FabSwingers.com forum: Hows mi profile

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Not long since been on here and ive just wrote a little about me, any advise/criticism welcome

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Not long since been on here and ive just wrote a little about me, any advise/criticism welcome

Grammar, spelling, lose the text speak, punctuation.

Start there.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Theirs no text speak on my profile is their?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Theirs no text speak on my profile is their? "

There's no text speak on my profile, is there?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Where lol other than the

? Haha im confused?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Ahh yeah bad grammer

haha

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

What have you got to offer? Why would a lady choose you over me?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Id rather not try up selling mi self haha

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Id rather not try up selling mi self haha "

It's what your profile is for, isn't it? To attract ladies? It's not selling yourself, it's advertising yourself.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Fair point but I dont wanna be blowing mi own trumpet if you get me lol just put what im after and what I like.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Fair point but I dont wanna be blowing mi own trumpet if you get me lol just put what im after and what I like."

What you're after and what you like....ok, fair enough. What about the lady?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Fair point but I dont wanna be blowing mi own trumpet if you get me lol just put what im after and what I like."

My not mi sorry, its not even like its text soeak word or a shortend quick way to write it its just changing a letter lol

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Sorry the mi, is just the way I say me vocaly being from south yorkshire haha

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

And I dont think it says that on my profile lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Confused by the use of 'mi' rather than 'my'.

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By *izzy.Woman
over a year ago

Stoke area

The bit about being straight....that needs correct spelling and a comma or two, to enable people to read it.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"The bit about being straight....that needs correct spelling and a comma or two, to enable people to read it. "

Think ive sorted that ")

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It's reading a bit negative. Sorry. It has potential though.

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By *opsy RogersWoman
over a year ago

London

If your profile reflects you perfectly then my interpretation of you is that you are much younger than you say you are and haven't quite reached the level of emotional maturity that would make you attractive to some.

The constant use of 'lol' shows you to be nervous of what you've written about yourself.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Still rubbish.. what is the not a desperate sad act all about?

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By *eliciousladyWoman
over a year ago

Sometimes U.K

Profile says 'Happy go lucky' yet you feel the need to tell an ex where to go on your status.

Is that really necessary?

The profile says nothing about what you can offer others as it's mainly about what you're looking for/want.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

"Profile says 'Happy go lucky' yet you feel the need to tell an ex where to go on your status.

Is that really necessary?

The profile says nothing about what you can offer others as it's mainly about what you're looking for/want.

I mentioned that earlier but didn't get a reply. Maybe you will.

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By *ady LickWoman
over a year ago

Northampton Somewhere

"Fair point but I dont wanna be blowing mi own trumpet if you get me lol just put what im after and what I like."

To me that makes you sound a bit selfish. Didn't you realise it's all about us ladies?!!!!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Never use the word mi for my ever again .

Never ever ever !!

Just stop

Please

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I understand you don't want to oversell but you have to sell yourself a bit pal, give people a reason to meet you. Just don't say anything which isn't true

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Haha fair play. the ex thing, yes I wrote that on my profile after a massive hurl of abuse from her and after a few drinks. I dont know what profile she has as shes made a fake one to spy on me

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Haha fair play. the ex thing, yes I wrote that on my profile after a massive hurl of abuse from her and after a few drinks. I dont know what profile she has as shes made a fake one to spy on me "

If you dont know what profile how did she hurl abuse at you?

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Shes the mother of my children, she has my number

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Shes the mother of my children, she has my number "

We really don't care.

To me, you sound immature and would not be for us.

But good luck.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Well I've made myself out to be a bit of a t##t by the looks of things :/ well I've had a little re write hope I come across a little better

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By *piritsonfabCouple
over a year ago

Nottingham

Didn't seem too bad to me. Lose the bit about messages from guys... they won't read it anyway and it's negative.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"Didn't seem too bad to me. Lose the bit about messages from guys... they won't read it anyway and it's negative.

Thanks and will do

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Didn't seem too bad to me. Lose the bit about messages from guys... they won't read it anyway and it's negative.

Thanks and will do

Way, way better mate!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"If your profile reflects you perfectly then my interpretation of you is that you are much younger than you say you are and haven't quite reached the level of emotional maturity that would make you attractive to some.

The constant use of 'lol' shows you to be nervous of what you've written about yourself."

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

It's a lot better than it was.

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By *hocoholicWoman
over a year ago

The big D

I hadn't seen your previous profile but from the looks of the comments you have taken note of input from other Fabbers so well done & your profiles fine now.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Just want to say thanks for everyone's input

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By *andS66Couple
over a year ago

Derby

The only thing we would say, is your photos are all very similar to each other, and look kind of miserable and sullen in them. Doesn't tally with being a 'happy go lucky' type. So a pic with a smile wouldn't go amiss.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Id appreciate the same actually, joined a while ago but have onky just started using regularly and only just written a profile.

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