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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hey peeps can you be so kind to give me a review of my profile please

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By *isaB45Woman
over a year ago

Fabville

I am happy to provide honest profile advice. I will warn you, though, I do not give flowery bullshit. Brutal truth, but unbiased. If you want this, then let me know through your thread.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I am happy to provide honest profile advice. I will warn you, though, I do not give flowery bullshit. Brutal truth, but unbiased. If you want this, then let me know through your thread.

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Hiya yes please either here or pm is fine

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hey peeps can you be so kind to give me a review of my profile please "

Well, it is honest and to the point.

I prefer to see profile text in proper, full sentences. You do need to sort the photos out. You are clearly proud of some of your sexual moments but there is no need to show pictures where only your cock appears.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Hey peeps can you be so kind to give me a review of my profile please

Well, it is honest and to the point.

I prefer to see profile text in proper, full sentences. You do need to sort the photos out. You are clearly proud of some of your sexual moments but there is no need to show pictures where only your cock appears."

I'll move them as private pics

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A few spelling errors and too many uses of the word 'lmao'

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"A few spelling errors and too many uses of the word 'lmao'"

Thanks!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I always prefer paragraphs to bullet points, and as has already been said, it is to the point but I don't really understand what you mean by 'married if you don't like it OH doesn't know OK' well obviously I do, but you could make use of commas as then it would make more sense...

actually, that could work very well for the rest of the text, or maybe running it through a spell checker BUT I doubt many people will be able to get past the fact that you are playing away, so no amount of fixing the words will help you ...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I always prefer paragraphs to bullet points, and as has already been said, it is to the point but I don't really understand what you mean by 'married if you don't like it OH doesn't know OK' well obviously I do, but you could make use of commas as then it would make more sense...

actually, that could work very well for the rest of the text, or maybe running it through a spell checker BUT I doubt many people will be able to get past the fact that you are playing away, so no amount of fixing the words will help you ..."

Well tbh those won't like it won't change and those who don't care won't say anything. But I've not met up with anyone since coming back.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I always prefer paragraphs to bullet points, and as has already been said, it is to the point but I don't really understand what you mean by 'married if you don't like it OH doesn't know OK' well obviously I do, but you could make use of commas as then it would make more sense...

actually, that could work very well for the rest of the text, or maybe running it through a spell checker BUT I doubt many people will be able to get past the fact that you are playing away, so no amount of fixing the words will help you ...

Well tbh those won't like it won't change and those who don't care won't say anything. But I've not met up with anyone since coming back."

Whether you agree with the advice people have given is entirely up to you. Those who don't like it won't be attracted to it. Those who don't care will not care. I do care, as does another poster, so you may be reducing your audience. Still, that is for you to decide.

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By *LUKCouple
over a year ago

Loughborough

Using text speak/shortened versions of words comes across as lazy e.g. Using Def instead of Definitely. If you can't be arsed to type out "initely" on the end of the word what else can you not be arsed with?

This is the first impression you will make on any prospective meets and your profile looks like you took a whole 3 minutes to write it out.

Your profile starts with "Married if you don't like it OH doesn't know ok"

That could be replaced with a proper sentences like "First up, I am married. My other half is unaware that I'm on here; if that puts you off, fair enough."

Also you have four pics, two of them are presumably of your (unaware) other half's arse; another of her stomach.

You also have a clear face pic, despite the fact you're doing this behind your other half's back. This kind of flies in the face of your second line "Discretion both ways".

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Using text speak/shortened versions of words comes across as lazy e.g. Using Def instead of Definitely. If you can't be arsed to type out "initely" on the end of the word what else can you not be arsed with?

This is the first impression you will make on any prospective meets and your profile looks like you took a whole 3 minutes to write it out.

Your profile starts with "Married if you don't like it OH doesn't know ok"

That could be replaced with a proper sentences like "First up, I am married. My other half is unaware that I'm on here; if that puts you off, fair enough."

Also you have four pics, two of them are presumably of your (unaware) other half's arse; another of her stomach.

You also have a clear face pic, despite the fact you're doing this behind your other half's back. This kind of flies in the face of your second line "Discretion both ways"."

Thank you for the help I've always been crap at doing profiles.

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By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

Why not read through your own profile and correct the typos. E.g. you had good veries from "si goes"

Sally

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

We don't meet single guys, but if we did your profile would be just passed by, initially because of the poor construction, then secondly because we would never condone cheating.

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

If your wife doesn't know who are the women in your profile?

And do they know you are using their pics?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"If your wife doesn't know who are the women in your profile?

And do they know you are using their pics?"

Like most of the married men on here, they don't care who they upset.

Let's hope Karma has something to say!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We don't meet single guys, but if we did your profile would be just passed by, initially because of the poor construction, then secondly because we would never condone cheating."

the OP isn't single though

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We don't meet single guys, but if we did your profile would be just passed by, initially because of the poor construction, then secondly because we would never condone cheating.

the OP isn't single though"

Sorry, our mistake. If we were to meet guys.

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By *ymruambythCouple
over a year ago

grantham

Putting the moral thing aside...

If you aren't single and your OH doesn't know, then it's not smart to include a full facial photo on your public profile.

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By *andi_shopWoman
over a year ago

rotherham


"A few spelling errors and too many uses of the word 'lmao'"

Agree and the pics are not overly appealing

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