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By *pecter200 OP   Man
over a year ago

luton

would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad.

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By *allySlinkyWoman
over a year ago

Leeds

There are quite a few spelling and punctuation mistakes despite you saying you are intelligent.

How on earth do you know you are probably the most honest person on the planet?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As above. Perhaps write out your profile on a word document, spell and grammar check it, then copy and paste. Entirely up to you, but we wouldn't bother with someone who hasn't put the effort in, yep, we're fully paid up members of the grammar police.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"There are quite a few spelling and punctuation mistakes despite you saying you are intelligent.

How on earth do you know you are probably the most honest person on the planet?"
because he honestly thinks that

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad. "
your profile seems fine guessing your names Barry ,you maybe need more info and better thought out pics good luck

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Not the worst profile ive ever seen, but certainly not the best either. Needs a lot of work. Its good you have face pics, but be nice to add in some body shots(not your cock)

The bio definitely needs a rewrite and spell check. Say more about whst your lookjng fir and whatbyou can offer a potential meet. You say your dominant but do you really know what that means?

Good luck

Poppy

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad. "

Why do you think it seems really bad? That might be a good place for you to start...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad.

Why do you think it seems really bad? That might be a good place for you to start...

"
can I come and lie on your couch?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad.

Why do you think it seems really bad? That might be a good place for you to start...

can I come and lie on your couch? "

No.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad.

Why do you think it seems really bad? That might be a good place for you to start...

can I come and lie on your couch?

No."
lol awwww

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I don't think it's that bad to be honest.. better than average.

Consider having a few photos that are teasing and sexual in nature. Not riddle it with cock shots, but one or two don't hurt, despite what you read on here at times. Never put one as a profile photo (unless you're angry that is ). Always an exception to the rule.

Consider veering off the traditional style as well, find a theme, like I've tried to. It's not to everyone's taste granted.. but it helps to stand out and be different sometimes.

Maybe inject a little humour if you've got a sense of it, bare in mind that's subjective though.

Try and give off a sense of you.. and what makes you different from other people.

Think about the kind of person YOU want to attract.

Good luck dude

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By *hamboy69Man
over a year ago

huddersfield

This will disappoint a lot of profile critics on here but I have a mate of mine who’s profile text reads ‘33 year old guy wishes to meet single females and couples’

And guess what he has loads of meets with sexy ladies beceause he attends social events and clubs

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By *hubaysiWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


"would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad. "

Spelling errors

Punctuation errors

Grammatical errors

Pics not interesting

Need I go on

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"would like some feedback be brutally honest. would like to no why my profile seems really bad. "

mine wore than your when it up

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The profile is just the first part of getting a meet it takes time and dont just message everyone in your area hoping to get a yes.

And you need to chill out and relax its not dialabonk

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"This will disappoint a lot of profile critics on here but I have a mate of mine who’s profile text reads ‘33 year old guy wishes to meet single females and couples’

And guess what he has loads of meets with sexy ladies beceause he attends social events and clubs "

Not at all.. whatever works for him.. we're just offering help because it's been asked and we are the types who enjoy doing that.. Or it entertains us in some way.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"This will disappoint a lot of profile critics on here but I have a mate of mine who’s profile text reads ‘33 year old guy wishes to meet single females and couples’

And guess what he has loads of meets with sexy ladies beceause he attends social events and clubs

Not at all.. whatever works for him.. we're just offering help because it's been asked and we are the types who enjoy doing that.. Or it entertains us in some way."

Why do people think events and Clubs are the answer to getting more meets never been to one and never will and i have meet a amazing couple just by chatting on here

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"This will disappoint a lot of profile critics on here but I have a mate of mine who’s profile text reads ‘33 year old guy wishes to meet single females and couples’

And guess what he has loads of meets with sexy ladies beceause he attends social events and clubs

Not at all.. whatever works for him.. we're just offering help because it's been asked and we are the types who enjoy doing that.. Or it entertains us in some way.

Why do people think events and Clubs are the answer to getting more meets never been to one and never will and i have meet a amazing couple just by chatting on here

"

Because we're all different.. some are blessed physically, some are gifted with the written word and some have a talent face to face.

It's personal preference.

Socials and clubs ARE ways of meeting people.. how good it turns out depends on you, who is there, how the interactions go and how well it's run.

Chances are you may get a verification in person for making the effort to attend.. even if it's just from the organiser.. If they're that way inclined.

Good for you that you don't need the Socials and Clubs to have fun.

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By *hubaysiWoman
over a year ago

Leeds


"This will disappoint a lot of profile critics on here but I have a mate of mine who’s profile text reads ‘33 year old guy wishes to meet single females and couples’

And guess what he has loads of meets with sexy ladies beceause he attends social events and clubs

Not at all.. whatever works for him.. we're just offering help because it's been asked and we are the types who enjoy doing that.. Or it entertains us in some way.

Why do people think events and Clubs are the answer to getting more meets never been to one and never will and i have meet a amazing couple just by chatting on here

Because we're all different.. some are blessed physically, some are gifted with the written word and some have a talent face to face.

It's personal preference.

Socials and clubs ARE ways of meeting people.. how good it turns out depends on you, who is there, how the interactions go and how well it's run.

Chances are you may get a verification in person for making the effort to attend.. even if it's just from the organiser.. If they're that way inclined.

Good for you that you don't need the Socials and Clubs to have fun."

Are verifications the bee all and end all of Fab? A Social verification just says you attend clubs etc. Also I know for a fact there are some false verifications on here so are verifications really that reliable?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"This will disappoint a lot of profile critics on here but I have a mate of mine who’s profile text reads ‘33 year old guy wishes to meet single females and couples’

And guess what he has loads of meets with sexy ladies beceause he attends social events and clubs

Not at all.. whatever works for him.. we're just offering help because it's been asked and we are the types who enjoy doing that.. Or it entertains us in some way.

Why do people think events and Clubs are the answer to getting more meets never been to one and never will and i have meet a amazing couple just by chatting on here

Because we're all different.. some are blessed physically, some are gifted with the written word and some have a talent face to face.

It's personal preference.

Socials and clubs ARE ways of meeting people.. how good it turns out depends on you, who is there, how the interactions go and how well it's run.

Chances are you may get a verification in person for making the effort to attend.. even if it's just from the organiser.. If they're that way inclined.

Good for you that you don't need the Socials and Clubs to have fun.

Are verifications the bee all and end all of Fab? A Social verification just says you attend clubs etc. Also I know for a fact there are some false verifications on here so are verifications really that reliable? "

Not reliable 100%. When you are first starting out though it's nice to get a couple to help back up what you're saying, to help add to the package. They can work against you as much as they work for you I'll admit that.

Definately NOT the be all and end all.. but for men I'd say it helps. I wanted to go to Xtasia and Springfield almost immediately when I re-joined.. but had no veris so couldn't.

A social veri says.. I'm semi-serious about this at the very least, i made some effort. If it's highly complimentary about you, from another verified user who seems active.. If it backs up the messages you're sending people then it MAY help to sway someone's opinion.

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