FabSwingers.com forum: Rate the profile

By *anPsurreycouple OP Couple
9 weeks ago

Surrey

How is our profile? Does it need a complete overhaul? a few tweaks? Or just left as it is?

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By *andPextraCouple
9 weeks ago

North West

A very picky point, lose some of the exclamation marks.

Makes the profile more shouty than it’s intended to be I’m sure.

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By *anPsurreycouple OP Couple
9 weeks ago

Surrey

Very valid point after reading it again I can see exactly what you mean by this.

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By *anPsurreycouple OP Couple
9 weeks ago

Surrey

Profile can't be that bad then

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By *enk15Man
9 weeks ago

Evesham

Good variety of pictures, profile explains what you are looking for

Maybe insert a bit of personality into it so it stands out from other couples profiles?

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By *carlettxWoman
9 weeks ago

Essex

Lots of photos , well constructed text

Nothing you really need to change at all

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By *eroLondonMan
9 weeks ago

Covent Garden

8½ out of 1️⃣0️⃣. Forthright, assured, and she knows exactly what she desires. A wholesome profile.

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By *entenTeaCouple
9 weeks ago

Buckley North Wales

That is a good easy to read profile that gets to the point clearly and succently. It also thankfully uses concise clear paragraphs, rather thsn a solid block of text as all to often assails the eye.

A minor (and most probably pedantic) point that jumps out is how the tense changes. You mention Sam in a,first party tense "Sam my wife ect" then switch to your self in a third party tense. This felt a bit jarring.

You could possibly mention which clubs you frequent.

The photos are excellent and most appropriate. Honestly there is not much amis here.

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By *ickD80Man
9 weeks ago

Wolverhampton

You state that Pete is 5’10” and Sam is 5’9”….so Sam’s just one inch shorter than Pete. In your pictures there’s one of you kissing each other with Sam in a red outfit and she’s about 1” shorter than Pete but then there’s a photo of Sam wearing exactly the same outfit in exactly the same room but in this photo we can see that Sam’s wearing a pair of high heels that are about 3 or 4 inches high. So if Sam’s nominal height is 1” less than Paul’s, why is she still 1” shorter than Paul when she’s wearing heels that are at least 3” tall?

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By *anPsurreycouple OP Couple
9 weeks ago

Surrey

"You state that Pete is 5’10” and Sam is 5’9”….so Sam’s just one inch shorter than Pete. In your pictures there’s one of you kissing each other with Sam in a red outfit and she’s about 1” shorter than Pete but then there’s a photo of Sam wearing exactly the same outfit in exactly the same room but in this photo we can see that Sam’s wearing a pair of high heels that are about 3 or 4 inches high. So if Sam’s nominal height is 1” less than Paul’s, why is she still 1” shorter than Paul when she’s wearing heels that are at least 3” tall?"
if you look closer you will see I'm on a step ladder

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By *ickD80Man
9 weeks ago

Wolverhampton

"You state that Pete is 5’10” and Sam is 5’9”….so Sam’s just one inch shorter than Pete. In your pictures there’s one of you kissing each other with Sam in a red outfit and she’s about 1” shorter than Pete but then there’s a photo of Sam wearing exactly the same outfit in exactly the same room but in this photo we can see that Sam’s wearing a pair of high heels that are about 3 or 4 inches high. So if Sam’s nominal height is 1” less than Paul’s, why is she still 1” shorter than Paul when she’s wearing heels that are at least 3” tall? if you look closer you will see I'm on a step ladder "

If you were on a step ladder you’d be about a foot taller than her as that’s about how high the bottom rung of a step ladder is. If you’re still only 1” taller than her while stood on a step ladder then it means the bottom rung is only 3 or 4 inches off the floor which would make the step ladder non standard and unsafe. The rungs on any ladder need to be equally spaced including the distance from the bottom rung to the floor.

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By *anPsurreycouple OP Couple
9 weeks ago

Surrey

Noted. I will report it to trading standards immediately

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By *ickD80Man
9 weeks ago

Wolverhampton

"Noted. I will report it to trading standards immediately "

You asked for comments…if you can’t take criticism don’t ask for it.

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By *ength300Man
9 weeks ago

Whitton

I think you're profile is straight to point. Feel like it could be written with more personality. I wouldn't mind if you had a look at mine

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By *rsKOTCTWoman
9 weeks ago

Leeds

Decent profile op, the pics are more centred around the woman some more of the man or together would be good.

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By *cnugatugMan
9 weeks ago

Chatham

Honestly id leave it as is.

Great photos a good bio and not an essay id rate it a 9 easily one of the better profiles around

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By *urreyphotographerMan
9 weeks ago

kt16

Wow Nick …. Bet you’re fun at a Party.

I actually took the photo and I can vouch what was said .

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By *wendolineFoxWoman
9 weeks ago

Chester

This thread has properly cheered me up this morning!

Gwendoline. (5’7’’ or 8’6’’ when balancing on the top of a safety-certified stepladder. Not wearing heels, clearly, that would be madness.)

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