FabSwingers.com forum: Another profile advice thread

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Scariest post on the forums ever for us! Lol

But as the title suggests, we'd love some feedback on our profile.

I read it again earlier, for the first time in a while, and nearly bored myself! Lol so did some editing and cut some back.

Yet it still seems too much? Trying to get as much relevant information about us across to the reader as possible without sounding boring or being boring....

Don't feel we're succeeding too well

Constructive critism or advice would be much appreciated and great fully received. X

By *iscean MaleMan
over a year ago

Darlaston

I can related to the reading and got bored. To be honest I stopped reading part way through for similar reasons. Sorry.

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Imo it is a great profile. Yes a little long but everything relevant so I don't mind that. It is obvious you haven't copied and pasted sections so your personality comes through a little, and you are certain about what you are looking for without being closed to things. (Shame about no looking for single males

) lol

My one suggestion would be try to improve the quality of your photos. Better lighting would help a lot

By *eliciousladyWoman
over a year ago

Sometimes U.K

The first paragraph (after the 'no friend requests' warning) went on a little too long about your relationship as a couple..

Then you briefly mentioned your swinging desires but by then I had totally switched off as I had scanned down my phone to find the ending.

May I suggest you cut it back a little more

By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

When it comes to profiles that is somewhat of a novel. Maybe use bullet points.

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks for the feedback guys. Will have a rethink it somewhat