FabSwingers.com forum: Critique My Profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi Everyone

Might live to regret this move, as I'm sure there's a million and one similar forum posts regarding this topic, but hey-ho, I need advice.

Still relatively new to the scene, so I was hoping some of you guys could give me some pointers and advice profile-wise.

Honesty is appreciated

Best Wishes Evererybdy

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By *opsy RogersWoman
over a year ago

London

It tells me all I need to know. Some good body pics may be of use and a cock shot in friends or to send with a pic when requested may help.

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

I've seen far worse but you could have a more friendly face pic.

Top marks for no cock pics

Perhaps a bit more about what you can offer a woman, why you're different from every other VWE male on here.

I'd meet you though because I like very tall men

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

Also not everyone likes a smoker, so if you're a considerate smoker then say so.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hmmmm that's great thank you, spose I need to more a lot more effort in the pictures front

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I've seen far worse but you could have a more friendly face pic.

Top marks for no cock pics

Perhaps a bit more about what you can offer a woman, why you're different from every other VWE male on here.

I'd meet you though because I like very tall men

Hahaha thanks for the kind words, but yeah, definetley gonna make more effort with my pictures

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By *andsonjohnMan
over a year ago

in the eye of the storm

"Hi Everyone

Might live to regret this move, as I'm sure there's a million and one similar forum posts regarding this topic, but hey-ho, I need advice.

Still relatively new to the scene, so I was hoping some of you guys could give me some pointers and advice profile-wise.

Honesty is appreciated

Best Wishes Evererybdy

brave man hope your wearing your hard hat and have practised you duck and cover move

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The profile pic would put me off before I'd even contemplate reading the profile ..

But at least it's not a cock pic

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

"I'd meet you though because I like very tall men

Hahaha thanks for the kind words, but yeah, definetley gonna make more effort with my pictures "

As a tall young man you should be able to get some nice torso shots and a smiling face one

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

If you're as well endowed as you say you are then a cock pic wouldn't go amiss IMO

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"The profile pic would put me off before I'd even contemplate reading the profile ..

But at least it's not a cock pic

Fair enough hahaha, dutifully noted

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By *inky-MinxWoman
over a year ago

Grantham

The fact you are taking advice well and making the effort is a good sign you'll do well too

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"If you're as well endowed as you say you are then a cock pic wouldn't go amiss IMO"

Good idea, might leave it in friends only mind

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"The fact you are taking advice well and making the effort is a good sign you'll do well too

I hope so, it's just nice that people are taking the time to help me, thanks ever so much for the pointers

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"The profile pic would put me off before I'd even contemplate reading the profile ..

But at least it's not a cock pic

Is it just me that skips pics and goes straight to the text?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"The profile pic would put me off before I'd even contemplate reading the profile ..

But at least it's not a cock pic

Is it just me that skips pics and goes straight to the text?

Nope - and there really isn't much text.

OP, come back when you have made the effort to present an attractive profile, rather than a few lines of crap text. Then we can tell you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You need to sort out the profile pic, not a cool look, fag in gob. And the profile text needs work, use spell check and punctuation. Tell us what you have to offer apart from you are young, tall and got a big cock (the latter is subjective, big compared to what??) Some nice pics with you t shirt off, smiling preferably.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"You need to sort out the profile pic, not a cool look, fag in gob. And the profile text needs work, use spell check and punctuation. Tell us what you have to offer apart from you are young, tall and got a big cock (the latter is subjective, big compared to what??) Some nice pics with you t shirt off, smiling preferably."

Hahaha fair enough, still learning how to build an attractive body of text, but thanks for the honesty

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Just made some changes, hopefully it looks somewhat better

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Blooody hell !!! You look like Joseph Gordon Lewitt !!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Blooody hell !!! You look like Joseph Gordon Lewitt !!! "

Not gonna lie, that's the best compliment I've had since coming to this site hahah

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Blooody hell !!! You look like Joseph Gordon Lewitt !!!

Not gonna lie, that's the best compliment I've had since coming to this site hahah"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ur profile doesn't tell me what sort of partners you would go for.

Take a look at a few other guys profiles and see how they differ from yours

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Just made some changes, hopefully it looks somewhat better"

Bland. Self-effacing. Unconfident.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Just made some changes, hopefully it looks somewhat better

Bland. Self-effacing. Unconfident."

Bit harsh!!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Just made some changes, hopefully it looks somewhat better

Bland. Self-effacing. Unconfident.

Bit harsh!!!"

* Other opinions are equally valid *

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Just made some changes, hopefully it looks somewhat better

Bland. Self-effacing. Unconfident.

Bit harsh!!!

* Other opinions are equally valid *"

Yes I agree but positive criticism is always a better approach. You come across as somewhat arrogant. Give the guy a break, he's 22 and new and asking for advice.

It's nice to be nice !

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Just made some changes, hopefully it looks somewhat better

Bland. Self-effacing. Unconfident.

Bit harsh!!!

* Other opinions are equally valid *

Yes I agree but positive criticism is always a better approach. You come across as somewhat arrogant. Give the guy a break, he's 22 and new and asking for advice.

It's nice to be nice ! "

You have a point.

I couldn't really think of a nice way in which to couch my opinion. It might have been better if I had simply not posted.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like your profile the way it is. Too many profiles with a lot of shite with too many pics. Like the way you conducted yourself in the chat as well. Good luck. Mrs A x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I'd ditch allt he "im new need somoen to show me the ropes"

It's sex, people don't want to be teaching a guy how to fuck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'd ditch allt he "im new need somoen to show me the ropes"

It's sex, people don't want to be teaching a guy how to fuck.

Absolutely this ^^^^^

The minute I read anything along those lines I stop and move on, we're not here to do favours

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By *lowercandyWoman
over a year ago

Lancashire

Some good points already raised. From my side I'd pass because of the smoking however if you are only someone who smokes a few and outside that's different and could sway it first some people. ..but you don't say..expand on it if you expect to smoke 20 cogs in someone's home be honest

Pictures .love that not full of cock but maybe a good body shot and a few smiles .

Also... yes I'm not sure about your likes and I'd be put off thinking you want a "teacher"

A few tweaks and you'll be fine

Oh and patience

Vital!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I'd ditch allt he "im new need somoen to show me the ropes"

It's sex, people don't want to be teaching a guy how to fuck.

Haha point taken, thought it was come across as humble rather tha desperate haha, will change

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Some good points already raised. From my side I'd pass because of the smoking however if you are only someone who smokes a few and outside that's different and could sway it first some people. ..but you don't say..expand on it if you expect to smoke 20 cogs in someone's home be honest

Pictures .love that not full of cock but maybe a good body shot and a few smiles .

Also... yes I'm not sure about your likes and I'd be put off thinking you want a "teacher"

A few tweaks and you'll be fine

Oh and patience

Vital!"

Very great points thank you, didn't consider the smoking habits hahahaha, it's hard to forget that some people don't actually like it

But thanks for the kind advice

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By *inkySlinkyCouple
over a year ago

Leeds

The word "discrete" always puts me off. It makes me think someone is married with a non-swinging partner.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I'd ditch allt he "im new need somoen to show me the ropes"

It's sex, people don't want to be teaching a guy how to fuck.

Haha point taken, thought it was come across as humble rather tha desperate haha, will change"

Humble doesnt sell.

People are here to enduldge thier fantasies

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"The word "discrete" always puts me off. It makes me think someone is married with a non-swinging partner. "

Never thought of it like that, just saw the line about on some profiles hahah, promptly changing

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I'd ditch allt he "im new need somoen to show me the ropes"

It's sex, people don't want to be teaching a guy how to fuck.

Haha point taken, thought it was come across as humble rather tha desperate haha, will change

Humble doesnt sell.

People are here to enduldge thier fantasies "

Valid point, probably should've read the site mission statement before trying to act all "humble" hahaha

but thanks for the pointer

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Best advice I've seen in ages, which I've blatantly stolen;

""Do not be afraid to appeal to minority audiences. Be you."

Also, if you take anyones advice and it works, you have to give them 10% of all the shags you're offered as commission.

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