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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hey everyone, been adding and stripping bits from our profile trying to get a feel for what we are like and our wants

can someone have a read through and give us some feedback? would be much appreciated

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Hi it reads fine to me

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Brilliant thank you

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

I'd do a spell and grammar check, for example, you've used the word 'your' instead of 'you're'.

I'm not convinced saying 'no timewasters' will actually work. If a timewaster reads that, will they think "oh, shit! Rumbled!" Or do you think they will think "hee hee lets waste some time with them"?

Generally speaking, very interesting.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks good to me, love the photos by the way. Would anyone mind giving mind a look please have just rewritten it and added a new picture, any criticism on either of these would be much appreciated.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!


"Looks good to me, love the photos by the way. Would anyone mind giving mind a look please have just rewritten it and added a new picture, any criticism on either of these would be much appreciated."

It's good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Looks good to me, love the photos by the way. Would anyone mind giving mind a look please have just rewritten it and added a new picture, any criticism on either of these would be much appreciated.

It's good "

Cheers Steve.

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