FabSwingers.com forum: Profile review request

By *uaveNights OP Man
2 days ago

Canvey Island

Hey all,

So I’m throwing myself at your mercy and request input on my profile.

Any thoughts on how to make it better? Anything to change? Keen to hear thoughts. 😊

By *izzy.Woman
2 days ago

Stoke area

"Hey all,

So I’m throwing myself at your mercy and request input on my profile.

Any thoughts on how to make it better? Anything to change? Keen to hear thoughts. 😊"

It's a good profile with a variety of photos and interesting text, so people reading get a clear indication of what you are like.

The only thing I would change is updating your age. You are 36 in one part and 37 in another.

I was unsure about the paragraph about your quiet confidence, it could appear that you are full of your own importance, but it will appeal to some people, far more than a shy and inexperienced person, so I dont think you should change it, if it represents you well.

By *uaveNights OP Man
2 days ago

Canvey Island

"Hey all,

So I’m throwing myself at your mercy and request input on my profile.

Any thoughts on how to make it better? Anything to change? Keen to hear thoughts. 😊

It's a good profile with a variety of photos and interesting text, so people reading get a clear indication of what you are like.

The only thing I would change is updating your age. You are 36 in one part and 37 in another.

It could, perhaps, be re-worded I think (the part about quiet confidence), but thank you! There’s some bits I’ve clearly missed.