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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

Lytham St Anne’s

Well after an update on the txt part of my profile (pictures will get done soon) looking for some critique on the content, what do the ladies think anything you would suggest doing different all criticism accepted in the way it is intended thanks look forward seeing what people think

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

Lytham St Anne’s

Any suggestions ?

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By *uliaChrisCouple
over a year ago

westerham

Might sound like a small thing but try to make it snappier and funnier?

Specifically the first sentence is way too long and complicated and it will put people off wading in further.

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By *exyeyez23 OP   Man
over a year ago

Lytham St Anne’s

Thanks sounds like great advice appreciate that I’ll try to make it more snappy cheers

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