FabSwingers.com forum: Ive updated my profile

By *rolific Offender OP Man
5 days ago

Cardiff

Im not good writing profiles and am a people person. Completely confident then so updated my profile again

Would appreciate your thoughts

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By *allySlinkyWoman
5 days ago

Leeds

I think people might not reply to your message if they think you are in Cambodia, Thailand or Vietnam.

Also if someone reads your profile and wants to message you expect them to start by says "let's play" which might be not what they want to do immediately.

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By *rolific Offender OP Man
5 days ago

Cardiff

I just changed my area totally missed that one and lets play lol 😆 thats gone.

Thanks

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By *inkys_profileWoman
5 days ago

Glasgow

Honestly? I skipped reading the whole thing. All I saw at the end was Quality over Quantity and thought straight away well you have just hit me with a shit load quantity of text in that profile 😳 Actions not matching words.

It is good to have information in a profile. That is wayyyyy too much. No one will read that whole journey of yours or be interested in such detail. Summarise that into a couple of paragraphs for a start. Just my opinion 🩷🩵

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By *eeshellsCouple
5 days ago

Reading

There's only one full stop within the large paragraphs. Sorry, can't be bothered to read that.

It looks more like a brain dump than an attempt to get us interested in you.

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By (user no longer on site)
5 days ago

Great discussion would value feedback on mine too

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By *rs BxxWoman
5 days ago

Chippenham, Wiltshire.

Wow that's hard going, didn't get past the first paragraph. Go through and put some punctuation in.

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By *harAndBryCouple
5 days ago

Peterborough / Stamford

Lose the two close up dick pics, they're not doing you any favours at all and the full length nude you have does show you off nicely. The other pics are fine and give a good indication of what you're like.

Definitely re-do the text. There's a lot of it that doesn't really say much about you unfortunately. It's also very, very hard to read and seems more like a stream of consciousness than a thought out profile.

(Bry)

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By *ardigan SpiceWoman
5 days ago

Cardigan/Aberystwyth

Ouch - it's just too long - do we really need your whole life history?!

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By *eroLondonMan
5 days ago

Mayfair

I really - and genuinely - don't know where to start. You talk a lot on your profile narrative but you actually say very little. In one regards it reads like a travelogue, peppered with acronyms and abbreviations that I don't understand, and then it also reads like an insipid sexual manifesto.

You've got verifications that would be the envy of most men, your graphic videos clearly demonstrate that you're doing just fine. So does it really matter? I have no idea.

But...from one gentleman to another: I found the profile wholeheartedly boring. Sorry, OP. ❣️

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By *uenevereWoman
5 days ago

Scunthorpe

Sorry, I just couldn't read it.

There's virtually no punctuation at all. Maybe use Word or something similar to sort the spelling, grammar and punctuation before copying it to Fab.

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By *ucy loo43Woman
4 days ago

kettering

I must admit I looked at your profile. Started to read it and thought not for me. All I saw was you waffling on and I lost interest. Short sweet and to the point is what’s needed. That’s my opinion 💋 Happy Fabbing

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By *rownsugar-69Man
4 days ago

north

could you critique / give me feedback too lol. i've just joined

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By *assy LassieWoman
4 days ago

Lanarkshire

So you're a top shagger and banged loads of women. Can't be bothered with messaging. Women queue up for you in clubs. Aye OK quality over quantity. 🤣🤷‍♀️🤣

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By *urphy44Man
4 days ago

in the middle

"could you critique / give me feedback too lol. i've just joined

The only feedback i could possibly give is don’t use pictures taken from porn sites on your profile (can 23rd picture)

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By *harAndBryCouple
4 days ago

Peterborough / Stamford

"could you critique / give me feedback too lol. i've just joined

The only feedback i could possibly give is don’t use pictures taken from porn sites on your profile (can 23rd picture)"

This! Reverse image search is a thing.

(Bry)

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By *issmorganWoman
4 days ago

Calderdale innit

I'm guessing the first bit of your bio means you'll pay a lady for sex, if you're not getting any from fab. That contradicts quality over quantity you've put further down & says you want sex and any sex will do.

Tbh without sounding awful, the whole bio reads as a brag about how good you are and how many women wanted you.That's quite off putting.

We don't need your full swinging CV op it's too long , just a bit about what you actually like and offer, not what you think you should write instead.

The pics are good, just the writing needs cutting down and making simpler.

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By *obdukesMan
4 days ago

small village

Love when men ask for advice on there profiles !

The women on here are cut throat it’s hilarious!

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By *izandpaulCouple
4 days ago

merseyside

Seems like an incoherent ramble containing lots of bad language.

Lots of words with very little meaning.

Not doing yourself any favours.

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By *obdukesMan
4 days ago

small village

"Seems like an incoherent ramble containing lots of bad language.

Lots of words with very little meaning.

Not doing yourself any favours.

Don’t paint everyone with the same brush thats just my comments on here !

Sorry should I take this thread more seriously?

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By *electableicecreamMan
4 days ago

The West

Yeah i read about three lines and gave up.

It's a stream of consciousness.

If writing isn't your strong point then copy and paste your bio into ChatGPT and ask for to correct grammar and punctuation and to shorten it down to the main points.

You can ask it to keep your writing style

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By *obdukesMan
4 days ago

small village

"Yeah i read about three lines and gave up.

It's a stream of consciousness.

If writing isn't your strong point then copy and paste your bio into ChatGPT and ask for to correct grammar and punctuation and to shorten it down to the main points.

You can ask it to keep your writing style"

it’s needed ! Appreciate buddy

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