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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi all, you're probably fed up of these threads, but in case you can digest one more, I've just updated my profile.

Got disillusioned, but now I'm back and would appreciate any criticism or compliments (well if there are any) on my newly worded profile.

Ta in advance ....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

looks a good profile maybe show yourface where the camera is, but thats just a minor nit pic

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Well worded profile.

Not to long, not to short, shows some personality.

The only thing I would say the profile needs is some more pics. Not face or cock shots, some torso, bum, dressed from the neck down, that kind of thing.

xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm not sure what the 'big fat liar' is all about.

Also the 'I won't bore you with' paragraph makes no sense because you do actually go on to bore us with it!!!

Just my little niggles

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'm not sure what the 'big fat liar' is all about.

Also the 'I won't bore you with' paragraph makes no sense because you do actually go on to bore us with it!!!

Just my little niggles

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yeah i thought that as well saying you wont say something then clearly are saying it lol

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Good point, it was poor attempt at sarcasm. Lol, i'll re-word it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I liked it....well done you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

good profile x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Good point, it was poor attempt at sarcasm. Lol, i'll re-word it."

I got the sarcasm. I supose it depends how you read stuff.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I changed that bit now.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The best advice we can offer is be yourself which amongst other things entails saying what you think you should say on your profile rather than what other people think you should say. That way you will attract people who suit you rather than people who don't.

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By *toneblueMan
over a year ago

Southampton


"The best advice we can offer is be yourself which amongst other things entails saying what you think you should say on your profile rather than what other people think you should say. That way you will attract people who suit you rather than people who don't.

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This really is the most sensible advice I've seen regarding profiles. If people put only what the consensus consider will attract attention, then not only will the profile be unlikely to stand out; it will also give a false impression of the profile owner, whom if he is lucky enough to get a meet through it will probably disappoint the other party due to not being anything like the profile!

Apologies for the long and clumsy sentence...

Just being myself has worked wonders for me since I first thought of it in 2003.

And that's very nearly poetry!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Not a bad profile, lots about yourself which is good, needs though what you are looking for and maybe some more pictures. Remove the Sydney rubbish as its worthless and meaningless, that way you will have more room to add the above

Good luck

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"The best advice we can offer is be yourself which amongst other things entails saying what you think you should say on your profile rather than what other people think you should say. That way you will attract people who suit you rather than people who don't.

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Agree! Sadly so many men ask for advice, incorporate all the buzz words and end up with dull, generic profiles. Don't try to be all things to all men: you can't be. Be yourself and stand out from the crowd.

All I would say is tone down the defensiveness of your profile. State your ethnicity but there's no need to challenge those that don't like Asian men.

Good luck.

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By *iamondsmiles.Woman
over a year ago

little house on the praire

Well i think its a lovely profile and reflects the lovely person that you are

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks to all the feedback, all feedback was appreciated.

Gonna sit back, and watch my inbox overflow with messages now, if not, then all the people above will be held responsible

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

dont hold me responsible

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

They'll be no holding, only ..... teasing and caressing

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