FabSwingers.com forum: constructive criticism for the profile above you, 3

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Go on give advice to the poster above you to see how they could improve their profile and chances on this wonderful site.

I would say it is not for the faint hearted but everyone was lovely on the first thread. However a gentle reminder on thread two was needed for criticism to remain constructive. Let's keep it light hearted and fun.

Do quote posts or posters names that you are critiquing because it can get confusing when the thread moves fast

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Cupcake. Great profile, can't fault it

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By *yronMan
over a year ago

grangemouth

Dean, wish my body was as slim as yours, great pics and you sound like a great guy. Can't fault you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very good x x x

Not too long, and not too short ( like mine)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Very good x x x

Not too long, and not too short ( like mine)"

Straight to the point, I like it!

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

"Very good x x x

Not too long, and not too short ( like mine)

Straight to the point, I like it!

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to much of a ranty profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Very good x x x

Not too long, and not too short ( like mine)"

I'd like to see a photo of your ass,but that's just me being pervy.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

erectjim - fair and to the point. Nice chatty style of writing and you come across as a genuine soul.

Won't nag you about the cock pics - some people like em!

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

"erectjim - fair and to the point. Nice chatty style of writing and you come across as a genuine soul.

Won't nag you about the cock pics - some people like em!"
could maybe put some pictures in private gallery

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Miss Gwinnie love your pics, you have a lovely smile

But I find your text a little to angry for my liking.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Dean love your profile very informative explaining what you want and what you can offer

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Miss Gwinnie love your pics, you have a lovely smile

But I find your text a little to angry for my liking. "

Well it works sixty mails a day can't be wrong! (Yes they can,of course they can).

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Miss Gwinnie love your pics, you have a lovely smile

But I find your text a little to angry for my liking.

Well it works sixty mails a day can't be wrong! (Yes they can,of course they can).

Sharp, succinct and to the point. Great profile! (Although shame about the age range. Give me a few years and I'll send you a message

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Dean love your profile very informative explaining what you want and what you can offer

Thanks..Lovely pics and i love the flow of your words. Great profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Miss Gwinnie love your pics, you have a lovely smile

But I find your text a little to angry for my liking.

Well it works sixty mails a day can't be wrong! (Yes they can,of course they can).

You are a woman. Your profile could say 'I hate men' and you will still get 60 messages a day

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

to dean 187.

very good profile. id say loose the cock pic and have pics that hint at it.

other than that its very good.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Ash1821. Profile too long, too repetitive, too contradictory and too me, me, me!

Yeah you told me that many times. Yours is hardly awe inspiring itself

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

play nice people

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ash ,,, great profile ,,, informative and took your time ,,, unlike most of " will fill in laters "

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock

Miss Gwennie. Straightforward and to the point. I don't like stuff in capitals but I can see why you have to do it for those less able to follow simple instructions. I like your pics too.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Ash1821. Profile too long, too repetitive, too contradictory and too me, me, me!

Yeah you told me that many times. Yours is hardly awe inspiring itself "

Gets me sixty mails a day and as many meets as I can handle x

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By *yronMan
over a year ago

grangemouth

"Ash1821. Profile too long, too repetitive, too contradictory and too me, me, me!

Yeah you told me that many times. Yours is hardly awe inspiring itself

Gets me sixty mails a day and as many meets as I can handle x"

i like yours, it's succint and to the point, you come across as an honest, fun person.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"play nice people

For a 1 week old profile its not bad. Great pics, profile will build as you go along. Xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Play nicely...!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Play nicely...!

sarcasm mate

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"play nice people

For a 1 week old profile its not bad. Great pics, profile will build as you go along. Xx

Profile is well written with a good pic selection, can't really criticise.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sigh.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Sigh."

Great pics, great profile. No criticism from me. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

To Welsh rarebit,

Lovely pics and nice words. You sound like great fun to meet

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think this is a pretty good profile to be honest. You kept my interest in reading it through to the end and you don't come across as cocky.

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock

Well it didn't take long to get going did it.

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By *usty_n_LustyCouple
over a year ago

Kent

sexybrian

Well written... and omg it has proper paragraphs and everything

xxx

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By *ezebelWoman
over a year ago

North of The Wall - youll need your vest

I've removed posts. Please don't use the thread for personal digs

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"sexybrian

Well written... and omg it has proper paragraphs and everything

xxx"

Why thankyou - but its sexybrain, not Brian

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By *usty_n_LustyCouple
over a year ago

Kent

"sexybrian

Well written... and omg it has proper paragraphs and everything

xxx

Why thankyou - but its sexybrain, not Brian

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooops!!! sorry

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By *yronMan
over a year ago

grangemouth

"sexybrian

Well written... and omg it has proper paragraphs and everything

xxx

Why thankyou - but its sexybrain, not Brian

oooooooooooooooooooooooooooops!!! sorry

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Busty and Lusty, i really like your profile, you come across as fun people who are up for a good laugh. And as a bonus, proper spelling!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Very good x x x

Not too long, and not too short ( like mine)

Straight to the point, I like it!

to much of a ranty profile

Too ranty or too randy ?

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By *ancs30Man
over a year ago

Blackpool

Again Short and to the point... a good profile and great pics... x

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

"Again Short and to the point... a good profile and great pics... x

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good profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good profile x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile, plenty of info about you, great pics! Good job!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile, plenty of info about you, great pics! Good job!!

Maybe a little more info regarding likes/dislikes etc. Apart from that, it's succinct and clear.

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By *usty_n_LustyCouple
over a year ago

Kent

"Great profile, plenty of info about you, great pics! Good job!!

Maybe a little more info regarding likes/dislikes etc. Apart from that, it's succinct and clear.

I really liked this profile... well written... to the point... given me some ideas too

lol x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile, very informative and fantastic array of pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile, very informative and fantastic array of pics

Good profile with some lovely pics, but doesn't need so much lipstick x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile, very informative and fantastic array of pics

Good profile with some lovely pics, but doesn't need so much lipstick x

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Was told I had no sense of humour and a prissy little princess so did a silly pic

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile, very informative and fantastic array of pics

Good profile with some lovely pics, but doesn't need so much lipstick x

Was told I had no sense of humour and a prissy little princess so did a silly pic

Frickin fit

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By *aveandkate35Couple
over a year ago

telford

"Great profile, very informative and fantastic array of pics

Good profile with some lovely pics, but doesn't need so much lipstick x

Sexybrain - personally I'd thin it out or break up your text a bit, I found myself skipping over it.

Good pics, but I know Kate just skips over any non shaved/ waxed cock pics , but that's just personal preference.

Overall seems great.

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By *aveandkate35Couple
over a year ago

telford

"Great profile, very informative and fantastic array of pics

Good profile with some lovely pics, but doesn't need so much lipstick x

Was told I had no sense of humour and a prissy little princess so did a silly pic

Frickin fit "

Ash18-21 loved your profile, and while our preferences don't match, it still had me reading and smiling to the end. Impressive.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile, very informative and fantastic array of pics

Good profile with some lovely pics, but doesn't need so much lipstick x

Was told I had no sense of humour and a prissy little princess so did a silly pic

Frickin fit "
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Liked your profile good pics also

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very nice profile and stunning pics. Only constructive thing is you mention not looking fot couples then further down in your text it says you atrt...nothing major tho x

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By *exywheelsCouple
over a year ago

inverness

Think we need some help with ours please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Very nice profile and stunning pics. Only constructive thing is you mention not looking fot couples then further down in your text it says you atrt...nothing major tho x"
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I do need to change this I forgot about it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Chaotic temptation you have it just right and nice pics to

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By *iseanMan
over a year ago

balto

Knows wat he wants and nice overall profile.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Think we need some help with ours please"

You have a good range of pics, the only problem is some of them are obscure. Perhaps less is best in this case? Or have fun posing for each other but watch what's in the background. I like the car pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Knows wat he wants and nice overall profile. "

Could do with some public pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Could do with some public pics

But enough info about your self very good I'd say

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton

"Could do with some public pics

But enough info about your self very good I'd say

nice profile Z

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Could do with some public pics

But enough info about your self very good I'd say

nice profile Z"

Really, Well thank you Zoe

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton

"Could do with some public pics

But enough info about your self very good I'd say

nice profile Z

Really, Well thank you Zoe

You're welcome! Z

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile, plenty of info about you, great pics! Good job!!

Maybe a little more info regarding likes/dislikes etc. Apart from that, it's succinct and clear.

Thanks koda taken on board ??

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Zoe's profile is excellent. I humbly took onboard the suggestions I was given so the updated, slimmer profile is now available for criticism.

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton

"Zoe's profile is excellent. I humbly took onboard the suggestions I was given so the updated, slimmer profile is now available for criticism."

Your profile is good - very informative with some good pictures - still a lot to read tho but better than having nothing. Z

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Zoe's profile is excellent. I humbly took onboard the suggestions I was given so the updated, slimmer profile is now available for criticism.

Your profile is good - very informative with some good pictures - still a lot to read tho but better than having nothing. Z"

Thank you. Perhaps I had not add in this very useful song by George Formby

"Now, I know I'm not handsome

No good looks or wealth

But the girls I chase say my plain face

Will compromise their health

Now, I know fellahs worse than me

Bow-legged and boss-eyed

Walking out with lovely women

Clinging to their side

Now, if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me

Look at Empress Josephine

The most attractive woman that ever was seen

Yet Napoleon, short and fat

Captivates a lovely looking girl like that

Now, if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me, hey-hey

Why don't women like me

Last night I went out walking

My intentions were to click

But the sights I saw while walking out

They nearly made me sick

I saw a lot of lovely girls

Attractive little dears

Arm in arm with ugly men

With cauliflower ears

Well, if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me

What can the attraction be

That's the thing that always starts to worry me

Although I haven't got a bean

I've got a lot of things the girls have never seen

Well, if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me, hey-hey

Why don't women like me

Now, I went on my holidays

Down to the gay seaside

I saw a lot of things there

Being hidden by the tide

The way the women jumped around

The men there in the sea

Made me think that there

Is still a good chance left for me

'Cause if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me

Of all the shapes and sizes there

I've got a chance of clicking yet, I do declare

Oh, I don't want to be a nark

I saw a lot of things below the water mark

Well, if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me, hey-hey

Why don't women like me

Well, if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me

Take Lord Nelson with one limb

Lady William Hamilton, she fell for him

With one eye and one arm gone west

She ran like the devil and she grabbed the rest

Well, if women like them like men like those

Why don't women like me, hey-hey

Why don't women like me"

It could be the profile help anthem.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x"

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx"

Thank you and your profile is lovely and scrummy - pity you're too far away! Z

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx"

I know.

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx

I know. "
very well written profile would be tempted to meet

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By *Ryan-Man
over a year ago

In Your Bush

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx

I know. "

About time he changed his pants

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By *Ryan-Man
over a year ago

In Your Bush

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx

I know. very well written profile would be tempted to meet

Noticeable lack of marmalade in her gallery.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx

I know. very well written profile would be tempted to meet

you just seem like a nice lady, who has lots of friends.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very strange experience

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

"Great profile.... well written and lovely pics x

Sorry that was for Zoe Steve xx

I know. very well written profile would be tempted to meet

Noticeable lack of marmalade in her gallery. "
serious lack if donkies on profile or reference to them in text

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Very strange experience "

That was for - ryan-

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton

"Very strange experience

That was for - ryan-"

peachyboo - very neat concise profile - good pics and veris Z

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Very strange experience

That was for - ryan-

peachyboo - very neat concise profile - good pics and veris Z"

Zoe_steve....a good profile with good write up, not too much reading, clear and concise, great pics too

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton

"Very strange experience

That was for - ryan-

peachyboo - very neat concise profile - good pics and veris Z

Zoe_steve....a good profile with good write up, not too much reading, clear and concise, great pics too "

ok profile - good text but perhaps a pic or 2? Z

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Seems like a good profile. Explains what he wants and shows personality. Maybe add some public pics? x

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By *yronMan
over a year ago

grangemouth

Nice, quick and concise profile, only think I'd recommend is that a couple of your public pics are pretty much the same, maybe something different?

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

"Seems like a good profile. Explains what he wants and shows personality. Maybe add some public pics? x"
looks OK to me

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By *oe_Steve_NWestCouple
over a year ago

Bolton

"Seems like a good profile. Explains what he wants and shows personality. Maybe add some public pics? xlooks OK to me

yours is fab - but we've met you and know you're lovely anyway! Z

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Seems like a good profile. Explains what he wants and shows personality. Maybe add some public pics? xlooks OK to me

yours is fab - but we've met you and know you're lovely anyway! Z"

Nice profile lots of info and great pics

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

GeordieinHerts - decent profile, although not as subtle as some, but the pics could do with improvement. It's a nice cock, but is that all you are? I'd like to see more of the person, show people that there is more to you than just a spare cock. Bring some personality into it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"GeordieinHerts - decent profile, although not as subtle as some, but the pics could do with improvement. It's a nice cock, but is that all you are? I'd like to see more of the person, show people that there is more to you than just a spare cock. Bring some personality into it.

I LOVE your profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I LOVE your profile

Your profile is good

I liked the 'wink friendly' part. It made me giggle

perhaps a few more pics? X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Fantastic profile

I LOVE your profile

Your profile is good

I liked the 'wink friendly' part. It made me giggle

perhaps a few more pics? X"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I LOVE your profile

Your profile is good

I liked the 'wink friendly' part. It made me giggle

perhaps a few more pics? X"

Same compliment I paid you on your couples profile, you have a beautiful smile, just a shame you're not looking for males x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

There's only one thing bugging me about your profile and its the word 'moreso' more than once lol

Apart from that I like it. Clear pics, confident thoughtful profile thats well written.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"There's only one thing bugging me about your profile and its the word 'moreso' more than once lol

Apart from that I like it. Clear pics, confident thoughtful profile thats well written.

A good blurb but you fall down on the picture front as many couples do. Show the male half

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Non-Vanilla

I'm out of your filters, think we could enjoy a girly gossip

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

serendipity28 great profile tells you everything you need to know can't find fault with it. You look stunning to boot

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

MRsquirt....

Excellent profile. Says what you're looking for as well as what you're about and great pics. You've done a 'Fab' job.

Lauz x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

lauzandandz.

Same for you guys! Really good profile and you look like a lovely couple too. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great pics, well written profile. Nothing to criticize. X fab

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Great pics, well written profile. Nothing to criticize. X fab"

That was for LauzandLauz

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Would anyone like to have a peek at ours X

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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago

Bristol

Goodness, we haven't been in one of these threads before, so have at us, Fabsters

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Would anyone like to have a peek at ours X

Pics are great. I think I would put all the capital letter writing at the end of your profile.

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Welsh Rarebit - great pics (obviously!), profile blurb is clear and easy to follow, but could do with a few jokes

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Goodness, we haven't been in one of these threads before, so have at us, Fabsters

Good morning. It would be good to see pics of Mr too. Your wording is good and you are clear what you want. However, you will gain and lose veris all the time, the longer you are here. You probably won't want to add every one to your profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Goodness, we haven't been in one of these threads before, so have at us, Fabsters

Maybe a few more pics (the ones on are nice)

Profile. I would perhaps get rid of the veri in there, you have a couple of nice ones anyway. X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Welsh Rarebit - great pics (obviously!), profile blurb is clear and easy to follow, but could do with a few jokes

Thanks. Any suggestions on the jokes? X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Goodness, we haven't been in one of these threads before, so have at us, Fabsters

Flame princess

Great assets nicely displayed. A no nonsense profile direct and straight to the point.

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock

"Welsh Rarebit - great pics (obviously!), profile blurb is clear and easy to follow, but could do with a few jokes

Thanks. Any suggestions on the jokes? X"

Did you hear about the dyslexic guy that walked into a bra?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Flame princess - one of the nicest sets of pics on fab

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Would anyone like to have a peek at ours X

Pics are great. I think I would put all the capital letter writing at the end of your profile.

] thank you for your thoughts x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Welsh Rarebit - great pics (obviously!), profile blurb is clear and easy to follow, but could do with a few jokes

Thanks. Any suggestions on the jokes? X

Did you hear about the dyslexic guy that walked into a bra? "

Lol. Xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Aw thank you both kind gentlemen

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Welsh rarebit. You need more pics of those sexy heels!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Help don't think mine very good ??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Help don't think mine very good ??

Pics all blurry and very similar and not that complimentary. Profile text too negative and actually inaccurate. There are many genuine single fellas in our area. Sorry hunney, but you need a good re-think on this one.

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock

"Help don't think mine very good ??

Your pics are a bit fuzzy need better ones.

Text is negative and to be honest nobody is going to be arsed to ask you anything because they don't have to. They have hundreds of guys pestering their eyes out and some of those guys will have interesting profiles. Need to tell them what you offer ans what you like.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Help don't think mine very good ??

Need to put some more description into it, let people know what you like/dislike, and don't sound so negative. Put yourself into a positive light

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Need some more pics , not of your cock though. Avatar is good , but your user name ? Is it a barcode LOL

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good variation of photos

you have a lot of writing but the subsections make it an easier read x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Good variation of photos

you have a lot of writing but the subsections make it an easier read x"

Ansolutely fabulous figure

great pics , just not enough . If you've got it flaunt it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good profile loving the sexy suit pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Good profile loving the sexy suit pics

Luv the lip licking and massive cock lol good all round profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Good profile loving the sexy suit pics

Luv the lip licking and massive cock lol good all round profile

]thank you x

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Good profile loving the sexy suit pics

Luv the lip licking and massive cock lol good all round profile

Although I understand the need to vent, your profile ends on a negative note with your PS rant. Have a rethink on whether it puts you in a good light.

Perhaps add a note as to why you cannot accommodate - many will assume you're attached and therefore bypass you.

Have an avatar pic at the very least, to make yourself memorable. Preferably put a few pics up. Sell yourself

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The licking lips pic is very sexy.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Good profile loving the sexy suit pics

Luv the lip licking and massive cock lol good all round profile

Although I understand the need to vent, your profile ends on a negative note with your PS rant. Have a rethink on whether it puts you in a good light.

Perhaps add a note as to why you cannot accommodate - many will assume you're attached and therefore bypass you.

Have an avatar pic at the very least, to make yourself memorable. Preferably put a few pics up. Sell yourself

although you want to make a few things clear I would remove the capitals as it feels like I am being shouted at just for reading your profile.

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

"Welsh Rarebit - great pics (obviously!), profile blurb is clear and easy to follow, but could do with a few jokes

Thanks. Any suggestions on the jokes? X"

Sorry for the delay - work - tell them to bring ear plugs for themselves and your neighbours in the vocal bit, gushing, perhaps a gag about supply your own canoe...

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock

"Welsh Rarebit - great pics (obviously!), profile blurb is clear and easy to follow, but could do with a few jokes

Thanks. Any suggestions on the jokes? X

Sorry for the delay - work - tell them to bring ear plugs for themselves and your neighbours in the vocal bit, gushing, perhaps a gag about supply your own canoe...

Lifejackets wouldn't be a bad idea to be honest.

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By *mallteaserWoman
over a year ago

Central

Lovely use of a tool, lol x

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By *habsMan
over a year ago

Fortress of Solitude, Middlesex

"Lovely use of a tool, lol x"

Could be longer

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Lovely use of a tool, lol x

Could be longer

"
nice pics, look a fun down to earth guy, but profile abit serious and doesnt show ur personality that ur pics do

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock

"Lovely use of a tool, lol x"

Thanks but it's always well to remember that a tool is only as good as the craftsman that uses it.

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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago

Bristol

Thanks, yes we are going to get some more added we think. We really liked that veri though

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Thanks, yes we are going to get some more added we think. We really liked that veri though

More of those sexy pics!

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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago

Bristol

"Goodness, we haven't been in one of these threads before, so have at us, Fabsters

Heh, yes, noted. We do send pics out of Mr when we message, as we send face pics etc, but we really should have some on profile. Thanks!

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock

"Thanks, yes we are going to get some more added we think. We really liked that veri though

Pics are very sexy. Maybe a few more would be better and some of the two of you. I love a well written and articulate profile.

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By *dwalu2Couple
over a year ago

Bristol

"Thanks, yes we are going to get some more added we think. We really liked that veri though

More of those sexy pics!

Thankyou!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Edwalu. More pics. Looking very hot!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Thanks, yes we are going to get some more added we think. We really liked that veri though

More of those sexy pics!

Thankyou!

I think its one of the best I've seen - good job!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"to dean 187.

very good profile. id say loose the cock pic and have pics that hint at it.

other than that its very good."

some women like the cock pics, I know Ido

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"to dean 187.

very good profile. id say loose the cock pic and have pics that hint at it.

other than that its very good.

some women like the cock pics, I know Ido"

Its a good profile, detailed without being long winded, and you're clear on the types of guys you're looking to meet.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Not bad Sexybrain but you've made 1 big mistake ..... you say you don't meet couples.... I really think you should change that part. The rest is perfect

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Not bad Sexybrain but you've made 1 big mistake ..... you say you don't meet couples.... I really think you should change that part. The rest is perfect

Crackin profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

honest but maybe a bit more info on what your general interests are!? x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"honest but maybe a bit more info on what your general interests are!? x"

Great selection of pics, nice to see both female and male on public gallery plus profile text is friendly and clear in what your both looking for

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"honest but maybe a bit more info on what your general interests are!? x

Great selection of pics, nice to see both female and male on public gallery plus profile text is friendly and clear in what your both looking for

Sorry , I didnt get past just staring at the picture

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Suitednbooted - wouldn't recommend any changes. Text body makes it clear what you're looking for and the wide variety of pictures- what's on offer.

Particularly enjoying the shots of your trousers straining against your bulge

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Yes - good profile with good clear description of what you enjoy and would like. Nice pictures with the promise of more to those you befriend. Don't think you need to change it other than perhaps to add a body shot - but that's because you have me interested!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Yes - good profile with good clear description of what you enjoy and would like. Nice pictures with the promise of more to those you befriend. Don't think you need to change it other than perhaps to add a body shot - but that's because you have me interested!!"

A variety of pics would be nice.

By breaking body of text into paragraphs you'll make it easier to read.

Perhaps add why you cannot accommodate otherwise assumptions could be made and you'll be bypassed.

"relp"?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wdavid !

Well written profile , come across as a nice guy but only one picture . You need some more and a variety .

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By *aughty Wigan CoupleCouple
over a year ago

Wigan

Miss Cupcake, although the profile did initially seem a little long, it is well set out, states exactly what you are looking for from a meet and who you are and want to meet. Like the way it is set out and nice photos.

If I had to be critical, I would start with the Yes's before the No's (looks less negative) but then again, some wouldn't bother reading the No's and just dive in

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By *lassyandadventurousMan
over a year ago

England and Wales

i think this is a very nice profile...well worked out overall.

well done...heres a gold star lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Not bad Sexybrain but you've made 1 big mistake ..... you say you don't meet couples"

Its not a mistake, its a preference, but thankyou regardless x

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Miss Cupcake, although the profile did initially seem a little long, it is well set out, states exactly what you are looking for from a meet and who you are and want to meet. Like the way it is set out and nice photos.

If I had to be critical, I would start with the Yes's before the No's (looks less negative) but then again, some wouldn't bother reading the No's and just dive in

Thank you. I did have it the other way around but if someone actually bothers to read it all the way through

, then the negativity is lost midway as opposed to almost ending on it

Sexybrain - a variety of pics which is good and a well thought out profile. Having read your forum posts, I didn't realise you're as young as you are, so compliments Sir

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Not bad Sexybrain but you've made 1 big mistake ..... you say you don't meet couples

Its not a mistake, its a preference, but thankyou regardless x"

you sure you don't meet couples x

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"i think this is a very nice profile...well worked out overall.

well done...heres a gold star lol"

Pics with flashes arggggghhh, we the public prefer a man flashing not his phone or camera

(Ok I speak for myself).

As for the blurb, your warnings are just a waste of bandwidth, you could make them humorous

Perhaps add a note as to why you don't accommodate as assumptions may be made to your disadvantage.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Not bad Sexybrain but you've made 1 big mistake ..... you say you don't meet couples

Its not a mistake, its a preference, but thankyou regardless x

you sure you don't meet couples x

Wahey a couple's profile with pics of both. Although worrying soapy boobs and soapy cock, if you put them together....

okay I have a wicked mind

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Non vanillas is good. Nothing worth improving.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Not bad Sexybrain but you've made 1 big mistake ..... you say you don't meet couples

Its not a mistake, its a preference, but thankyou regardless x

you sure you don't meet couples x

Wahey a couple's profile with pics of both. Although worrying soapy boobs and soapy cock, if you put them together....

okay I have a wicked mind

lol never thought of that

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

AJ Horny Two - not keen on the BLOCK CAPITALS,

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"AJ Horny Two - not keen on the BLOCK CAPITALS,

me either was the Mr he thinks it will make people read it ..lol bless him hasn't got it yet that not many actually do or ever will X

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By *cjoyCouple
over a year ago

Galway

AJ Horny two.

Lovely profile, although I do agree with the capitals .... Not a fan.

Great photos!!!!!

Miss Mcjoy

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By *exyfuncouple-40Couple
over a year ago

Bloxham

"AJ Horny two.

Lovely profile, although I do agree with the capitals .... Not a fan.

Great photos!!!!!

Miss Mcjoy

Not near London

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"AJ Horny two.

Lovely profile, although I do agree with the capitals .... Not a fan.

Great photos!!!!!

Miss Mcjoy

I Agree too X would like to see more male pics in your profile x

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By *cjoyCouple
over a year ago

Galway

I Agree too X would like to see more male pics in your profile x

Thank you, we will take that on board...... I'll have to get my camera out

Miss Mcjoy

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Quick check in. Selfless exploitation.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X"

Lol no criticism eith chav bit did mske me chuckle tho x

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By *usty_n_LustyCouple
over a year ago

Kent

"Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X

Lol no criticism eith chav bit did mske me chuckle tho x"

Love the profile... lol'd when i read the bit of only grabbing your cock if crap in bed!!!! Still chuckling now!!! lol!!! x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X

Lol no criticism eith chav bit did mske me chuckle tho x

Love the profile... lol'd when i read the bit of only grabbing your cock if crap in bed!!!! Still chuckling now!!! lol!!! x"

Love busty and lusty..they have it alll

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X

Lol no criticism eith chav bit did mske me chuckle tho x

Love the profile... lol'd when i read the bit of only grabbing your cock if crap in bed!!!! Still chuckling now!!! lol!!! x"

Lol ty thats the aim to make peeps who read it chuckle

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By *exyfuncouple-40Couple
over a year ago

Bloxham

"Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X

Lol no criticism eith chav bit did mske me chuckle tho x

Love the profile... lol'd when i read the bit of only grabbing your cock if crap in bed!!!! Still chuckling now!!! lol!!! x

Lol ty thats the aim to make peeps who read it chuckle

One thing we would suggest is you remove poor old Bert from the chippy I sure the poor lad works to hard so a bit of fun should be allowed

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X

Lol no criticism eith chav bit did mske me chuckle tho x

Love the profile... lol'd when i read the bit of only grabbing your cock if crap in bed!!!! Still chuckling now!!! lol!!! x

Lol ty thats the aim to make peeps who read it chuckle

One thing we would suggest is you remove poor old Bert from the chippy I sure the poor lad works to hard so a bit of fun should be allowed

"
everything was a plus not much criticism. Not to keen on the need to say no institute blah blah but if that makes you comfortable then carry on

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By *exyfuncouple-40Couple
over a year ago

Bloxham

"Shockingly. No critism for the above pirate profile !! X

Lol no criticism eith chav bit did mske me chuckle tho x

Love the profile... lol'd when i read the bit of only grabbing your cock if crap in bed!!!! Still chuckling now!!! lol!!! x

Lol ty thats the aim to make peeps who read it chuckle

One thing we would suggest is you remove poor old Bert from the chippy I sure the poor lad works to hard so a bit of fun should be allowed

everything was a plus not much criticism. Not to keen on the need to say no institute blah blah but if that makes you comfortable then carry on

Removed

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile and crystal clear

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By *acilory39Man
over a year ago

out n about

Very good profile , direct , knows what he's looking for , well written

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Very good profile , direct , knows what he's looking for , well written "

straight to the point and you come across as a positive person. However, I'd probably just look at your punctuation and the use of slang within sentences. Some people are a little 'picky' and you could possibly miss out on potential meets from something that basic. It doesn't have to be perfect but something as simple as replacing your commas with full stops (where appropriate) might help.

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