profile help please lady's

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Wud really appreciate your help to improve my profile does mine make me sound like a creep..lol..ty in advance hope you will help me av fun guys..x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Ive just read your text and I don't know what you want, except fun and controlling but safe cuddles.

It is a little confusing to read, it's as if there is no filter between what you think and what you type.

I think you'd do better to describe what you want and what you have to offer in a more simple yet direct approach.

Good luck

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By *oxy_minxWoman
over a year ago

Scotland - Aberdeen

Sorry but agree with the above, plus I am going to turn into the Nazi police!

Grammar goes a long way...use full stops and comma's it helps the reader, your profile block put's me off and yes, it wouldn't inspire me in the slightest

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As above poster says it's difficult to read because of the way it is structured. I hate the pointless use of lol.

It reads as if you are cheating and comes across quite desperate.

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks guys needed that kick up backside redoing it with help from friend which filters are on they say no filters on

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks again if u wouldn't mind having another look at new profile give me your opinion thanks again

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

After reading it earlier I can see you have altered it and it's improved. Good to see you have taken on board advice and done something about it.

Good luck and welcome to Fab

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