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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi fellow swingers,

Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.

I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Profile looks ok......oh dear! What must that mean lol?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

OK...translation, it needs work lol

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By *harpDressed ManMan
over a year ago

Here occasionally, but mostly somewhere else

What conversion rate are you claiming?

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By *ordonBennettMan
over a year ago

dover


"OK...translation, it needs work lol"

I've seen a lot worse.

I would lose the reference to messages from guys ..all you need is to filter your messages.

Also the meaningless legal notice clutters it up.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Pretty good to be fair, good amount of public pics, nicely written, you accomodate. Don't need the legal bit Think you just have lots of competition x

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By *ause and EffectCouple
over a year ago

Southampton

I thought your profile was decent! If I were being critical, there are a couple too many cock shots, but otherwise your pics are good and the text is alright....

The legal stuff is pointless so take that out and maybe say a bit more about what you're interested in?

Good luck - seems to me that you're doing the right things Mrs C&E

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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

That legal warning bollocks is longer than your profile, and means absolutely nothing

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By *ady4ladyWoman
over a year ago

liverpool

All looks good to me.... up there with the other good male profiles.

ps... you look even more tasty with the specs on

good luck and stay safe x

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By *lirtyGirl1Woman
over a year ago

Northwest

I'd take out the bit about you being 'addictive'

And I'd just leave it as 'to deliver' instead of 'to deliver ....... orgasms.

Just my opinion.

Might help you to get meets if you get yourself out to clubs.

That way people can see you face to face, chat etc rather then just judging you from your profile, pics, verification & messages alone.

One thing I've learned from the site is that you need to actually meet someone before you can accurately decide if you want to swing with them or not

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi fellow swingers,

Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.

I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome "

What is all that legal bullshit people keep putting on their profiles???

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi fellow swingers,

Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.

I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome "

For us the profile has very little to do with it. It's more to do with the contact e-mail. That's our best indicator of whether people may interest us. But do lose the quasi legal twaddle.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi fellow swingers,

Looking for a quick critique of my profile. Either it's very poor, or I'm extremely ugly as I have a poor conversion rate lol.

I've tried to inject some humour into my profile, and I tend to tailor my messages I send out. Any advice welcome "

if I'm honest not much content and a little arrogant many women don't like that ,you need to get rid of spelling mistakes here should be hear and put more content about you as a person and what you like and are looking for good luck

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks for the advice everyone. I'll fine tune it. Hoping to get to some clubs next week, kesteals or ab fabs seem like good starts. Happy swinging, and if you see me, come and say 'hi'

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By *landfordfabbersCouple
over a year ago

Blandford ish

My input, nice selection of pics and not just cock, the text is a bit check list rather than human, but it's better than most as is

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By *eliciousladyWoman
over a year ago

Sometimes U.K

Didn't get a feel for your 'humour' but otherwise a friendly, if a bit brief, profile

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

One of the photos looks like you're wearing mickey mouse balloon ears. Profile looks fine to me.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

There appears to be an over abundance of black guys in the London Area, maybe if you lived further north things would be different

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By *iss_tressWoman
over a year ago

London

Too many cock pics and a forgettable profile. Similar to the thousands of other generic profiles.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Cheers for the further input.

I'll flesh it out further. Want to be a little left field, any suggestions?

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By *ustcutieWoman
over a year ago

edinburgh


"Cheers for the further input.

I'll flesh it out further. Want to be a little left field, any suggestions?"

Move to Edinburgh

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"Cheers for the further input.

I'll flesh it out further. Want to be a little left field, any suggestions?

Move to Edinburgh "

Lol or maybe you should move to London?

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By *uriousBristolCplCouple
over a year ago

Bristol

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By *ustcutieWoman
over a year ago

edinburgh

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By *uriousBristolCplCouple
over a year ago

Bristol

If you're telling Ladies you're single (of which we have no idea) it may be an idea to exclude the pics with GF/Wife's clothes in background

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"If you're telling Ladies you're single (of which we have no idea) it may be an idea to exclude the pics with GF/Wife's clothes in background "

Incorrect, living with my Mum and currently house hunting but fair observation.

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By *harpDressed ManMan
over a year ago

Here occasionally, but mostly somewhere else

Taking pics in your mum's bedroom is MUCH better...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I've completely rewritten this now. New improved, and generally sucking a lot less than before.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"I've completely rewritten this now. New improved, and generally sucking a lot less than before."

It's a good profile......didn't see the old one though lol.

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By *ady4ladyWoman
over a year ago

liverpool

Preferred the original..... but hey , good luck. X

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By *ause and EffectCouple
over a year ago

Southampton


"Preferred the original..... but hey , good luck. X "

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By *ohjaneCouple
over a year ago

south staffs


"Thanks for the advice everyone. I'll fine tune it. Hoping to get to some clubs next week, kesteals or ab fabs seem like good starts. Happy swinging, and if you see me, come and say 'hi' "

-And it is sooo nice to see a face picture with a lovely smile on !

Well done.

Jane x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sex doctor? Really?

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