FabSwingers.com forum: How far can you go

By *illitworkthistime OP Couple
5 weeks ago

fun ideas. or we go to a club.

We have started writing a book about our last 23 years of swinging. How we got into it. The clubs and the meets.

The question is can the book have all the details. Things like he was coming in my mouth I just keep swallowing

As he was coming more and more. As I sat on another man's face.

Or should it be both of them showed me a good time. You get our point. Thanks

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By *iguy8919Man
5 weeks ago

Thetford

I would say you could probably get away with as much detail as you want too with it really

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By *sLillyMrWolfeCouple
5 weeks ago

near you...

Depends on whether you're writing porn or describing a scene. Detail is good until it obscures the main point.

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By *illitworkthistime OP Couple
5 weeks ago

fun ideas. or we go to a club.

"Depends on whether you're writing porn or describing a scene. Detail is good until it obscures the main point."

Trying to make the book about us and the swinging part of our life. How we change with age and the things we do. Sex has been a big part of that for us. From straight to bi. Sub to Dom. Could do it without the details but they show a point . Thanks for any help.

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By *illitworkthistime OP Couple
1 week ago

fun ideas. or we go to a club.

Has anyone on her ever written a book any book. Its all new to us.

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By *orny entitiesCouple
1 week ago

lincoln

Details….it needs to be gripping enough to not put down. If it comes across as smutty, so be it…but the word will get out and folk will purchase.

My opinion though

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By *nightsoftheCoffeeTableCouple
1 week ago

Leeds

I like a bit of spice so some details would be good however it's easy for it to end up being nothing but smut so maybe describe some but not all.

Mrs

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By *insBadMan
1 week ago

& around

"We have started writing a book about our last 23 years of swinging. How we got into it. The clubs and the meets.

The question is can the book have all the details. Things like he was coming in my mouth I just keep swallowing

As he was coming more and more. As I sat on another man's face.

Or should it be both of them showed me a good time. You get our point. Thanks"

All the gorey details please

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By *enelope2UWoman
1 week ago

Fife

Both have been done before..it's up to you and what you desire and if details will outs someone else that isn't privy to the consent of the occasion.

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By *itygamesMan
1 week ago

i'd check if its allowed to be published being triple x rated content

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By *ophieslutTV/TS
1 week ago

Central

It's the style of the writing that's most important, IMO. Sex can be written about in many ways, including erotica, scientific academia, graphic novel and more. It's probably good to have one tone, more or less throughout. Thus I'd plan your book according to how you'd best write it, as well as what you'd anticipate your readers would expect.

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By *aughty Hubby n Sexy WifeCouple
1 week ago

Scarborogh

"i'd check if its allowed to be published being triple x rated content"

Seems quite easy to self publish and sell books online these days (A to Z seems a popular vehicle for this?) This way you’d keep more profit but you’d be responsible for proof reading, marketing/advertising. Mrs SW

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By *illitworkthistime OP Couple
1 week ago

fun ideas. or we go to a club.

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By *illitworkthistime OP Couple
9 hours ago

fun ideas. or we go to a club.

Thanks for your help.

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By *ddfellowMan
4 hours ago

Newferry, wirral

details or it will end up like 70's british softporn.

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By *ercury oneMan
4 hours ago

Chippenham

As long as it's not libellous it should be fine. I'd love to read it

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By *omethingoranotherMan
3 hours ago

near you

For me it would be about what your aim is for the reader. Are you aiming to titillate or be factual. Do you want your book to be seen as erotica or factual? If you put in sexually stimulating words you might put some off. In the other hand that may be others idea of a good read. Ultimately you decide what you want for the book. I suspect most on this forum would enjoy it as more erotica.

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