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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester

Hi ladies,

I've just revamped/updated my profile. Please could you take a look and give me some feedback? I don't necessarily need positive feedback, but I'd welcome negative feedback as it will help me a lot.

Any help would be brilliant.

Thank you. Xxx

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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago

Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum

The formatting is a bit weird. Like you're talking

like

William Shatner.

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By *empting Devil.Woman
over a year ago

Sheffield

A bum pic would be nice.

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By *issHottieBottieWoman
over a year ago

Kent

I dozed off halfway through

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"The formatting is a bit weird. Like you're talking

like

William Shatner."

Thanks, fixed! I don't know how that happened! X

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"A bum pic would be nice. "

Cheeky! I dare not add a bum pic. Ladies are forever complementing me on it and the gay lads wouldn't stop messaging me!

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"I dozed off halfway through "

Lols! Anything in particular you feel is excessive?

X

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"A bum pic would be nice.

Cheeky! I dare not add a bum pic. Ladies are forever complementing me on it and the gay lads wouldn't stop messaging me!"

your profile is ok, till I fell asleep, maybe you could get your cock straightened or get a better angle

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By *ighland_RoseCouple
over a year ago

Brigadoon

Three of your photos are basically the same and the other one is a cock photo, I prefer profiles that keep them private.

Sorry I haven't read your text yet...went straight to the pics!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Well done for trying to put detail into the text but I must admit I stopped reading half way through...

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By *ighland_RoseCouple
over a year ago

Brigadoon

Ok, I've read the text now and I have to say it's one of the best written profiles I have read on here. I think just about everything a woman needs to know about you is there, apart from why you won't meet at your house.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

It's just a tad long winded to be honest. It 'could' come across as being all about you, but that's open to interpretation. Either way, it does tell people what you are expecting out of this site and there is absolutely nothing wrong with that. Pictures are fine, only one cock shot which is a good thing (too many cock shots are bad shit) Yeah it's fine - Hope I didn't sound like an X Factor Judge btw ..

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By *uicylucy76Woman
over a year ago

thornton cleveleys

It's not bad I personally think u maybe just put to much detail into wat would/ wouldn't happen. X

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"A bum pic would be nice.

Cheeky! I dare not add a bum pic. Ladies are forever complementing me on it and the gay lads wouldn't stop messaging me!

your profile is ok, till I fell asleep, maybe you could get your cock straightened or get a better angle "

Ok, what do you think is excessive? Haha, I like my curve! Xx

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"Three of your photos are basically the same and the other one is a cock photo, I prefer profiles that keep them private.

Sorry I haven't read your text yet...went straight to the pics!"

Cheers!

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"Ok, I've read the text now and I have to say it's one of the best written profiles I have read on here. I think just about everything a woman needs to know about you is there, apart from why you won't meet at your house."

The reason is embarrassing for my age!

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"It's just a tad long winded to be honest. It 'could' come across as being all about you, but that's open to interpretation. Either way, it does tell people what you are expecting out of this site and there is absolutely nothing wrong with that. Pictures are fine, only one cock shot which is a good thing (too many cock shots are bad shit) Yeah it's fine - Hope I didn't sound like an X Factor Judge btw .."

Thanks x

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"It's not bad I personally think u maybe just put to much detail into wat would/ wouldn't happen. X"

Excellent! Thanks hun.

Everybody else agree with this?

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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago

Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum

I find it too long, but then I'm not in your preferences.

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"I find it too long, but then I'm not in your preferences."

Aww I'm sorry hun. Just say what you think. I appreciate your help. Xxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Sounds like the lady would have no say in how the meet went

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Got halway through and decided to go back to my living room and watch my newly painted walls dry TOO LONG ! Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"Sounds like the lady would have no say in how the meet went "

Ok ok. Thanks x

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"Got halway through and decided to go back to my living room and watch my newly painted walls dry TOO LONG ! Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"

Cheers!

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By *ighland_RoseCouple
over a year ago

Brigadoon


"It's not bad I personally think u maybe just put to much detail into wat would/ wouldn't happen. X

Excellent! Thanks hun.

Everybody else agree with this?"

No everyone won't agree, I don't for a start. I think it's really nice to see a well written profile for a change. It gives a glimpse into your personality.

BTW I'm making these compliments even though I feel somewhat miffed at your preference for slim, small breasted women...shows I'm sincere and mature I think.

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By *ohnjones3210 OP   Man
over a year ago

Chester


"It's not bad I personally think u maybe just put to much detail into wat would/ wouldn't happen. X

Excellent! Thanks hun.

Everybody else agree with this?

No everyone won't agree, I don't for a start. I think it's really nice to see a well written profile for a change. It gives a glimpse into your personality.

BTW I'm making these compliments even though I feel somewhat miffed at your preference for slim, small breasted women...shows I'm sincere and mature I think. "

Thanks hun. I prefer to be expressive too but ill have to see what others say too.

Aww and I'm sorry about my preferences! Thanks so much!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

I like it. Definitely makes a nice change to read a well detailed profile and actually know what that person wants!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

For me was definitely one of the better ones.Yes it's long but so is mine.

And your getting meets so something's working for the effort you put in.

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By *leasures4Couple
over a year ago

East midlands

Well written, clear in what you want and delicious cock pic. Nice!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"Hi ladies,

I've just revamped/updated my profile. Please could you take a look and give me some feedback? I don't necessarily need positive feedback, but I'd welcome negative feedback as it will help me a lot.

Any help would be brilliant.

Thank you. Xxx"

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By *unloversCouple
over a year ago

rotherham

To long for me

I just like a quick bit of info and clear different pics and then we decide if we want to meet you

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