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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I want to know why people all ways says that my profile doesn't make sense.. Please say what do you thinks is not right or what do you think I need to change.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's quite bitty and doesn't flow! It's like you keep adding bits on.

Try to rephrase it all into paragraphs.

Talk about yourself.

Talk about your likes / dislikes

Talk about what your looking for

Have a structure so it reads easier!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Needs more cock.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think as well, with English being your third language...it's reflected a little but in your writing...

I think it's understandable but it would benefit from a bit of a re write...do you know anyone who could give you a hand?

Greek is my second language and I'd need some help writing something like a fab profile so you've done pretty well so far to be honest.

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By *ce WingerMan
over a year ago

P.O. Box DE1 0NQ


"Needs more cock."

Depends what he's going to do with it

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks everyone

I have done some changes have a look and see what you think now.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"It's quite bitty and doesn't flow! It's like you keep adding bits on."

Like he did with his knob you mean!?!?

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