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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hello

I have just reread my profile. I would like your opinions.

Is it to long and wordy?

Do people generally read profiles or just look at profile pictures?

Is a good opening line to a profile something that makes you read more.

Love to hear your thoughts

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By *amissCouple
over a year ago

chelmsford


"Hello

I have just reread my profile. I would like your opinions.

Is it to long and wordy?

Do people generally read profiles or just look at profile pictures?

Is a good opening line to a profile something that makes you read more.

Love to hear your thoughts"

I think it is very well written with some tasteful pics. We wouldn't meet someone who is attached but there are many who do!

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By *isa 59Woman
over a year ago

Newcastle

I always read the profiles...for me it's more about the overall content than a catchy first line.

Personally, I do find yours a bit long...I think you could cut it down somewhat while still getting your personality across.

I hope that helps to answer your questions

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

TL:DR

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By *jandjbCouple
over a year ago

Nr Manchester

It's very poetic and romantic and probably perfect for the kind of woman you're trying to tempt.

If I'm being picky it may be a little lengthy but I didn't want it to stop! Lol.

Loved your pics (thankfully no cocks)!

You should set up a profile workshop on here or perhaps to help guys on dating sites. You'd make a killing.

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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

Great profile! I always love to read a well written and well thought out profile. You could teach so many a thing or two, both with your text and your pics

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thank you for your thoughts . It was rather kind of you to take the time to read and reply.

I think a bit of an editing session this evening.

Xx

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By *ackspopCouple
over a year ago

Wymondham


"TL:DR

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Lol

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By *ipsTeaserCouple
over a year ago

here and there, thereabouts

It's a very attractive profile. Your pics are tasteful and your blurb very descriptive of you and your wants. It's slightly lengthy but I don't see that as a bad thing as everything you mention is relevant and unrepeated.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

took less than a minute to scan over and get the gist of it. don't think it's too long at all. good luck.

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By *issmorganWoman
over a year ago

Calderdale innit

Well written and you've been completely honest giving people a choice about meeting you with full facts.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

profile slightly edited

what do you think x

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