FabSwingers.com forum: My profile

By *otherenow OP Man
2 weeks ago

Manchester

Hey guys, so, I get messages and replies but not really from the range I'm looking for. Can I get honest feedback or any improvements I could make?

Appreciate any and all replies

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By *issmorganWoman
2 weeks ago

Calderdale innit

Hi op, maybe specify the age you're after then, as you have 18 to 99 on there at the Min.So no indication of who you're tyring to attract.

The first 2 pics are v similar, maybe add some different sorts of pics. Also you don't really say much about what you're offering any potential meets. Some of your text is already written with body type and heavily tattooed.

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By (user no longer on site)
2 weeks ago

I agree with the above - Honestly it may seem petty or unfair, but the fact your second pic is a slightly blurry, different angled version of the first bum pic would put me off as it seems such an odd choice. If you are ‘straight’ then I wouldn’t lead with bum pics anyway, or at least have more of a variety alongside those ones.

Some of what you’ve written on the profile is good - your first two sentences are appealing (in my opinion anyway) but then you stray into waffle territory. Make the words you write here actually mean something real.

Good luck.

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By *harAndBryCouple
2 weeks ago

Downham Market

"Hey guys, so, I get messages and replies but not really from the range I'm looking for. Can I get honest feedback or any improvements I could make?

Appreciate any and all replies"

Considering you'll meet any age at all, I can only assume that when you say that you're getting messages not from "the range (you're) looking for" that it's single guys messaging?

If so, that'll be because (a) you've not set your message filters because you can block all single guys and (b) your two bum pics are very going to appeal to the guys looking for guys.

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By *inaTitzTV/TS
2 weeks ago

Titz Towers, North Notts

The blurb doesn't really show a lot of personality

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By *acavityMan
2 weeks ago

Redditch

Two bum pics? Out of three public pictures

When somebody has a load of dick pics, I assume that is what they are focusing on, their cock.

So mostly bum shots, I’d be assuming that you want attention paid to your bottom. No judgement, but if you’re hoping to get rimmed or pegged, say so.

And maybe describe what you are looking for, what you offer etc.

“Large and in charge” good start, but are you saying you are a bull? That’s a good niche role, but is it the right one?

Your profile is where you sell yourself.

Currently it is sending mixed messages.

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By *inkPomPomWoman
2 weeks ago

Isle of Man

From the photos I would assume you were looking for just men.. profile text is good though

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By *aandLoCouple
2 weeks ago

Southampton

Your photos aren't appealing to me. You don't need to get your cock out endlessly for the camera, but unless it's intended as letting everyone know you're fab straight, some variety is needed - browse guys profiles for inspiration.

Your bio is one rambling paragraph. Write a few short paragraphs to give us an insight into you, and what attributes you possess others might find attractive.

You have one positive veri so perhaps think about how, and why you two connected. Also. think about the good things she identified in you and the encounter.

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By *WB85Man
2 weeks ago

Staffordshire

Would you really fuck a 90 year old?

Make your profile and preferences more specific...someone that looks like they will fuck anyone isn't overly flattering.

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By *otherenow OP Man
2 weeks ago

Manchester

Thanks guys, appreciate the feedback, hopefully I've changed for the better

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By *andadbodMan
2 weeks ago

Liverpool

dunno what you had before but there’s nothing really to go off with your profile text, pics could do with being a bit clearer too.

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By *izzy.Woman
2 weeks ago

Stoke area

I always read profiles to see what people are looking for and see if we would have good chemistry.

Saying you know what you like is no help for anyone reading your profile. We dont know what you like

You need to put some facts to interest people,

so we know what meeting you would be like. Why should we take notice of a message from you, rather than someone else ?

Its like a we are walking down the high street, and if your profile is good, we might come and take a closer look to find out more. Currently...a lot of people would not be intrigued by your shop window and would carry on walking past.

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