FabSwingers.com forum: Updated profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I posted on here last week about feedback on my profile have changed it around and was wanting to see if people think new one is better or if there is more i could do x

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You might want to try a spell check and break up the text a bit as just having one block could put people off

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I posted on here last week about feedback on my profile have changed it around and was wanting to see if people think new one is better or if there is more i could do x"

I am not sure you took on board what people were saying.

While it is important to express your sexual interests, that is not the be all and end all. If a lady wishes to meet someone, it is usually the case that other factors (primarily character and personality) come into play.

And, yes, write in paragraphs and check your spelling.

I say again - do you think the text would be attractive to a potential sexual partner?

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Make it less about your needs and wants, it's a fine balance but it reads a bit like it's one sided

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Have changed it again put in paragraphs no long sentences and checked spelling too x