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By *nterracial2 OP   Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

So, just seeing a lot of people on the threads asking for advice on their profile, we ran a thread like this a while back and it helped us and others streamline our profiles and make it more appealing. Just list a few positive and a few negative points about the profile above you. Remember honesty is a must. Oh and remember to start with the name of the profile you're referring to, if it gets too popular it just becomes a frenzy nobody can understand. The template to follow is below. Happy fabbing

Profile:

Pos -

Neg -

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Use of the word 'gendering' as a verb is interesting.

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By *nterracial2 OP   Couple
over a year ago

Ribble Valley

Thanks, damn autocorrect, back to the intended phrase

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Beemcpl

Great profile. The only negative for me is there's no naked photo of the mr...

Otherwise cracking profile. x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

@Trza

Only critique is you're a couple and are both meeting.....have a photo or two of him on display too.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A Naughty Twosome

Pro - Good full profile says what you require.

Con - Profile text goes on a bit and no clear body pics of hubby

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Tonjul

Pros

Have some good pics of both

Cons

Profile has more demands then exactly tell us about you and lynx can??? Surely everyone knows its a sky remote or nothing

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Profile: cinnamonandginger

Pos - Profile is direct and very well written and informative. An interesting read.

Neg - The only thing i would say is you could include more information about what pleasure you can offer potential meets.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Profile: cinnamonandginger

Pos - Profile is direct and very well written and informative. An interesting read.

Neg - The only thing i would say is you could include more information about what pleasure you can offer potential meets."

Have taken that on board thanks as as for your profile........

Nowt wrong with it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Profile: cinnamonandginger

Pos - Profile is direct and very well written and informative. An interesting read.

Neg - The only thing i would say is you could include more information about what pleasure you can offer potential meets.

Have taken that on board thanks as as for your profile........

Nowt wrong with it "

Thanks guys x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

peach-n-ess...loved it..

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"peach-n-ess...loved it.."

Good profile. Get your point out there the main points and very informative.

If I was to give constructive criticism is that maybe there's a few too many pictures (if there's such a thing lol)

All round good profile

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Nothing much to improve your profile, just a few spell check things but that's just me being anal, haha.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Nothing much to improve your profile, just a few spell check things but that's just me being anal, haha."
maybe add a little more to your profile,your likes etc

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By *mallteaserWoman
over a year ago

Central


"Nothing much to improve your profile, just a few spell check things but that's just me being anal, haha.maybe add a little more to your profile,your likes etc "

Great the way it is x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

@ Smallteaser

Good profile but auto spell mistake 'done' instead of 'down'

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

@meanblues

Pro's:

Face pics and verifications on your profile.

Negs:

Your profile isn't very well written and that's odd for a man who says he prefers intelligence over looks. Mostly inappropriate use of capital letters but it also reads a bit like a classifieds add where your limited to word count....

"Always well presented, clean shaven. Totally Laid back and Easy Going... Love to Laugh Genuine, single, can accomodate, nothing to hide."

If you're really looking for intelligent people you might want to string your sentences together properly. Accommodate has two MM's also.

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By *rladytoyMan
over a year ago

bournemouth

Do your worst

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By *ral-lover86Man
over a year ago

Oxford

Can you take a look at mine

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Oh look.... someone who can't read

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Wow. Two in one minute....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Acslater30

Pros It's a generally well written profile

Cons A lot of cock grabbing in your pictures or pics showing what you have down there but as you say you're fit so show us. Also Abu Dhabi too far away

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Cinnamonandginger,

Can find anything wrong with it tbh. Well written and informative

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

HuddsR

Pos: Seems fairly positive and well written.

Neg: Limited number of pics. Would also be interested to see who your wife is on here - lots of married males come on here claiming their wife "knows about it", when in fact they don't.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"HuddsR

Pos: Seems fairly positive and well written.

Neg: Limited number of pics. Would also be interested to see who your wife is on here - lots of married males come on here claiming their wife "knows about it", when in fact they don't.

"

Fair point, thanks! added her profile to it, for some reason fab wouldn't let her verify me which I found hilarious lol. I'll try to get some more pics up soon, even the dreaded cock shot lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Positives:

Clear concise profile...makes me wAnt to know more

Neg: a little more humour or lightheartedness ! Xxx

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By *ig Ted 66Man
over a year ago

Hinckley

Hi Kinkynips

+ Very clear & concise about what you seek and how, when etc. No doubts left there!

- Lots of short 'statement' based sentences which could come across as very direct and officious? - perhaps a few less full stops?!

Also, not one pic. on show? which is a tad surprising and unusual.

Hope this helps ?! BT xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Always keen to receive constructive feedback on my profile.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Go on then let's have it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I would be interested on how my profile looks to other x

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By *outhEastPaulMan
over a year ago

Thames Ditton surrey

Kinky nips

Clear and precise with no contradictions

Been wondering about rewording mine making shorter but then you have to be descriptive - be nice to have costructive feedback here or privately

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

South east Paul.

Pros.Good pics and stuff

Cons. Text too long for me. I wanted to die half way through haha. Too many words.

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By *outhEastPaulMan
over a year ago

Thames Ditton surrey

Boscottie thanks for feedback I will try and cut some of it out any suggestions as what

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"HuddsR

Pos: Seems fairly positive and well written.

Neg: Limited number of pics. Would also be interested to see who your wife is on here - lots of married males come on here claiming their wife "knows about it", when in fact they don't.

"

Also asked her to put me on hers. Thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

in it to win it... lets be having your feedback. inb4 you need pics.

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By *lashheartMan
over a year ago

shrewsbury


"in it to win it... lets be having your feedback. inb4 you need pics. "

Yes you need pics.. And trying a bit hard on the humour maybe?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"in it to win it... lets be having your feedback. inb4 you need pics.

Yes you need pics.. And trying a bit hard on the humour maybe? "

Loose the bow tie, crap boxers pics xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Be gentle

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Be gentle "

Needs more male pics, like most couples profiles.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I don't think I can really add anything. Judging by your popularity

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Be gentle

Needs more male pics, like most couples profiles."

Thank you

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Pics not bad, text is a little thin but says what you want. If your both taking part in the cuckold scenario, yes......a couple more shots of the fella.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Pics not bad, text is a little thin but says what you want. If your both taking part in the cuckold scenario, yes......a couple more shots of the fella. "

Would be good to see more of the fella, also it is very long, you should pull out the main points so folk don't just message you without reading it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Pics not bad, text is a little thin but says what you want. If your both taking part in the cuckold scenario, yes......a couple more shots of the fella. "

Thank you, what sort of pics?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Pics not bad, text is a little thin but says what you want. If your both taking part in the cuckold scenario, yes......a couple more shots of the fella.

Would be good to see more of the fella, also it is very long, you should pull out the main points so folk don't just message you without reading it"
we've had short, we've had long. Most don't read it whatever's written there.

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By *lashheartMan
over a year ago

shrewsbury


"Pics not bad, text is a little thin but says what you want. If your both taking part in the cuckold scenario, yes......a couple more shots of the fella.

Would be good to see more of the fella, also it is very long, you should pull out the main points so folk don't just message you without reading it we've had short, we've had long. Most don't read it whatever's written there. "

As a guy who does read profiles it is on the long side but very readable and explains perfectly what your looking for.

Great pics in my opinion, the lady's pics are very sexy and the couple pics nice.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Needs to say 'WOOF WOOF!!!' somewhere in the profile.

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By *uzy444Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside

positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x"

Great profile to the point explains exactly what you are looking for and you have also stated that you have turned of your messages so people know if they click the message button they are not gonna be hit with the dreaded yellow banner.

This is only my personal opinion and relative newbie all the verifications would be daunting if I was to message you.

However it is your profile and you can display whatever you wish

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By *uzy444Woman
over a year ago

in the suffolk countryside


"positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x

Great profile to the point explains exactly what you are looking for and you have also stated that you have turned of your messages so people know if they click the message button they are not gonna be hit with the dreaded yellow banner.

This is only my personal opinion and relative newbie all the verifications would be daunting if I was to message you.

However it is your profile and you can display whatever you wish "

thankyou. whay are they daunting? the amount or what they say? im a relative newbie myself..im interested in what you have to say xx

your profile...

i know exactly what you are looking for..however i know doms are all different..so what kind of dom are you?...what are you a 'specialist' in?

love some public pics x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x

Great profile to the point explains exactly what you are looking for and you have also stated that you have turned of your messages so people know if they click the message button they are not gonna be hit with the dreaded yellow banner.

This is only my personal opinion and relative newbie all the verifications would be daunting if I was to message you.

However it is your profile and you can display whatever you wish

thankyou. whay are they daunting? the amount or what they say? im a relative newbie myself..im interested in what you have to say xx

your profile...

i know exactly what you are looking for..however i know doms are all different..so what kind of dom are you?...what are you a 'specialist' in?

love some public pics x"

I'd just take the legal notice off the bottom short but sweet, sorry lol x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

OK I am game ...be gentle x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x

Great profile to the point explains exactly what you are looking for and you have also stated that you have turned of your messages so people know if they click the message button they are not gonna be hit with the dreaded yellow banner.

This is only my personal opinion and relative newbie all the verifications would be daunting if I was to message you.

However it is your profile and you can display whatever you wish

thankyou. whay are they daunting? the amount or what they say? im a relative newbie myself..im interested in what you have to say xx

your profile...

i know exactly what you are looking for..however i know doms are all different..so what kind of dom are you?...what are you a 'specialist' in?

love some public pics x

I'd just take the legal notice off the bottom short but sweet, sorry lol x"

More pics of those perky boobies ^_^

Since you're looking for locals and can't travel or accom (so guessing public transport? ) maybe say which transport system (dont know if telford has a tram etc sorry lol) or areas that locals will know off so they have an idea of your mobility.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x

Great profile to the point explains exactly what you are looking for and you have also stated that you have turned of your messages so people know if they click the message button they are not gonna be hit with the dreaded yellow banner.

This is only my personal opinion and relative newbie all the verifications would be daunting if I was to message you.

However it is your profile and you can display whatever you wish

thankyou. whay are they daunting? the amount or what they say? im a relative newbie myself..im interested in what you have to say xx

your profile...

i know exactly what you are looking for..however i know doms are all different..so what kind of dom are you?...what are you a 'specialist' in?

love some public pics x

I'd just take the legal notice off the bottom short but sweet, sorry lol x"

Sounds perfect to me ...to the point but keeps you engaged

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x

Great profile to the point explains exactly what you are looking for and you have also stated that you have turned of your messages so people know if they click the message button they are not gonna be hit with the dreaded yellow banner.

This is only my personal opinion and relative newbie all the verifications would be daunting if I was to message you.

However it is your profile and you can display whatever you wish

thankyou. whay are they daunting? the amount or what they say? im a relative newbie myself..im interested in what you have to say xx

your profile...

i know exactly what you are looking for..however i know doms are all different..so what kind of dom are you?...what are you a 'specialist' in?

love some public pics x

I'd just take the legal notice off the bottom short but sweet, sorry lol x

Sounds perfect to me ...to the point but keeps you engaged "

ERM that was meant to be a

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"positive..i know what swinging is to you

other..dont need to see your cock and how many letters you can fit on it..

really like to see one of you just full length,relaxed, in jeans and shirt with torso bare..of course id like to see face pic, but understand your reticence. preferences sexually? what do you like to receive...

please classify what you term overweight..some women think they are overweight..even when they are not x

Great profile to the point explains exactly what you are looking for and you have also stated that you have turned of your messages so people know if they click the message button they are not gonna be hit with the dreaded yellow banner.

This is only my personal opinion and relative newbie all the verifications would be daunting if I was to message you.

However it is your profile and you can display whatever you wish

thankyou. whay are they daunting? the amount or what they say? im a relative newbie myself..im interested in what you have to say xx

your profile...

i know exactly what you are looking for..however i know doms are all different..so what kind of dom are you?...what are you a 'specialist' in?

love some public pics x"

Hi Suzy

Thank you for commenting and will take the points on that you have suggested.

With regards to the verifications it was daunting from the point of view that there were so many of them not what they said.

I personally would display 3 or 4 of your favourite ones and the rest could be a summary.

To me it was just WOAH you are out of league lol - which you most probably are

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi Kinkynips

+ Very clear & concise about what you seek and how, when etc. No doubts left there!

- Lots of short 'statement' based sentences which could come across as very direct and officious? - perhaps a few less full stops?!

Also, not one pic. on show? which is a tad surprising and unusual.

Hope this helps ?! BT xx "

It does thank you!! I'll amend !! Xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Kinky nips

Insist on a fave pic but all you have on display is a close up boobs pic! Put us off x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Kinky nips

Insist on a fave pic but all you have on display is a close up boobs pic! Put us off x"

Face on fave lol xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Newcouplecambs. . If calsberg made swinger profiles...

Tried to find faults or ways to improve but you've even criticised yourselves at the end!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Newcouplecambs. . If calsberg made swinger profiles...

Tried to find faults or ways to improve but you've even criticised yourselves at the end!"

P's Had a lay down and now need a cold lager.. maybe that's something that should be added!

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By *P2903Couple
over a year ago

Rotherham

We'll happily have some feedback if anyone is willing to have a gander?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"We'll happily have some feedback if anyone is willing to have a gander?"

Not much improvement needed to be honest if anything maybe some body shots of Mr for other couples looking to meet you but apart from that A1

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By *P2903Couple
over a year ago

Rotherham

Thank you

We'll get some added shortly I think

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Thank you

We'll get some added shortly I think"

If I was to be incredibly picky I'd say more variation in your pics.

I hate shots of peple standing up against the wall. Remind me of when I was younger being placed against the wall in my school uniform on the first day of school

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By *P2903Couple
over a year ago

Rotherham

Appreciated

I'll convince the missus to let me take pics elsewhere. Call it a lack of creativity on my part

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By *P2903Couple
over a year ago

Rotherham

Although the school uniform part...

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Although the school uniform part..."

lol if you need a hand setting up the stage I'd happily volunteer my services

I look forward to seeing the results. Have fun peeps.

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