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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I know am leaving myself open to all sorts but I just revamped my profile under someones advise could anyone tell me what they think of it?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You did?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Yes only minor changes is it no good still?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You've used the word 'an' instead of 'and' several times, and there's no punctuation. Being brutally honest, since that's what you've asked for, your English isn't great, it's too short and not very imaginative.

This is meant as constructive criticism.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

better photos as it looks like you are playing away

and a profile with likes dislikes and what u are looking for!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Needs a lot more work i'm afraid

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thank you I will take note of all comments.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's not great in all honesty.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Ask the lady you've been meeting what she liked about your profile.

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By *iewMan
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over a year ago

Angus & Findhorn

I can imagine females who are actively seeking guys will take a look at it, they will know what you are offering and will see that something 'special' and message you instead of the 100/1000's others...

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