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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Here's a poem I made up let me know what you think plz

I can't wait to meet you

Get over to your place

Can't wait to get your pussy out

And sit you on my face

Biting n sucking

On each firm tit

Tonguing your pussy

Licking your clit

Bending you over

So your on all fours

You screaming n shouting

Begging for more

Flipping you over

Fucking your sweet bum

You screaming n shouting

IM GOING TO CUM!!!!!!

Your hard clit tingling

Your hot pussy soaking wet

This will be a night

That you will never ever forget

Think I need add more to it but not bad in my opinion

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

your like a dirtier version of pam ayres

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

I would keep the rhyming but change the lines so the rhythm is more structured, for example, use lines with the same number of syllables and pentameter works well - in fives.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Noted cheers although I have raised over 18.5k for various charities by writing poems (not this type obviously) lol n had stuff published but cheers

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By *r Mahogany70Man
over a year ago

Leicester

Hardly subtle, is it?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Always best to be straight to point

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I would keep the rhyming but change the lines so the rhythm is more structured, for example, use lines with the same number of syllables and pentameter works well - in fives. "

jesus its the simon cowell of the poem world

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Noted cheers although I have raised over 18.5k for various charities by writing poems (not this type obviously) lol n had stuff published but cheers "

Why can't we have a publishable standard then? I think a good poem has structure and rhythm, I like them to rhyme. For example: "Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, furnished and burnished by Aldershott sun". The rhythm suggests the to and fro of a tennis match in which you can imagine her playing. If you emphasise the 'Dunn' it also suggests the raquet hitting the ball. Clever, eh?

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"I would keep the rhyming but change the lines so the rhythm is more structured, for example, use lines with the same number of syllables and pentameter works well - in fives.

jesus its the simon cowell of the poem world "

The guy asked for comments.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Noted cheers although I have raised over 18.5k for various charities by writing poems (not this type obviously) lol n had stuff published but cheers

Why can't we have a publishable standard then? I think a good poem has structure and rhythm, I like them to rhyme. For example: "Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, furnished and burnished by Aldershott sun". The rhythm suggests the to and fro of a tennis match in which you can imagine her playing. If you emphasise the 'Dunn' it also suggests the raquet hitting the ball. Clever, eh?

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to clever for me, il just sick to the mary had a little lambs ones, much easier to understand

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Noted cheers although I have raised over 18.5k for various charities by writing poems (not this type obviously) lol n had stuff published but cheers

Why can't we have a publishable standard then? I think a good poem has structure and rhythm, I like them to rhyme. For example: "Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, furnished and burnished by Aldershott sun". The rhythm suggests the to and fro of a tennis match in which you can imagine her playing. If you emphasise the 'Dunn' it also suggests the raquet hitting the ball. Clever, eh?

to clever for me, il just sick to the mary had a little lambs ones, much easier to understand "

stick

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Lol

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Friends understand certain know-it-alls often forget fings

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Noted cheers although I have raised over 18.5k for various charities by writing poems (not this type obviously) lol n had stuff published but cheers

Why can't we have a publishable standard then? I think a good poem has structure and rhythm, I like them to rhyme. For example: "Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, furnished and burnished by Aldershott sun". The rhythm suggests the to and fro of a tennis match in which you can imagine her playing. If you emphasise the 'Dunn' it also suggests the raquet hitting the ball. Clever, eh?

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Very clever!

Amazing what you learn in the Fab fora.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Noted cheers although I have raised over 18.5k for various charities by writing poems (not this type obviously) lol n had stuff published but cheers

Why can't we have a publishable standard then? I think a good poem has structure and rhythm, I like them to rhyme. For example: "Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, Miss Jane Hunter Dunn, furnished and burnished by Aldershott sun". The rhythm suggests the to and fro of a tennis match in which you can imagine her playing. If you emphasise the 'Dunn' it also suggests the raquet hitting the ball. Clever, eh?

Very clever!

Amazing what you learn in the Fab fora."

Thank you luv n might I add you are stunning with a fantastic figure x

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