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Temptation has got the better of me.....

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

With all the posts on profile advice ....I'm not adverse to a critique of mine

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By *alandNitaCouple
over a year ago

Scunthorpe


"With all the posts on profile advice ....I'm not adverse to a critique of mine "

I know what you are trying to achieve with it, but it just doesn't read well. It feels contrived and rather bitty. If that makes sense.

I think it would work better with proper paragraphs and grammar. It currently reads more like a list.

Nice to see your face though

Nita

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

will appeal to some - 1 meet already and only on 2 weeks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

but whose face is it?...you clearly say you cant show yours?

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By *exysuzi and Mr.SCouple
over a year ago

CONISTON .Stoke Suburbia. Staffs. BARMOUTH. The Lakes (Monthly)

No, he doesn't say he can't show his face. He is on about other profiles that say they can't show face because of jobs .... Easy to see how you thought that though. I had to read it twice xxxxx Suzi

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks guys

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Paragraphs

Photos are good as is the text and you've proved it by getting a meet so soon after joining. Don't mend what ain't broke.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Paragraphs

Photos are good as is the text and you've proved it by getting a meet so soon after joining. Don't mend what ain't broke. "

You will get different reactions from different people.

I think it is different and I like the substance. On the other hand, the grammatical construction is dreadful and that puts me off. It will not put everyone off but why not correct it - then you won't be putting anyone off.

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By *ivinefoxWoman
over a year ago

Coventry

It shows you have a good sense of humour but it's too much about what you want and not what you have to offer IMO. Remember how many men you're competing with on here!

Not bad tho

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it

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