FabSwingers.com forum: Profile review

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

You know the score fellow forumites I've just had a tweak of my profile and any constructive criticism would be appreciated

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By *edRidingWolfCouple
over a year ago

Lydney

Punctuation, spelling and grammar.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wall of text = give up reading about a quarter of the way through.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Punctuation, spelling and grammar. "

This. But considering you've had two meets in 9 weeks, what wver you're doing is working. If it ain't broke, don't fix it.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Punctuation, spelling and grammar.

This. But considering you've had two meets in 9 weeks, what wver you're doing is working. If it ain't broke, don't fix it. "

One meet then.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Lol to be honest I'm not looking for multiple meet's just one person who I can see on a regular basis,feel that you can offer one another more when you get to know each other and find out what turns them on

but that's just me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I don't really like the way your hold your towel, I think you'll struggle with getting a meet because of that !

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sentences begin with a capital letter.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Keep trying. Don't chuck the towel in.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Well when I said constructive criticism I was kind of hoping for more than the usual scathing attack from the grammar police lol

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Well when I said constructive criticism I was kind of hoping for more than the usual scathing attack from the grammar police lol "

That is constructive though.....isn't it?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Well yes it does matter to a certain degree but was hoping for something a tad more insightful like how I should be holding my towel? Lol

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By *edRidingWolfCouple
over a year ago

Lydney

Well to be honest I had no problems with your photos so didn't mention them.

I did comment on the area that needs improving, the spelling and grammar. The text itself is ok (nothing WOW.. But I've read worse), however the spelling, punctuation and grammar seriously needs working in.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Generic

Profiling by numbers

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Generic

Profiling by numbers "

Not that I have much room to talk

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Well yes it does matter to a certain degree but was hoping for something a tad more insightful like how I should be holding my towel? Lol"

Haha

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Well to be honest I had no problems with your photos so didn't mention them.

Thanks! Well to be fair I've never been very good when it comes to writing about myself and do struggle with making myself sound good without coming across as being a boring old fart or up my own arse lol and yes grammar has never been my strong point

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