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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Hi all.

I have updated my profile tonight, I have been a member of FAB just over a year now but as yet have been lucky enough to meet.

I have exchanged messages, and have a short list of friends.

Would like any feedback from the female perspective on what they think of my profile.

Pls be as honest as you like

Thanks

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By *icketysplitsWoman
over a year ago

Way over Yonder, that's where I'm bound

Your profile reads like a stream of consciousness. Perhaps try saying something about you, what you have to offer and what you are looking for. Or, something witty and off the wall.

Maybe it isn't the profile but the messages you send.

Good luck.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Is a little dull if I'm honest. Do you see your new car as a selling point? Unfortunately for single guys this is a massive numbers game. You have to stand out. This is your shop window so dress it well. Explain what you want but more importantly what you can offer. The formula is simple. Effort in = Results out!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Can only echo others comments. It's a collection of generic phrases strung together that tells us nothing about you, what you like it what you can offer someone.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

updated again

thanks eveyone

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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)

Its a bit dull, comes across as materialistic - I don't give a damn whether you own your home and it just sounds like you mention the car to get in the fact its a convertible... not anything I require to know from a fab meet.

You don't tell me what you like and offer.

Its a bit more dating in feel than swing if that makes any sense, but well done on not having 15 cock pics from various angles and accoutrements!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You are either ambivalent , or not good at making a firm arrangement . How can you have your own house , be free every night , even offer a holiday and still not get a meet ?

Perhaps because you do a better job of selling your car than yourself ?

Or are there no face pics for a reason ?

Or are you looking for more than prospective meets are after ?

Baffling to be honest .

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Crikey it's a brave or masochistic individual who puts themselves up for a critique on the Fab my profile feedback show !!!!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

The profile was updated tonight

I was after feedback in the new content

What was good not good

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

And that's what you have mucker. Feed back on your profile.

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By *adybee77Woman
over a year ago

MAMOBA, miles and miles of bugger all (Aberdeenshire)


"The profile was updated tonight

I was after feedback in the new content

What was good not good"

spell check it but an improvement.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I know

I was referencing to I have only previously changes the content in regards to free house etc

Was in response to the reply about

Having not yet had a meet despite saying have own house etc

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Oops

My bad

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks for your feedback

How does it look now

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It reads ok, don't fall into the trap of changing it every time someone offers a suggestion. Your profile will cease to reflect you and your personality, instead a collection of other peoples opinions of what they want to see in a profile.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks

It's all relevant

I think my first attempt was am effort not to come across as arrogant

Thank you for your input

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Bump

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