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By *rightonCheeky OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton

Hi Fabsters!

We've been back for 3 weeks and now we're back in the groove it was time to improve our profile text.

Do you get a feel for who we are and what we're about when you read it and look at our pictures?

Does it come across as inviting?

Any suggestions or feedback gratefully received

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Very inviting

Just missing that all important verification

Although I would take out the experienced swingers from before bit x

Fab pics btw, again I'd take out the pro photographer bit some people equate that to chancers xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I think it says who you are, what you are looking for and what you requirements are.

Good photos too.

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By *rightonCheeky OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton


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Fab pics btw, again I'd take out the pro photographer bit some people equate that to chancers xx"

Good advice, actually a keen amateur (with pro equipment) but taken it out and now just mentions we love taking pics

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By *rightonCheeky OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton


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Although I would take out the experienced swingers from before bit x

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We wasn't sure wether to put this or not, as we've both very much played before, but equally we're engaged now so was trying to get this across. Maybe a case of too much information?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


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Although I would take out the experienced swingers from before bit x

We wasn't sure wether to put this or not, as we've both very much played before, but equally we're engaged now so was trying to get this across. Maybe a case of too much information? "

Yes that's the feeling

Mind you we are ones to talk our profile is so bloody long lol x

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By *rightonCheeky OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton


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Yes that's the feeling

Mind you we are ones to talk our profile is so bloody long lol x"

All good advice, have changed it a bit accordingly.... oh your profile maybe long, but very appealing xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Great profile and love the pics!!!

Wish we had couple pics but C prefers to be behind the camera lol!

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By *rightonCheeky OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton


"Great profile and love the pics!!!

Wish we had couple pics but C prefers to be behind the camera lol! "

Thanks for the compliments! We've made a few adjustments now based upon the comments here... aww is Mr C a bit camera shy? xx

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By *ertiVogtsMan
over a year ago

Exeter

A well written profile.

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By *rightonCheeky OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton


"A well written profile."

Thanks, we've been tweaking it today based on feedback here x

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By *rightonCheeky OP   Man
over a year ago

Brighton


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Just missing that all important verification

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A good point .... Sorted now lol xx

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