FabSwingers.com forum: Profile improvement

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

What exactly is it about my profile that isn't exactly catching as much attention as one would like any help or advice would be appriciated

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By *ordonBennettMan
over a year ago

dover

"What exactly is it about my profile that isn't exactly catching as much attention as one would like any help or advice would be appriciated"

Lose the meaningless legal nonsense which totally dominates the profile, especially as it's written in block capitals.

Concentrate on presenting more of yourself in a relaxed conversational style, avoiding any extravagant claims. Just be yourself.

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By *ecretlyASoftieWoman
over a year ago

Hull but travel regularly

Yes stop shouting legal bullshit, it's more words than your actual profile I think!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

I have definitly taken out the legal stuff and I thank you for the advice any more is welcome

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By *ordonBennettMan
over a year ago

dover

As you indicate that there is more to be said, you would do better to outline a few more aspects about yourself rather than expect enquiries from others.

Lay more out in the shop window rather than relying on people coming into the shop.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

What's the chicken and what's the egg? We have to ask for more information if interested, but how do we get interested without the information.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Very well said I will definitly add more and make sure to ask for further advice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

More pics

And would you really meet someone who is 99?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"More pics

And would you really meet someone who is 99? "

Why 99??

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By *ecretlyASoftieWoman
over a year ago

Hull but travel regularly

'There is a lot more to say about me but I think it's better to leave that for those who are interested to find out.'

Women get so many messages you might find they'll prefer to chat with someone who puts more on their profile than the one who says the above.

I like to have more info up front to know if I'd be interested but that's just me.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Fair point I shall be working on it now

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated

Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).

You really do need to check your spelling, though.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated

Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).

You really do need to check your spelling, though."
Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated

Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).

You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth

Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? That the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated

Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).

You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth

Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? Thuat the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile."

Well we all have different ways to express our feelings and opinion and length in which we do

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated

Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).

You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth

Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? Thuat the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile.

Well we all have different ways to express our feelings and opinion and length in which we do

Then feel free to ignore my advice.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Updated profile so if anyone wants to have a read and give me feedback it would be much appreciated

Looks alright content-wise (though I am not sure what London folk will think of your comments implying that they are unfriendly).

You really do need to check your spelling, though.Well I was born in London so am a Londoner and what I'm saying is only the truth

Do you feel the need to state that the sun is hot? Thuat the grass is green? Those statements might be true but they would not enhance your profile.

Well we all have different ways to express our feelings and opinion and length in which we do

Then feel free to ignore my advice."

Surly not ignoring it taking it on borad but I also have some of my own opinions which I stick to.

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