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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Can you check my profile and see were in going wrong

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By *emmefataleWoman
over a year ago

dirtybigbadsgirlville

What makes you think you are going wrong?

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Cause I been on here over a year and finding it hard to get meets

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By *ucy and CarlCouple
over a year ago

Broadstairs

Looks fine. Make your free text about yourself a bit more interesting. Dropping words like "gunna cause". Paragraph it better making it more informative about you. Pics spot on.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Thanks

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By *edangel_2013Woman
over a year ago

southend

It makes very little sense.

It comes across as one big whinge about how you aren't getting the meets you expected. No punctuation makes it very difficult to read.

"If untreated get in touch?"

Is that supposed to be "interested"?

Sort out the text babe, the pics are great, but pics aren't always enough.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Get in touch if "untreated"???!! Think you mean "interested" hun! I agree re dropping things like "gunna" as slang can be off putting

x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Do you mean "if interested", you have put untreated

Nice pics x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Sorry that's perdiictive texts should of checked

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

Ok now changed that what U think now

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

That predictive text can get you in trouble some times!

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"That predictive text can get you in trouble some times!

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tell me bout it glad someone spoted it for me thanks

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You finding it hard to get meets but you been veried by 9 members at a social and most of them said they would meet you again.....get in touch with them then lol

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You have to work with what you have,

Not everyones cup of tea, but I know some will be attracted.

Just be patient x

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago

I do chat to them regular but they not looking for single guys at the moment

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x

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By *illwill69uMan
over a year ago

moston


"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x "

Remember that you are selling yourself in a market where there is a surfeit of single males, so lack of thought and detail will put a lot of people off.

Have a look at the example profiles and at other single male profiles (and read their feedback) and look to see how many verifications they have then spend some time building your own.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x "
just wrote it all again does it look better

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x "
just wrote it all again does it look better

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x just wrote it all again does it look better "

Lots of spelling mistakes hun, but that is just a thing for me that puts me off

x

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By *ollie_JCouple
over a year ago

London


"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x just wrote it all again does it look better "

No, never write profiles on a mobile.

Always check on the web version as your spacing becomes obvious.

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x just wrote it all again does it look better

Lots of spelling mistakes hun, but that is just a thing for me that puts me off hun there wasn't lots only 2 they now changed

x "

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Just a suggestion (though my spelling and punctuation is far from perfect I think I caught the typos but there were quite a few:

Hi there, I'm Dan.

I'm a nice, single, clean guy, with manners and respect.

I am not new to the swinging scene but I am still willing to learn and try new things. I am currently looking for a couple but not ruling out other offers.

If you would like to find out more about me feel free to ask.

Thanks for taking the time to read my profile and hope to hear from you all. xxxxxx

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"As previous poster said, check your punctuation as it reads like one whole paragraph so not easy to read

x just wrote it all again does it look better

Lots of spelling mistakes hun, but that is just a thing for me that puts me off hun there wasn't lots only 2 they now changed

x "

Hi there in Dan a nice single clean guy with manners and respect.i am not new to the swinging scene but I am still willing to learn and try new things .i am currently looking for a couple but not ruleling out other offers . if you would like to find out more about me fill free to ask. Thanks for taking the time to read my profile hope to hear from you all xxxxxx

"in" should be I am or I'm. "ruleling" should be ruling, "fill" should be feel and "i" should be I!!

x

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

You seem to be doing fine . Spelling mistakes are no big deal tbh for us .

A couple of cock pics would be nice

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Blimey you got more meets than me and I've been on here over a year mate so count your blessing

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By *riendly foeWoman
over a year ago

In a crisp poke on the A814


"Cause I been on here over a year and finding it hard to get meets

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Doesnt mean you are doing anything wrong...

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"You seem to be doing fine . Spelling mistakes are no big deal tbh for us .

A couple of cock pics would be nice "
I have cock pics in friends only

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By *riendly foeWoman
over a year ago

In a crisp poke on the A814

With the amount of verifications you have from meeting others at socials, I doubt very much the punctuation on your profile is holding you back....

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By (user no longer on site) OP   
over a year ago


"With the amount of verifications you have from meeting others at socials, I doubt very much the punctuation on your profile is holding you back...."
so what could it be

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By *riendly foeWoman
over a year ago

In a crisp poke on the A814


"With the amount of verifications you have from meeting others at socials, I doubt very much the punctuation on your profile is holding you back....

so what could it be "

Maybe the ones you have met at socials would be better answering that....

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago


"You seem to be doing fine . Spelling mistakes are no big deal tbh for us .

A couple of cock pics would be nice I have cock pics in friends only "

Well that's the point - it's a tough one for single guys on here and for us we prefer to see what's instore if we are gonna meet .

So if for example a last m8nute meet request was put up by a couple like us , you would miss out due to no pic

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