FabSwingers.com forum: profile analysis please..

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hi we did ask a while back and got some criticism and some really helpful input, as time has gone on and things have evolved just thought we would ask and see what people think. Thanks all in advance.

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By *oodmessMan
over a year ago

yumsville

I'd take this bit out

"We are not experienced as our lack of veri's will show but we are genuine and happy to have a phone conversation with both ladies if needed. We have face pics and are happy to share after a few messages or a chat."

and just include it as a smaller sentence like you have with no bareback nearer the bottom. Something like 'Ladies must verify each other via phone before meeting'

The first and second para would then flow into each other a lot better.

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By *uckandbunnyCouple
over a year ago

In your bed

Seems pretty good. We'd adda pic of the female in a nice sexy dress but everyone is different.

Would happily wink or say hi to that profile.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thankyou for taking the time. We appreciate it.

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By *leur de lisWoman
over a year ago

Buxton

"Hi we did ask a while back and got some criticism and some really helpful input, as time has gone on and things have evolved just thought we would ask and see what people think. Thanks all in advance."

It seems fine but would be less visually negative if you removed the no single guys bit and just blocked them as doing it the other way round is totaly pointless.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It seems fine but would be less visually negative if you removed the no single guys bit and just blocked them as doing it the other way round is totaly pointless. "
But it sais they met single men tho.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

We left it as no single guys as we do search for them when we would like to find one but just dont want to be inundated with messages.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks fine to me but I would lose the blurry pictures.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Looks fine to me but I would lose the blurry pictures."

I think it looks ok, agree maybe a pic of the sexy lady in a nice dress! If you don't want to be inundated with messages from single males use your message filters and then you can search as and when you're looking for them xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"We left it as no single guys as we do search for them when we would like to find one but just dont want to be inundated with messages."

Block us. The message is patronising in my opinion.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"We left it as no single guys as we do search for them when we would like to find one but just dont want to be inundated with messages.

Block us. The message is patronising in my opinion."

Thankyou for your input but how is that patronising if you dont mind me asking?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

nice pics

cute bum too

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"We left it as no single guys as we do search for them when we would like to find one but just dont want to be inundated with messages.

Block us. The message is patronising in my opinion.

Thankyou for your input but how is that patronising if you dont mind me asking?"

Well no one ever puts no single females or no tvs/ts or no couples. They would just block the ones they dont want. It's kind of like your reinforcing the point home. All single men are bastards. I'm sure that's not what you mean of course. It's just how it reads.

Additionally if you block single men specifically it displays very distinctly that you are not looking for them anyways in your summary section. ALso if you find a chap you like and message him first he can get round your message block. It's designed that way. Perhaps patronising was the wrong word. More a case of it being an annoyance.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I've just read your profile. I hadn't before my earlier comment, i was going off what another poster had said. Terrible of me I know. I actually think it's very good. And the line single males we will find you reads much better than something like single males will be blocked which I have seen on others.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thankyou everyone your help is appreciated some of the pics will be changed and one of mrs in a dress added. Thankyou all very much.

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