FabSwingers.com forum: My profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Wouls you say my profile has improved ?

Got pictures etc does my actual profile text need tk be better

Thanks

By *addyBabygirl2020Couple
over a year ago

norwich

Seems fine but terrible punctuation.

It will read a whole lot better if you sort that out.

By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Typo in know. Capital I needed. Comma needed after people.

Probably no need to say you know what you're looking for, I'd take that as read. Perhaps just say that you've been on before and if you remember me, say hi.

Looking for the right individual - as opposed to the wrong individual?

Perhaps go with that you're looking for either individual ladies, or a couple to explore with.

Regular, has a typo in it, capital I's needed and you have no apostrophe on don't.

I'd lose the to be truthful bit and go with: I don't have much experience and carry on from there.

The final bit is ok, but the punctuation and typos could be addressed.

Ie:

I have a lot of fantasies and interests that I'd like to explore. I want to wanna try dogging and maybe bdsm with the right female/couple.

I'm also here for a chat, too x