pics so can't say how sexy you are . Great veris

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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@ kinkyswitcher

Concise profile funny and brutal a lot less in a few linea than sone put I to a few pages xx

Great veri's

Get some photos hot girly!

thank you short and too the point text . No pics so can't say how sexy you are . Great veris "

Good profile, very nice pics. Just one little thing, too far away

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile redscorpio , love ur pics 2

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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@ kinkyswitcher

Concise profile funny and brutal a lot less in a few linea than sone put I to a few pages xx

Great veri's

Get some photos hot girly!

thank you short and too the point text . No pics so can't say how sexy you are . Great veris

Good profile, very nice pics. Just one little thing, too far away "
Ditto to everything .

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