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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique

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By *r mrs pCouple
over a year ago

taunton


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique "

mmmmmmmmm lol.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique

mmmmmmmmm lol. "

Stop quoting Rod Stewart lyrics! lol

Other than that, niiice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Need help I know it needs pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You need help and pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Profiles spot on interuptus. Says what you want

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

short and sweet straight to the point - like that a lot - maybe a bit more about you - but its fine as far as i can see

xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"short and sweet straight to the point - like that a lot - maybe a bit more about you - but its fine as far as i can see

xx"

this for the peachy one lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique "

You know I like your profile.. Its firm and wordy..so it will seperate the wheat from the chaff..ie: a fair few won't understand what you are actually after but they will still trip over tail to offer their wares..

Buts its not fair because I also know how hot you look..but I like it.x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics"

Perfect profile xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx"

Same goes for you ironicallyx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hhhmmm not sure about your profile Hipstir think you need some help .... Id love to offer my services

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

To hornycouple - great profile and pics - why are you so damn far away??!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hhhmmm not sure about your profile Hipstir think you need some help .... Id love to offer my services "

Shush..x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx

Same goes for you ironicallyx"

Who's ironically?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Need help I know it needs pics"

??

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx"

Thanks (think it was for us - damn confusing on here!). But anyway, yours is rather lovely

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Fuck sake this moves way to fast

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Need help I know it needs pics

?? "

Great profile, hot pics! Seems you know exactly what you are looking for

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By *harma and GregCouple
over a year ago

Northampton

Good pics but need more about yourself

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"To hornycouple - great profile and pics - why are you so damn far away??!!"

none

i like it

pics match the profile vibe too

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique

You know I like your profile.. Its firm and wordy..so it will seperate the wheat from the chaff..ie: a fair few won't understand what you are actually after but they will still trip over tail to offer their wares..

Buts its not fair because I also know how hot you look..but I like it.x"

Would you prefer me not looking hot?

Btw why haven't you instilled any humour in your profile? You know it'd tempt someone like me.

Keeps a poker face

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx

Same goes for you ironicallyx

Who's ironically? "

interruptus says she likes dressing to "tease and please"...very off putting indeed!

I mean really?...how very dare you if I might say so myself.

Dispicable!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique

You know I like your profile.. Its firm and wordy..so it will seperate the wheat from the chaff..ie: a fair few won't understand what you are actually after but they will still trip over tail to offer their wares..

Buts its not fair because I also know how hot you look..but I like it.x

Would you prefer me not looking hot?

Btw why haven't you instilled any humour in your profile? You know it'd tempt someone like me.

Keeps a poker face "

No..hots good for me..humour..me!!!

Deadly serious me...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx

Thanks (think it was for us - damn confusing on here!). But anyway, yours is rather lovely "

Lol blink and you miss it. Yes my comment was for you interuptus x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique "

Good profile. Eloquently written so should attract the right attention. Good selection of seductive pics.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good pics but need more about yourself "

Thankyou i will try to put a little more on there

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Lost me at 'subjugate' and scrolled fown for the boobies...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx

Same goes for you ironicallyx

Who's ironically?

interruptus says she likes dressing to "tease and please"...very off putting indeed!

I mean really?...how very dare you if I might say so myself.

Dispicable! "

Ben, why are you picking on Status Quo. Admittedly they were formed before you were born but they do still rock

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx

Same goes for you ironicallyx

Who's ironically?

interruptus says she likes dressing to "tease and please"...very off putting indeed!

I mean really?...how very dare you if I might say so myself.

Dispicable! "

I'll have you know that teasing and pleasing at the same time is considered a real skill round these parts!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You need help and pics

Perfect profile xx

Same goes for you ironicallyx

Who's ironically?

interruptus says she likes dressing to "tease and please"...very off putting indeed!

I mean really?...how very dare you if I might say so myself.

Dispicable!

I'll have you know that teasing and pleasing at the same time is considered a real skill round these parts! "

Nicely written, hint of tease with a suggestive picture. Gets my vote

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Ben, why are you picking on Status Quo. Admittedly they were formed before you were born but they do still rock "

No not that type of status quo!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

I'll have you know that teasing and pleasing at the same time is considered a real skill round these parts! "

send me dirty pictures of your teasing and pleasing or nope....sorry don't believe ya!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique

Good profile. Eloquently written so should attract the right attention. Good selection of seductive pics."

Pirate, you worryingly have a man on your cock. I'll elaborate: a face of a man on your cock. My advice would be to offer those many wenches who will succumb to your shivers, a blind fold. You certainly have much to offer, so as long as they don't spy that face, you're very good to go.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Ben, why are you picking on Status Quo. Admittedly they were formed before you were born but they do still rock

No not that type of status quo! "

Excellent use of coordinates

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I was reading some profiles and was itching to give some constructive criticism, but it's not always welcome, so this thread will suffice.

Go on, start by giving me a critique

Good profile. Eloquently written so should attract the right attention. Good selection of seductive pics.

Pirate, you worryingly have a man on your cock. I'll elaborate: a face of a man on your cock. My advice would be to offer those many wenches who will succumb to your shivers, a blind fold. You certainly have much to offer, so as long as they don't spy that face, you're very good to go."

I got that tattoo after losing a bet.

It's Cock Norris

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"

Ben, why are you picking on Status Quo. Admittedly they were formed before you were born but they do still rock

No not that type of status quo!

Excellent use of coordinates"

ah Cheers bro! Means a lot to me.

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By *uby0000Woman
over a year ago

hertfordshire

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Lost me at 'subjugate' and scrolled fown for the boobies... "

You're welcome to perve the boonies and also google subjugate. In the meantime I'll google Idris Alba

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"[Removed by poster at 27/03/14 20:42:26]"

Plenty of tasteful pics and text is to the point. I'd like a bit more about you but I don't think most people would worry about that.

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By *indys loverCouple
over a year ago

Stratford on avon

only one critism of Ruby0000 profile

she says she doesnt like outdoor sex ,,,,,,, tragic

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"only one critism of Ruby0000 profile

she says she doesnt like outdoor sex ,,,,,,, tragic "

I could only improve it by removing

Not looking for single guys

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"To hornycouple - great profile and pics - why are you so damn far away??!!"

thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"To hornycouple - great profile and pics - why are you so damn far away??!!

thanks "

Some nice pics, wife is gorgeous x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Would say you don't need to right No single men

twice as your heading, think people can read,

other than that I can't really complain.... oh I can

no single men!? ha

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good profile

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By *ecketwaitMan
over a year ago

London

Seems fine

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

To the point x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good"

Post some pics for the women

change name?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good"

Missing a public piccie, nobody fancies the silhouette

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good

Post some pics for the women

change name?

"

The name should of been thepussymuncher but I miss spelled lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good

Missing a public piccie, nobody fancies the silhouette "

Great profile , possibly add some more erotic pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good

Missing a public piccie, nobody fancies the silhouette "

The only thing is that the picture with the morphed faces freaks me out haha... I have an irrational fear of swirly faces

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good

Missing a public piccie, nobody fancies the silhouette

Great profile , possibly add some more erotic pics "
we keep those for the people that would like to meet us

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good

Missing a public piccie, nobody fancies the silhouette

The only thing is that the picture with the morphed faces freaks me out haha... I have an irrational fear of swirly faces "

only your age range,

add a couple of years to it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good profile "

Was you referring to me?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good profile

Was you referring to me?"

Tythedick yes I was x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good profile

Was you referring to me?"

pretty good profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good profile

Was you referring to me?

Tythedick yes I was x"

Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good profile

Was you referring to me?

Tythedick yes I was x

Thanks "
Well if I was a memeber of the grammar police I might pick you up on the difference between "your" & "you're" but that's petty (& i now I'm knot perfect.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Biker Mike would benefit from a bike photo not a car one.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Biker Mike would benefit from a bike photo not a car one. "

Don't remind me. I ended up doing the alps in that Audi instead of my Bird as I chucked her down the road about 100 clicks south of Rome

(wanders away to put a bike pic back on)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

My constructive advice would be to change the profile pic, it's like Edward Scissor-Cock! Haha

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Biker Mike would benefit from a bike photo not a car one.

Don't remind me. I ended up doing the alps in that Audi instead of my Bird as I chucked her down the road about 100 clicks south of Rome

(wanders away to put a bike pic back on)"

Straight to the point

face pics

its all good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Biker Mike would benefit from a bike photo not a car one.

Don't remind me. I ended up doing the alps in that Audi instead of my Bird as I chucked her down the road about 100 clicks south of Rome

(wanders away to put a bike pic back on)

Straight to the point

face pics

its all good "

Ta, say pretty much the same for yours(other than face pics but appreciate that's a presonal choice).

The only thing I would possibly question if I was a woman though is your love of hotels. Is it becasue you have problems accomodating or do you just find them a useful place to stock up on free toiletries

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Biker Mike would benefit from a bike photo not a car one. "

Well folks, a guy who takes my advice! Remarkable!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Biker Mike would benefit from a bike photo not a car one.

Well folks, a guy who takes my advice! Remarkable! "

Just don't let it go to your head lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Biker Mike would benefit from a bike photo not a car one.

Don't remind me. I ended up doing the alps in that Audi instead of my Bird as I chucked her down the road about 100 clicks south of Rome

(wanders away to put a bike pic back on)

Straight to the point

face pics

its all good

Ta, say pretty much the same for yours(other than face pics but appreciate that's a presonal choice).

The only thing I would possibly question if I was a woman though is your love of hotels. Is it becasue you have problems accomodating or do you just find them a useful place to stock up on free toiletries "

I just like staying in new places like hotels

no problem about accommodating

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Meet more people x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Just rewritten mine so wouldn't mine someone to give it a look over. I intend to take some more/better pictures but that'll have to wait until I get an opportunity.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Any advice on mine would be welcomed

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Just rewritten mine so wouldn't mine someone to give it a look over. I intend to take some more/better pictures but that'll have to wait until I get an opportunity. "

It's crap, mate.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Any advice on mine would be welcomed"

Fairly generic text, would be nice to know more about you.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Any advice on mine would be welcomed"

I would publish all the veris.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Meet more people x "

If that was for me,

Am working on it,

I have a page full of messages with a yellow background

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good profile

Was you referring to me?

Tythedick yes I was x

Thanks Well if I was a memeber of the grammar police I might pick you up on the difference between "your" & "you're" but that's petty (& i now I'm knot perfect."

You referring to this sentence

you've read now how about you tell me about yourself?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Any advice on mine would be welcomed

I would publish all the veris. "

I would mate there from a while back and there no longer on here not really a good advert lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Any advice on mine would be welcomed

I would publish all the veris.

I would mate there from a while back and there no longer on here not really a good advert lol"

Nice profile and pics. Short and to the point.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Just rewritten mine so wouldn't mine someone to give it a look over. I intend to take some more/better pictures but that'll have to wait until I get an opportunity.

It's crap, mate. "

It's a steaming pile of Steve?

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Nope, there's a 'your' / 'you're' mistake...

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Just rewritten mine so wouldn't mine someone to give it a look over. I intend to take some more/better pictures but that'll have to wait until I get an opportunity.

It's crap, mate.

It's a steaming pile of Steve? "

And get ya haircut, scruff!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

People who cannot receive and take on board constructive criticism aren't really able to deal with life's problems... The big ones anyway

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

maybe a different pair of jocks to mix it up?

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"maybe a different pair of jocks to mix it up?"

Good pics, needs a little more info about specifics.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"maybe a different pair of jocks to mix it up?

Good pics, needs a little more info about specifics. "

Tbh that amount of profile text makes me not want to read it... Good selection of pictures though

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

BrightonSteve - good profile, but perhaps consider editing it down a tad

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"BrightonSteve - good profile, but perhaps consider editing it down a tad "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I wouldn't criticise anyone but I would love to hear from all you lovely people to build a better profile. Go all

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"BrightonSteve - good profile, but perhaps consider editing it down a tad "

I can't! I've tried! I could write 10 times more! I need help, my profile is long but flaccid, too weighty and heavy to be of use. Nice to look at but...ya know

Emergency profile excision needed.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"BrightonSteve - good profile, but perhaps consider editing it down a tad

"

No criticism of yours but feel free to slate mine lol xx

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Broc - it is a bit vanilla in that nothing really stands out. It could do with being more original.

Your pics are fine, but consider a better variety, some clothed, some suggestive, some in nice locations, like a pub, or climbing a tree.

Be different to the herd.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Do mine please Tina. I've just rewritten it so feel free to be brutal.

I know I need more pictures but I haven't had a chance...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Tina titz you have it all!!!!!

I'm just a woman of few words, but ..shoot...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Gorgeous pics would love to know more about you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Tina titz you have it all!!!!!

I'm just a woman of few words, but ..shoot..."

More info about you?,

But your pictures do all your talking

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts


"Do mine please Tina. I've just rewritten it so feel free to be brutal.

I know I need more pictures but I haven't had a chance... "

The Libertine - very good blurb and cracking if criminally underfabbed pics. A few more pics wouldn't hurt, but it's a good solid profile. Consider ending on a joke.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Consider ending on a joke. "

Ooh good idea, I like it. Thank you!

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"Tina titz you have it all!!!!!

I'm just a woman of few words, but ..shoot..."

Very nice pics. Would love a bit more info though.

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts


"Tina titz you have it all!!!!!

I'm just a woman of few words, but ..shoot..."

LipGloss

The blurb is pretty grim, it is way to short, but frankly, you are a single lass, have good pics, you could word your blurb: I'm a single lass, I work on the bins for the council and have an hobby mounting road kill on the wall of my shed. I'm here to make cake and murder people with the lead piping in the study' and it wouldn't make any odds, you'll still get lots of messages.

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts


"Consider ending on a joke.

Ooh good idea, I like it. Thank you! "

Why did the fabster get to the end of the profile? They were reading it at work.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Littledannyboy that was quite a read. However, i liked what I was reading: you sound intelligent, caring and thoughtful. Your photos are good..not too crass, and it's clear you are a sensualist. Yours is a profile worth looking at.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Consider ending on a joke.

Ooh good idea, I like it. Thank you!

Why did the fabster get to the end of the profile? They were reading it at work. "

Well Tina I took the time took for the board to revolve but you had me with 'manic miner'..very clever although some of your pictures remind me of 'the goodies' annual I used to have as a kid..I think that's a positive thing mind..and I must admit the clingy batman number is a brand in itself.

Its a thumb up from me

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"Littledannyboy that was quite a read. However, i liked what I was reading: you sound intelligent, caring and thoughtful. Your photos are good..not too crass, and it's clear you are a sensualist. Yours is a profile worth looking at. "

Thanks. It's hard to strike a balance between overblown and saying what you want to say but I reckon the people who can be arsed to battle through to the end are the sort I'm after anyway.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Some constructive input on my profile would be good.Be nice,it's nice to be nice.

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By *eneral HysteriaMan
over a year ago

Newcastle


"Some constructive input on my profile would be good.Be nice,it's nice to be nice."

Break it up a little.

Employ paragraphs making it easier to read.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ayeman..

Can't fault it really. One critique would be that you state you are married, is this with or without her consent? My critique would be to state that.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Some constructive input on my profile would be good.Be nice,it's nice to be nice.

Break it up a little.

Employ paragraphs making it easier to read."

Personally, i don't like the use of the full stops in the profile in that way. Maybe if it was arranged to make a nice pattern then maybe.

But, that's just my opinion. Write your profile as you so wish - reflect yourself.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Naughtybyname88 

Short and sweet ... Sort of make you wanna ask more ... But a pic other than your dick would be nice

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By *eneral HysteriaMan
over a year ago

Newcastle


"Ayeman..

Can't fault it really. One critique would be that you state you are married, is this with or without her consent? My critique would be to state that."

I say I'm married on there because I am (without consent) and it avoids getting into conversation with some who 'don't do marrieds'.

This can, and has, wasted a lot of time in the past... I can't fault yours to be honest unless I was going to be the grammar police - small g for Good.

Crisp and to the point.

That's all.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Some constructive input on my profile would be good.Be nice,it's nice to be nice.

Break it up a little.

Employ paragraphs making it easier to read."

Thanks,man.You were right,advice taken.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Awesome

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

secret agent 007

no pics =( it'd be nice to see you....but not very secretive for you i suppose..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

An interesting read for me but I guess some people might think too much script x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Good profile states what you want short and sweet

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"An interesting read for me but I guess some people might think too much script x"

Creative pictures and seems a really nice girl but I would say profile is quite short. Also a bit negative in saying things you don't want instead of simply outlining what you want?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"An interesting read for me but I guess some people might think too much script x"

Straight to the point and knows what you want

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I would welcome constructive criticism on mine if you want

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Any help would be great fully received.

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over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Any help would be great fully received. "
remove the kik addy, shows desperation and ditch the Sydney uni warning, totally useless.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

New profile this way.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"New profile this way. "

It's good.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

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By *udistnorthantsMan
over a year ago

Desborough


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative "

Very informative and some nice clear pics... my only minor critique is that I'm out of your age group

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Very informative and some nice clear pics... my only minor critique is that I'm out of your age group "
thanks glad you like

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative "

Thanks, I wanted to get a lot of information out there so people could make an informed choice. I'm beginning to think people aren't reading it all and getting bored. I'm in the process of editing it to make it snappier and even more exciting.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Very informative and some nice clear pics... my only minor critique is that I'm out of your age group "

Your comment about Syndney University made I chuckle

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By *udistnorthantsMan
over a year ago

Desborough


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Very informative and some nice clear pics... my only minor critique is that I'm out of your age group

Your comment about Syndney University made I chuckle "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Very informative and some nice clear pics... my only minor critique is that I'm out of your age group

Your comment about Syndney University made I chuckle

"

Cock pics are a bit "in your face" but I suppose that's the desired effect. Lots of pics and a humorous profile text. Not to bad

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Very informative and some nice clear pics... my only minor critique is that I'm out of your age group

Your comment about Syndney University made I chuckle

Cock pics are a bit "in your face" but I suppose that's the desired effect. Lots of pics and a humorous profile text. Not to bad"

Think this is one of the best profile texts I've seen, brilliant mate

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Very informative and some nice clear pics... my only minor critique is that I'm out of your age group

Your comment about Syndney University made I chuckle

Cock pics are a bit "in your face" but I suppose that's the desired effect. Lots of pics and a humorous profile text. Not to bad

Think this is one of the best profile texts I've seen, brilliant mate "

Cheers shipmate

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nice profile, can't say much wrong, full of humour and " that over my knee thing"

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By *ENDAROOSCouple
over a year ago

South West London / Surrey


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Thanks, I wanted to get a lot of information out there so people could make an informed choice. I'm beginning to think people aren't reading it all and getting bored. I'm in the process of editing it to make it snappier and even more exciting. "

I read all of your profile and didn't fall asleep.

Very informative and left with no doubt what your looking for and enjoy.

Could be trimmed down a little in places but I liked it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Thanks, I wanted to get a lot of information out there so people could make an informed choice. I'm beginning to think people aren't reading it all and getting bored. I'm in the process of editing it to make it snappier and even more exciting.

I read all of your profile and didn't fall asleep.

Very informative and left with no doubt what your looking for and enjoy.

Could be trimmed down a little in places but I liked it.

"

Good profile! Says what you's want and like and nice pictures !

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Libertine - you may want to add about dead lodgers alongside the hookers if you houseshare. It's a good profile

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"A very long profile but what read of it, it seemed great very informative

Thanks, I wanted to get a lot of information out there so people could make an informed choice. I'm beginning to think people aren't reading it all and getting bored. I'm in the process of editing it to make it snappier and even more exciting.

I read all of your profile and didn't fall asleep.

Very informative and left with no doubt what your looking for and enjoy.

Could be trimmed down a little in places but I liked it.

Good profile! Says what you's want and like and nice pictures ! "

Vary your pics a little? Also add why you cannot accommodate. Rightly or wrongly people assume attached, though in this case I'd expect your parents wouldn't like it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Libertine - you may want to add about dead lodgers alongside the hookers if you houseshare. It's a good profile "

Vanilla Cupcake.

Terrible profile.

I wouldn't meet you...

oh...I did.

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By *kexpat81Man
over a year ago

Aldgate

Not as good as mine ha ha

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Libertine - you may want to add about dead lodgers alongside the hookers if you houseshare. It's a good profile

Vanilla Cupcake.

Terrible profile.

I wouldn't meet you...

oh...I did. "

The terrible profile is part of my charm

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By *nigmatic1Woman
over a year ago

A seaside town near you!

Brilliant profile miss cupcake...made me laugh

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Not as good as mine ha ha"

Put the toilet seat down

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Non-Vanilla-Cupsicle

An enjoyable and level headed profile

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Brilliant profile miss cupcake...made me laugh "

Wonderful selection of photos and lingerie, another corset lover I see .

As for the blurb... You tell 'em girl

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very funny,can't fault it

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Not as good as mine ha ha

Put the toilet seat down "

Non vanilla cupcake - delicious profile.

Don't bother commenting on mine. It's like straggly pubic hair - needs a trim.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Very funny,can't fault it "

well, at least we know what you dont want/do lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Very funny,can't fault it

well, at least we know what you dont want/do lol"

I'm scary

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Not as good as mine ha ha

Put the toilet seat down

Non vanilla cupcake - delicious profile.

Don't bother commenting on mine. It's like straggly pubic hair - needs a trim. "

You made me laugh so much I started coffin... Oh that's wrong, that's man flu stuff .

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I need to find my glasses to read your profile...but your pics look good x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Iiiiin 1 Tina anything you write is a pleasure to read.

Wishywashy try harder if you want to be scary.

Herc your pics are imaginative and your blurb shows you in a softer light than your forum posts

Steve long doesn't have to be bad, I didn't nod off

Missie you may want to add why you cannot accommodate, but then men may not be as nosy as us women

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Well have fun with ours

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Funny but a bit long, some more pics would improve things x

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By *eading28Man
over a year ago

Reading

Go on then, be brutal people I can take it lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Iiiiin 1 Tina anything you write is a pleasure to read.

Wishywashy try harder if you want to be scary.

Herc your pics are imaginative and your blurb shows you in a softer light than your forum posts

Steve long doesn't have to be bad, I didn't nod off

Missie you may want to add why you cannot accommodate, but then men may not be as nosy as us women "

Ok lol Will try harder

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Funny but a bit long, some more pics would improve things x"

New pics added

Just for you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Funny but a bit long, some more pics would improve things x

New pics added

Just for you "

i had absolutely no idea what it was about until the end lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Funny but a bit long, some more pics would improve things x

New pics added

Just for you

i had absolutely no idea what it was about until the end lol"

Nice pics and a good list of things you like to do so overall good profile

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By *tarbeckCouple
over a year ago

york

a little bit short but good pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"a little bit short but good pics"

. Yes it is a little .thank you about my pics

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"a little bit short but good pics"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"a little bit short but good pics

"

i know, i didnt think it looks short lol

yours, skipped to the end, te disclaimer made me wonder what this rewengee is (said the way it is by the spanish commander played by hugh laurie in blackadder lol)

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"a little bit short but good pics

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Little Danny. Nice tools but wish you were nearer.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"a little bit short but good pics

Little Danny. Nice tools but wish you were nearer.

"

great profile but you should consider moving to banterville

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"a little bit short but good pics

Little Danny. Nice tools but wish you were nearer.

great profile but you should consider moving to banterville "

Impressive cock pic, keep it up

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"a little bit short but good pics

i know, i didnt think it looks short lol

yours, skipped to the end, te disclaimer made me wonder what this rewengee is (said the way it is by the spanish commander played by hugh laurie in blackadder lol)"

I haven't thought that bit through fully yet but it would be terrible indeed!

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire


"a little bit short but good pics

Little Danny. Nice tools but wish you were nearer.

great profile but you should consider moving to banterville "
could improve his text, say more about what he's looking for

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By *anny PepperoniMan
over a year ago

Matlock


"a little bit short but good pics

Little Danny. Nice tools but wish you were nearer.

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Yours had me chortling. Yes nearer would be better!

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By *picyminxWoman
over a year ago

Huntingdon

Can someone give me some feedback please . I think mine sounds too bossy lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Can someone give me some feedback please . I think mine sounds too bossy lol"

You have put your points of view across very politely. Personally I'd be more in your face but this way shows how YOU are .

The only suggestion I'd make is have a variety of pics for public viewing .

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