FabSwingers.com forum: ok... criticize my profile! but say why!

By *ohnjones3210 OP Man
over a year ago

Chester

Hiya! I've just not long enhanced my profile...

I'm just looking for ladies or couples to give me some constructive criticism on my profile. You can say what you like about it if you like, but I'm after potential problems with it.. what's not good and why from a WOMAN'S point if view...

Any help will be brill. Xxx

Cheers in advance!

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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago

Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum

I think you mean 'decent' size, not 'descent' size.

Lose the first paragraph. If you don't want men messaging you then put your filter on.

Too many cock pics. The body pic is nice. Get some more of those up.

Regarding your note about people not replying: I am sure it is annoying, but is an inbox full of no's any better than no message? Also, Fabswingers FAQs state that 'no reply = no' so I would relax and follow that maxim. You can't force people to reply, and having that on your profile would make me not want to reply anyway. I'm just contrary like that though.

Apart from that it looks OK to me.

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

Why at the start about guys messaging you/gays.

Just block single men from messaging you. Problem solved.

Alot of lol in your profile. That's just a pet hate of mines. Though might amuse others.

Other than that you have got what your looking for etc across well.

The whole thing of woman not messaging back. Don't think you really need that on there.

But it's your profile, so write what you like.

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By *issy louWoman
over a year ago

Staffordshire Moorlands

'Lol' and 'haha' overload for me....I know you say youre a funny guy but you dont need to laugh at every sentence you write. The body pic is great. Cock pics not needed unless asked for. Otherwise a well written and amusing profile - you should do well

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By *ohnjones3210 OP Man
over a year ago

Chester

Cheers ladies!

much appreciated... Sometimes we just need a gentle push in the right direction! X

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By *ohnjones3210 OP Man
over a year ago

Chester

I've reduced lol and haha... I've got rid of the no gay paragraph. I've toned down the no reply bit too. Will sort pics soon. Cheers x

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By *inkershoes69Woman
over a year ago

maidstone

to many cock pics for me x

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By *yrdwomanWoman
over a year ago

Putting the 'cum' in Eboracum

"I've reduced lol and haha... I've got rid of the no gay paragraph. I've toned down the no reply bit too. Will sort pics soon. Cheers x"

Better now. Good luck!

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I've reduced lol and haha... I've got rid of the no gay paragraph. I've toned down the no reply bit too. Will sort pics soon. Cheers x"

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

too many cock pics and "LOL+hahaha". Amusing without them.

I don't care if you want my opinion by the way, you posted in an open forum!

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By *ohnjones3210 OP Man
over a year ago

Chester

Cheers everyone! X

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By *ENDAROOSCouple
over a year ago

South West London / Surrey

Thought your profile was very good....

But not so keen on your pics except the chest one.

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By *enithWoman
over a year ago

closer than you think

"I've reduced lol and haha... I've got rid of the no gay paragraph. I've toned down the no reply bit too. Will sort pics soon. Cheers x"

That's with the reduced lol and haha?? Sorry but still far too many, but that's just my opinion.

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By *am123Man
over a year ago

essex chelmsford

perhaps a pic of this big willy u talk of??, that might help

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By *ot - CoupleCouple
over a year ago

Glasgow

Whats with the car tax at the top of your profile?

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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago

"I've reduced lol and haha... I've got rid of the no gay paragraph. I've toned down the no reply bit too. Will sort pics soon. Cheers x

That's with the reduced lol and haha?? Sorry but still far too many, but that's just my opinion."

Yes my opinion too, I'd lose the bit about messaging and winks as we all know how it works. Other than that just a few more body pics would be great. Good luck

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By *llureWoman
over a year ago

London

"Hiya! I've just not long enhanced my profile...

Any help will be brill. Xxx

Cheers in advance!"

Lots of women have written they don't like cock pics but you still have them up there. We all know you're proud of him and get a kick out of seeing him publicly. However we know what one looks like and most women get nothing from being shown yet another engorged member. Think of your USPs to stand out from the crowd. Torso photo is good, keep face and appendage for those who request them.

You don't need !!! after every sentence!!! Haha!! Lol!! See? It makes you sound like a maniacal idiot who thinks he's funnier than he is and a conversation in person would be farcical rather than normal. Grant us ladies with the intelligence we were born with. We'd like to converse with you, not be given a second rate stand up routine. Take out all exclamation marks, hahas and lols. You can be amusing without them and your IQ will skyrocket. Straight men using smiley faces is simply wrong.

Don't comment about real life in your updates. We don't care about your car tax and it makes you sound like an accountant. Save it for Facebook, in fact better still, keep it to yourself. A dull person makes for a terrible meet.

The silly willy tag line makes you sound prepubescent. Keep it in if that's the aim.

Well done on spelling 'you're' correctly. That, and the more eloquent message you posted in the forum show there's an intelligent man underneath all the babble.

I hope you take this feedback in the spirit in which it's meant and wish you every luck on the site.

I'd laugh if you are actually an accountant.

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By *ohnjones3210 OP Man
over a year ago

Chester

"Hiya! I've just not long enhanced my profile...

Any help will be brill. Xxx

Cheers in advance!

The silly willy tag line makes you sound prepubescent. Keep it in if that's the aim.

Well done on spelling 'you're' correctly. That, and the more eloquent message you posted in the forum show there's an intelligent man underneath all the babble.

I hope you take this feedback in the spirit in which it's meant and wish you every luck on the site.

I'd laugh if you are actually an accountant."

Omg! What's wrong with accuntants? I studied for three years to get jip from you lot about how boring it is. Jeez. Lol!!! Joking. I'm a software developer.

You're quite a feisty one too! Anyway, I did ask for critisism. Haha!

I do want to reduce the cock pics but I've been busy and want to keep one on there but haven't decided which yet. I will do it and I am listening! I don't get a kick though. Infact or doesn't bother me either way.

Ok! Understood! I'll look into those later... Lol and haha and !!! Is obviously a big thing. That will definitely be sorted soon.

Thanks for your help again everyone! Xxx (including the guy asking about cock pics... I'll pm you the whole gallery mate! Haha)

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