FabSwingers.com forum: Profile Critique Please!!

By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Hello Peeps,

Thought I'd put myself in the firing line and see what happens.

Profile critique please!?

Rob xx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Looks good...public pics would be a bonus for people to check out the goods, and a punch headline...oh and any chance you could move to Yorkshire

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Bland and pretty much instantly forgettable.

Really not keen on the bit about not being mental and not harrassing people, much like when people mention hygiene I wonder why someone would feel the need to highlight it

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

*punchy

Fucking hate this phone lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

A few pics in public would be a bonus, and get you noticed

And your bloody 400 miles away, just my luck lol

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
over a year ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

Your blurb is reasonable, but highlighting you are 100% genuine is pointless, as no one is going to say they are 80% genuine. Liven it up a bit by saying what you enjoy sexually but don't get too salacious. No public pics is a disaster, though.

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By *abioMan
over a year ago

Newcastle and Gateshead

"Hello Peeps,

Thought I'd put myself in the firing line and see what happens.

Profile critique please!?

Rob xx"

nope.... well not no... just not quite...

problem is going to be you ask a million people, you get a million answers...

you listen to everyone, the profile isn't you anymore.... its then a generic mess of what you think people want to hear and see....

basically, if you think it represents you in the best way you can... don't listen to anyone! just keep it

if you think it doesn't... just sit down...pen... paper... rewrite.... but still don't listen to anyone!!!

in the end of the day, the best person that knows you is you and the best person to be able to reflect you is you.... no one else!

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By *eeriseWoman
over a year ago

Manchester and that's all you need to know

Not even a picture on show!!!!!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"Hello Peeps,

Thought I'd put myself in the firing line and see what happens.

Profile critique please!?

Rob xx

nope.... well not no... just not quite...

problem is going to be you ask a million people, you get a million answers...

you listen to everyone, the profile isn't you anymore.... its then a generic mess of what you think people want to hear and see....

basically, if you think it represents you in the best way you can... don't listen to anyone! just keep it

if you think it doesn't... just sit down...pen... paper... rewrite.... but still don't listen to anyone!!!

in the end of the day, the best person that knows you is you and the best person to be able to reflect you is you.... no one else!

What he said!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

What they all said. Re new pics, not too many cock shots

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Haha! Clearly when I'm being myself I'm "Bland and pretty much instantly forgettable", well to some folk at least. Lol

@ Fabio & Obi Hav, I agree with what you're both saying, I'm not looking for someone else to put words in my mouth.. I'm just looking for some pointers e.g. your pics are no good, or you don't describe enough of what your looking for.

Anyway, looks like the general consensus is my pics need sorted and my patter is crap!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Maybe a public pic or 2, doesn't have to be a face pic, just something people will look for. It's not a bad profile , I've seen bad and in my opinion yours isn't bad, but that's just me.

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By *ohohoWoman
over a year ago

Up North

Nice bum. I would like to see more of it. Your profile pic is mainly your hand and phone.

But then again, what do I know. Mine is just of my lips.

I am a visual person so like to look at pictures xx

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

Thanks for all the advice...

I've made a few Tweeks, so feel free to comment.

Thanks,

Rob

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By *iss_tressWoman
over a year ago

London

"Bland and pretty much instantly forgettable.

Really not keen on the bit about not being mental and not harrassing people, much like when people mention hygiene I wonder why someone would feel the need to highlight it"

This!

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By *iss_tressWoman
over a year ago

London

"Hello Peeps,

Thought I'd put myself in the firing line and see what happens.

Profile critique please!?

Rob xx

nope.... well not no... just not quite...

problem is going to be you ask a million people, you get a million answers...

you listen to everyone, the profile isn't you anymore.... its then a generic mess of what you think people want to hear and see....

basically, if you think it represents you in the best way you can... don't listen to anyone! just keep it

if you think it doesn't... just sit down...pen... paper... rewrite.... but still don't listen to anyone!!!

in the end of the day, the best person that knows you is you and the best person to be able to reflect you is you.... no one else!

...and this!

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

I'm really sorry to say that I think your profile is very similar to many others. 100% genuine....etc.

Say what you like to do sexually, what you can offer, what's your USP? What are you good at? what don't you like? What sort of women do you like?

You see? If I'm asking all these questions, then they aren't being

answered and ladies might consider that answers to these questions and others like them might influence their decision on whether to contact you or not.

I think though, you have potential. Join in on the forums more and get yourself known in the chatrooms, go to some socials and clubs. Happy swinging!

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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago

"I'm really sorry to say that I think your profile is very similar to many others. 100% genuine....etc.

Say what you like to do sexually, what you can offer, what's your USP? What are you good at? what don't you like? What sort of women do you like?

You see? If I'm asking all these questions, then they aren't being

answered and ladies might consider that answers to these questions and others like them might influence their decision on whether to contact you or not.

I think though, you have potential. Join in on the forums more and get yourself known in the chatrooms, go to some socials and clubs. Happy swinging!

Cheers Steve, I suppose trying to appeal to as wide an audience as possible can be counter productive too. I've always thought that if someone liked the pics, they'd chat to find out more. Maybe I'm a little naive in that respect.

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By *rightonsteveMan
over a year ago

Brighton - even Hove!

Women tend not to be as visual as men. Their brains have more imagination though....so think on that conundrum.

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By *issBehavingxxWoman
over a year ago

Glasgow

Theres nothing actually "wrong" with it.... Theres just nothing that would make me want to contact / reply to it

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