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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Is ours too long? If so what should we lose

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm quite new here so no profile expert by any stretch (mine needs work I reckon) but the don't contact if you like list is maybe a little too much? Your pics are hot though x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I'm quite new here so no profile expert by any stretch (mine needs work I reckon) but the don't contact if you like list is maybe a little too much? Your pics are hot though x"

Thanks for your feedback

That wasn't ment to be rude or nasty in any way, just to the point as it saves people contacting us who don't like bald guys, beards and so on. Thanks for your comment and the compliment xx

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By *ambscouple2015Couple
over a year ago

Not in Wisbech but near

Don't think it's too long at all.

Explains in enough detail what you want and what you don't.

Can't ask for more than that from a profile.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Don't think it's too long at all.

Explains in enough detail what you want and what you don't.

Can't ask for more than that from a profile.

"

Thankyou

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By *hortieWoman
over a year ago

Northampton

Put what you like... I still get contacted by single straight guys, and I like to think my text would have been idiot-proof!!

So.......... without even looking at your profile, theres my advice

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Put what you like... I still get contacted by single straight guys, and I like to think my text would have been idiot-proof!!

So.......... without even looking at your profile, theres my advice "

Erm, thanks appreciate the advice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks good.

Only things that jump out for me are spelling. It's "Head over heels" and "Malarkey"

Happy fabbing!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Looks good.

Only things that jump out for me are spelling. It's "Head over heels" and "Malarkey"

Happy fabbing! "

Oops, thankyou x

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By *hortieWoman
over a year ago

Northampton

ok, i have just read the profile, and its... ok. But quite confusing and kinda hard (for me) to read. Its like you wrote all you want, and do not want, put all that in a paintgun, pointed it at a wall and pressed the trigger.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"ok, i have just read the profile, and its... ok. But quite confusing and kinda hard (for me) to read. Its like you wrote all you want, and do not want, put all that in a paintgun, pointed it at a wall and pressed the trigger. "

Noted and will re-read and revise right now!! Can I ask why you find it confusing? We genuinely want to know as that's not good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's not to long. But it isn't engaging, and doesn't make me want to read it. It didn't make me think "I'd love to meet this couple,they sound fun".

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"It's not to long. But it isn't engaging, and doesn't make me want to read it. It didn't make me think "I'd love to meet this couple,they sound fun"."

Good point, I've changed a few things for now but maybe it needs a complete overhaul! Will probably clean it up tomorrow. Cheers for the advice guys!! xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I would lose most of it.....it's too informative in a blunt sort of way x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I would lose most of it.....it's too informative in a blunt sort of way x"

Does it come across in a negative light?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I would lose most of it.....it's too informative in a blunt sort of way x

Does it come across in a negative light? "

Yeah a bit. Why describe your selves if you have photographs of what you look like?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Deleted and rewritten! Approval or constructive criticism?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I totally like it! Because you can draw an image in your mind! Actually personally is what I am looking for in a profile.

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By *andsonjohnMan
over a year ago

in the eye of the storm


"Is ours too long? If so what should we lose "

just read your profile

it reads great to me very friendly and open plus its shorter than mine so as far as I'm concerned its great and should serve you well if there's any justice in the world of swinging .

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I totally like it! Because you can draw an image in your mind! Actually personally is what I am looking for in a profile."

Phew! A positive response! Thankyou!! xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'm quite new to this and would like any tips on my profile please

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I'm quite new to this and would like any tips on my profile please "

OY! Get your own thread!!

Seriously, pics are good, description needs a little work but then I'm no expert there as I'm asking the same thing!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I'm quite new to this and would like any tips on my profile please

OY! Get your own thread!!

Seriously, pics are good, description needs a little work but then I'm no expert there as I'm asking the same thing!! "

Hijacker? Lolz

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"I'm quite new to this and would like any tips on my profile please

OY! Get your own thread!!

Seriously, pics are good, description needs a little work but then I'm no expert there as I'm asking the same thing!!

Hijacker? Lolz "

Exactly, and very stealthily done too

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Is ours too long? If so what should we lose "

I've read it three times.

It tells the reader who you are and who you are looking for.

Reads fine to me.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Is ours too long? If so what should we lose

I've read it three times.

It tells the reader who you are and who you are looking for.

Reads fine to me.

"

Thankyou, you have read the new and improved profile. The old one wasn't very good!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Is ours too long? If so what should we lose "

I sure it's not too long at all, it's just I haven't got time to read it at the moment

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Is ours too long? If so what should we lose

I sure it's not too long at all, it's just I haven't got time to read it at the moment "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Better. Still no spark for me.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Thank you and I'm slowly adding and changing new things on my profile description it takes time know what needs be on it.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Is ours too long? If so what should we lose

I've read it three times.

It tells the reader who you are and who you are looking for.

Reads fine to me.

Thankyou, you have read the new and improved profile. The old one wasn't very good! "

In which case, as you were...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's still really fucking long lol x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Well we've come to the conclusion that you can't please everyone regardless of what you write. What's boring to one isn't to another, and what's "too fucking long" to one person is well put and descriptive to the next! So thanks for your feedback, we appreciate your comments but how it is now is how its staying

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hi,

You could possibly say it was too long. Perhaps keep it to an intro paragraph, one paragraph about the lady, one about the gent amd then one about the person / couple you're looking to meet.

However, that said, if you're already getting plenty of responses from the type of people you want to meet, well "if it ain't broke, don't fix it"..!!

Hope this helps

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By *inkyChrissy99TV/TS
over a year ago

Bristol

It is a bit too long imo but at least that means it obvious when people haven't bothered reading it!

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By *rimo4uMan
over a year ago

north kensington w10


"Is ours too long? If so what should we lose "

Try being a single guy and writing a profile! It's an easier job being the England Manager lol..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Well we've come to the conclusion that you can't please everyone regardless of what you write. What's boring to one isn't to another, and what's "too fucking long" to one person is well put and descriptive to the next! So thanks for your feedback, we appreciate your comments but how it is now is how its staying

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Good. I think it's fine as it is.

Unless you've changed it again since my last visit.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Well we've come to the conclusion that you can't please everyone regardless of what you write. What's boring to one isn't to another, and what's "too fucking long" to one person is well put and descriptive to the next! So thanks for your feedback, we appreciate your comments but how it is now is how its staying

Good. I think it's fine as it is.

Unless you've changed it again since my last visit. "

Nope, it's staying!! It is quite a long profile but we prefer a profile to have as much info as possible when we're browsing so at least we will have something in common with anyone who has read ours!! Again were grateful for all opinions and advice, thanks

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