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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn

Any suggestions in improving my profile text.

I understand that pics may help. Concentrating on profile text for now.

Thanks in advance

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Any suggestions in improving my profile text.

I understand that pics may help. Concentrating on profile text for now.

Thanks in advance"

Sex pest and 420 friendly will put many off!

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn


"Any suggestions in improving my profile text.

I understand that pics may help. Concentrating on profile text for now.

Thanks in advance

Sex pest and 420 friendly will put many off!"

I thought it was funny!

anything to add?

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By *apillonNoirWoman
over a year ago

There...

Where's Oxforx? Sex pest is a turn off as is 420.

No avatar = instant delete. There are literally thousands of single men on site all looking for the same thing. You need to stand out from the crowd. Good luck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Keeping your pics private won't help you get meets.

Huge amount of people on here with a few viewable pics,so personally speaking your profile would go to the back of the queue.

As it's a sex site people generally like to see a little of who they might be meeting.

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By *apillonNoirWoman
over a year ago

There...

Nice to see you taking some advice at least

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By *opsy RogersWoman
over a year ago

London

So now he's taken advice and removed the 420 reference. That's not helpful.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I wouldn't say Oxford is in the South East is it?

Nitpicking

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"So now he's taken advice and removed the 420 reference. That's not helpful. "

Maybe people who look at his profile with the idea of considering him as a potential sexual partner will use the green arrow and see this thread wherein he purports to be not unameniable to recreational drug taking under the ruse of "420 friendly".

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"I wouldn't say Oxford is in the South East is it?

Nitpicking "

It shows up as southeast in the search area

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By *apillonNoirWoman
over a year ago

There...

I forgot to ask about the private rate... where's the raised eyebrow emoji...?

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn


"I forgot to ask about the private rate... where's the raised eyebrow emoji...? "

You might have to add me as a friend for an honest assessment. The corset is a solid 8/10 though ??

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

Your profile is all about you, it says 'come and get me'.

But it doesn't work like that on here

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By *apillonNoirWoman
over a year ago

There...


"I forgot to ask about the private rate... where's the raised eyebrow emoji...?

You might have to add me as a friend for an honest assessment. The corset is a solid 8/10 though ??"

Nah. Private gallery is reserved for those I've met and I'm very 420 unfriendly...

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn


"I forgot to ask about the private rate... where's the raised eyebrow emoji...?

You might have to add me as a friend for an honest assessment. The corset is a solid 8/10 though ??

Nah. Private gallery is reserved for those I've met and I'm very 420 unfriendly..."

That's just great. Enjoy the rest of your evening ??

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn


"Your profile is all about you, it says 'come and get me'.

But it doesn't work like that on here "

Well i'm glad it does something. Can you enlighten me?

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham


"Your profile is all about you, it says 'come and get me'.

But it doesn't work like that on here

Well i'm glad it does something. Can you enlighten me?"

Do a forum search for Profile Advice

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn


"Your profile is all about you, it says 'come and get me'.

But it doesn't work like that on here

Well i'm glad it does something. Can you enlighten me?

Do a forum search for Profile

Advice "

hahhaha always enjoy a bit of humour to end the night. May call it a night on that note, early start the morra

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By *opsy RogersWoman
over a year ago

London


"So now he's taken advice and removed the 420 reference. That's not helpful.

Maybe people who look at his profile with the idea of considering him as a potential sexual partner will use the green arrow and see this thread wherein he purports to be not unameniable to recreational drug taking under the ruse of "420 friendly". "

So there is a feature now on profiles that link directly to their forum posts?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's all about what you want and not what you can offer.

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn


"It's all about what you want and not what you can offer."

How so?

Should i re-word certain things or add completely new info

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By *unandbuckCouple
over a year ago

Sheffield


"It's all about what you want and not what you can offer.

How so?

Should i re-word certain things or add completely new info"

Just read it, as though you were someone else. Why would they pick you over the hundreds of other single guys? As the poster above says, it's just about what you want, not what you can offer.

It can't be written for you, you have to understand the comments and act on them in a way that reflect you.

I know you want profile text advice, but you can have the best written profile on Fab, but without pics you will get no answers. After 7 months, on-ste, there's no excuse for not having any.

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn

Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.

Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.

Thanks in advance

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By *opsy RogersWoman
over a year ago

London


"Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.

Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.

Thanks in advance"

Do you send pictures out with first messages?

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By *orkkinekt OP   Man
over a year ago

blackburn


"Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.

Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.

Thanks in advance

Do you send pictures out with first messages?"

I do, face pics only though. I'd appreciate it if you don't lay all the blame on my face

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By *opsy RogersWoman
over a year ago

London


"Hi, thanks for your help before. I've tried to take on board what was said and i'm feeling happier about it all already. Though the strike rate is still 0%. Yes,still not off the mark haha.

Please can you suggest any further amendments that you feel might help.

Thanks in advance

Do you send pictures out with first messages?

I do, face pics only though. I'd appreciate it if you don't lay all the blame on my face "

Your blurb is fine but you need a few nice body shots. The one picture you have there is pointless.

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