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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice

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By *irtyGirlWoman
over a year ago

Edinburgh

You need to sort that shit out!

Seriously... lose that line and whilst I don't want to be the grammar police, you asked for help so I suggest you proof read it and fix the typos.

Hope that helps

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By *ivnwcplCouple
over a year ago

liverpool


"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice "
Get a new keyboard, it's sticking on some letters

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Spelling and pics that are a little less focused on your crotch.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As others have said sort out the spellings, vary your pics a bit. Shouting in your first line about 'sorting shit' is going to put lots of people off. And saying your kinks puts lots off makes you sound a bit weird. Maybe take it out and when you get chatting ask them if they have any kinks and go from there.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice "

A seriously badly written profile. My apologies if you are dyslexic.

"Try before you bye," for instance, is very different from, "Try before you buy" (though neither may be appropriate).

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice

A seriously badly written profile. My apologies if you are dyslexic.

"Try before you bye," for instance, is very different from, "Try before you buy" (though neither may be appropriate)."

Could be a play on words though?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Am I the only one that noticed that the body in the profile pic doesn't seem to match the other pics at all. Either an old pic, or not you.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi there I no my profile isn't the best and prob not the worst but I was just wondering if people could check it out and give me a bit off advice

A seriously badly written profile. My apologies if you are dyslexic.

"Try before you bye," for instance, is very different from, "Try before you buy" (though neither may be appropriate).

Could be a play on words though? "

It could indeed but looking at the rest of the profile, I fear it is just bad spelling.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Have you tried googly eyes on your penis?

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By *umpleteazerWoman
over a year ago

Flintshire

I never understand the 'challenge' thing. Surely sex should be a mutually enjoyable experience rather than a test or competition?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Euch! "Up for the challenge". Like we win a prize or something.

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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

Get rid of the first line!

And yes, I am yet another member of the Grammar Police, and I'm afraid the number of mistakes in your profile is very off-putting! Spend some time and effort putting things right

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By *ordonBennettMan
over a year ago

dover

I agree..the first line is awful, but you don't seem inclined to take up or even acknowledge the good and consistent advice on offer, in spite of having been online a fair bit in the time that others have posted, so this looks like yet another thread seeking attention rather than advice..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

The consensus of opinion so far is you are illiterate and the pics are of different people now won't that just put you off asking again ,patience is the key

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

To all that have replied about my spelling yes I am dyslexic and if you want me to write a essay before we meet then that's fine I do appreciate the advice and I will take note as for people saying photo isn't mine ive been verified so please stop the abuse if i wanted abuse as I'm not abusing you but thank you for advices

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"To all that have replied about my spelling yes I am dyslexic and if you want me to write a essay before we meet then that's fine I do appreciate the advice and I will take note as for people saying photo isn't mine ive been verified so please stop the abuse if i wanted abuse as I'm not abusing you but thank you for advices "

Don't worry mate. They'll see past the spelling once you sort out the googly eyes on your penis

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

What you going on about

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"To all that have replied about my spelling yes I am dyslexic and if you want me to write a essay before we meet then that's fine I do appreciate the advice and I will take note as for people saying photo isn't mine ive been verified so please stop the abuse if i wanted abuse as I'm not abusing you but thank you for advices "

Things are improving; bearly a glitch in this post.

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